Llime -Any fanfiction with sexual overtones, which can include everything up to actual sex. No graphic sexual situations are described.

Lemon - Any fan fiction containing graphic sexual situations that are described.
OOC - Out of Character. When a canon character acts in such a way as to be totally contrary to what they would in the series.

PWP-a lemon fanfic with only the sexual activity being described with no other reason

O.M.F.G. i just finished your story. IM IN LOVE! noo jk but that was like awsome. during the end i like started to cry a lot cuz of all the emotions but MAN ur a good writer. once i become an author im going to recomend this storyy. oh yea and please dont give me a cantalope *shows other fruits* i have enough :]

I loved this fanfic! Though there were times when the story dwindled, at the end I thought it was beautiful. I love the thought of Kagome and Sesshomaru along with Rin ebign a family in the future ^__^ Keep up the great work!

aw, yey! this story was awesome. i love how you've ended it and brought our dear Sesshy back as a human. he sounds ridiculously gorgeous.
yeah, it would've been nice to see Rin's reaction, but this way it ends with us hoping for the best in their new life together.
it's very rare that a story makes me tear up, but this one did... especially when Sesshy died. I'm very glad that they get a second chance.
Thank you so much for sharing your story with us. It takes guts to post the first chapter, then a lot of time to finish a story... so thank you for finishing the story the way you did. it was very romantic and sweet.
I look forward to reading something else by you in the future. Please don't keep us waiting too long, your talent is too good to be denied for long.

haha, somewwut amusing that kikyou is a she/he or he/she X3

that was a great story better than great but i loved it and skip anyone who didn't like it, that was fantastic loved it waiting 4 another one

Oh yay! And he's human so there will be none of that, she dies WAY before him crap. And now they all look like each other! X3 Oh! A sexy complete opposite of a Sesshoumaru-human? Quite sexy. Was he still pale? I might have run over that description!!! I can't wait until Rin finds out. Oh well. At least they had there time alone together before she comes romping in. Yay yay yay!! 3

P.S. Your daughter's name is too adorable!!! X3

The ending was wonderful! I can't believe it's over. I hope to see you again sometime.

That was AWESOME!!! This is the first story that I have finished that wasn't already complete when I started, and I flipped out when I saw you updated the LAST chapter! I like the end of this alot. I hope that you have a new story out soon! (???) :)

Oh...my...God! *starry eyes* This has got to be one of the most beautiful and romantic lemons I've ever read. It was so full of feelings and passion...you could almost feel the love in the air! Wonderful! Marvelous! *claps*

If only more people write like you do. Without the over enthusiastic anatomy lessons which always make me want to go 'ick!' and skip a few pages (and thus the lemon). Without the vulgar words which always make me gag and groan!

*ahem* Anyway...wonderful story...wonderful build-up until the climax (no pun intended) and wonderful portrayals. I'm glad that Sesshoumaru was human in the end - equal lifespans equals happy rbk! No matter how they're written out!

The end was great, realy realy great.
I hope as well to see you soon with another story.
For now bye bye.

WAAAAAAh, so sweet!! SO Great1!!! I dunno what to say^^And I can't believe it's the end!!! It was such a great FF, with such an emotional, sweet end!!!! I love it!!!^^

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!!OMG!!!OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!M!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!

*sob* Only one more chapter....and it isnt there! T_T I hope you update soon, this story is very well done and has me completely captivated. *nodnod*

Oh! I mourn with Kagome and Rin. I felt heartbroken when even Rin started to doubt herself. She's supposed to be the light of all things! And Kagome's gotta keep a little more faith. Was that dog-wolf thing Kouga...or Sesshoumaru!?! I can't wait!!! *squee* X3

more more write more and make a great ending pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase

OMG u so need to update i LOVE it i NEED to read more PLEASE UPDATE SOON

OMG! You can't just end it like that. It's not fair. Please update soon. Even though everyone has a pretty good idea who it is please post the next chapter soon.

Waa...! Wow..I think I would scream also!!! It's a great chappie( Like a present to me, cuase I passed the theorytest for drivingliscence today*doeshappydancing* *g*)Is it Sessh? I mean, when the sword obeys...? Pleeaase update soon!! I wanna know!^^

Wow! Only one more chapter. I thought this was the last chapter so I was surprised when I got to the end of it! I hope you update soon.

omg this story is AWESOME please put up the next chapter soon now u left me in suspense i fell asleep @ 2 in the morning reading the story please!!!!! ^.^

this is the bets fan-fic i have read so far.i could picture everything as it was really happening.not to mention i cried a river at the end.please continue with the story.its going to be hard sleeping wondering what might happen.i love it so much.so i beg u continue

Hehehe You mean one.
Who was there? Don't tell me, don't tell me. It was Sesshoumaru. he there I told you :P.
Please update soon.

hahaha! i was about ready to scream bloody murder at you for ending it like that! i love this story... who knew split personalities could be so fun?
well, you obviously.
anyway, i am anxiously awaiting the next bit because you ended it so evilly. there better be gooey fluffiness or i'll begin looking for sharp things as well.
:-D haha, not really. *nods* well, hope you have a happy wednesday!
Morning

OMG!!!! Its Sesshy, right?!?! It HAS to be!!!!!! ARGH!!! YOU ARE EVIL!!!!!!! You're lucky I forgot my machete at the library today!!!! *screams in frustration*

Hmm Sesshoumaru is dead?
You are so mean with Kagome, I cry for her heart.
Hope you will revive him soon, so the story might go on.

ok i read this and the end made me cry.Are there going to be any more chapters to this or is this the end? it was awsome.

I'm baaack!!! (I went away remember? No, *sigh* oh well) What's better than coming home after a month away to a bunch of new fanfiction chapters for one of your favorite stories? NOTHING!!! I am SOOOO glad that I got back in time for the ending though. I know it will be worth the wait. I hope that you update soon! I hope that you write more fanfiction if this next chapter truly is the last because.... well... YOU TOTALLY ROCK!

wow....this is....i'm crying over here

PLEASE tell me you're going to write the next chapter soon! I was bawling my eyes out. Now im going to be depressed until you write the next chapter. Thanks! Lol! But seriously, it's an awesome story and completely original. Im really REALLY picky about which fics i read and i am NOT regretting this one!

aaw...hehe..I'm here^^Sry, even though we#ve vacations, there'e a lot of things to do-.-'''
the chappie was great again! WHen Rn and Kagome hugged and Kagome crieed, that was sooo sad, but you've written it very good! Rin' such a cute kid^^
I hope Sessh can come back very soon! But will Kagome see her old friends again, too??
=)

; . ; chapter 36 made me cry. i cant wait for more though! ^-^

yey! *does happy dance* i feel all special and loved!
and i must say, while i still don't like the idea of Sesshomaru being 'dead'...
i love how Rin knows just what to say to cheer our Kags up. and i just know that Kagome's mom is going to love her.

now, since you granted my request i will sit patiently and wait for more. ^_~
thanks hun!
::glomps::
Morning

What happened to Shippo?

*pulls out machete and hurls it at you* NOOOOO!!!!!!! *throws baseball bat* WHY *Tosses knife* ARE *hurls frying pan* YOU *throttles your monkey* SOOO *Hurls computer at you* EVIL?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! *gives 39 lashes with Whip* ARGH!!!!! Sic her Fluffy!!!!!!
You are so MISSY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ARGH!!!!!!!

I apologize, my other personality got a hold of the keyboard. It won't happen ag- ARGH!!!!! I will rip out your effing SPLEEN!!!!! Muahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm still going to kill you.

I wsould just like to make it clear, that this is NOT a flame, I am merely frustrated (Yo liar!!! You cannot cage me forever!!!! Muahahaha!!) I promise nit to inflict bodily harm on you, if you give us the promised lemon, NOW!!!!


Bye!!!!

yay, finally Naraku is dead!!
But Sessh..he'll not survuve it..ne? Aw, but he will be resurrected, won't he??? Plzplz update verysoon!!!^^

*melts into a puddly mess of sadness and goo*
You can't do that! WAH! i actually started blubbering and nothing made sense... you can't kill him off... *cries*
ok, i love this story and request more.
and i love how Sesshomaru made her fight off Naraku, or course Kagome will succeed once you make her mad enough!
anyway, i'm gonna tell you right now what i'd like for my birthday... more of this story!! *cheesy grin*

well, you can't blame a girl for trying.

Sorry for my absence! I read the chapters today. They are sooo good. Thank you.
Please update.

it was good. I started to cry!

Mama is so proud of her baby! That was a great chapter inspite of the sad overtones. I was feeling the pain and the hope in this chapter. I hope in the next chapter that Kagome can at least get rewarded for all her hard work. I am sad to have the story end it was very entertaining and I also enjoyed our banter back in forth. Your a great writer and I look forward to reading more of your work. You even put this chapter out quickly! I am proud of you! Well until the next chapter! GO GET SOME SLEEP! ")

First, let me say the story is awesome. I sat here and read the entire thing. Finally, please don't take this the wrong way, but, damn it, Y-O-U CANNOT KILL HIM! The kamis better save his butt or for some type of miracle to happen because you cannot do that to him, to Kagome, their hearts, their souls. Just the idea makes me cry, I mean actually cry and I'm not talking about feeling like crying, I'm talking about genuine heartfelt tears. It is soooo unfair. I don't care what you do, turn him into a god, have someone make the wish for Kagome's happiness, have Kagome all of a sudden wake and save him or maybe even Nadia. Just, plz, plz, plz, I beg you do not kill him. If I were Kagome, I could not bear the fact he is gone after the ups and downs, the struggles, the sacrifices, the battles that were fought with their heart and soul to lose the one you love. What was the point of winning the fight agains Naraku? What was the point of fighting to be Kagome and not Nadia? What was the point of acceptance? If at the end she lost her soulmate. Please consider my wishes. I'm sure I'm not the only one out there who feels the same.
Arigato

is this story gonna have sad ending? sob sob

is this story gonna have sad ending? sob sob

Great chapter but you really do suck for the cliffy. That means you will have to update reall soon. I am not a pretty hooker but am one hot B*tch! I will miss you girl but that just means you will just have to start writing another story or you can just shoot me a personal email it is not like you don't have it already!LOL

I completely understand! It just, happens. Just like I don't know where the oreos went, they just..... disappeared. Anywho, the chapter was awesome! Kagome would so do something like that! Kudos and brownie points to you!

He somewhat knew Naruka was in Kikyous hoes body!!

Yes i enjoy the movie

*Sends out a serch party in hopes of finding Fluffysgirl? and forcing her to finish the story*
Just kidding!
*Dogs pick up scent and start baying *
Or am I???
Anyhow, please finish soon.

yaaay!! Sess save Kagome!! P.S. Godan was truly hideous-- what a great monster

Sesshoumaru is suuuuch a tease!!
hehe... but i liked that chapter a lot. The way you resolved the Inuyasha, Kikyo, Kagome thing was masterfully done.

oh ouch Sesshoumaru.. ouch. That was painful. Why did you have to go and say a thing like that to Kagome-- you know you like her ;)

I love the line 'her spiritual aura made night turn to day' what a cool image!!

Whoo hoo, Kagome and Nadia are awesome!!

Poor Sesshoumaru-- it sounds painful. I hope Kags can heal him

Nadia-- nice name! I wonder where it comes from thought. Why did you choose Nadia?

hehehe I can't wait to find out about Kag's personality switch

holy crap! Kags doesn't recognize Sesshoumaru!! Oh no!

Wow great first two chapters!! So Kags soul is going to awaken? And Naraku doesn't want that to happen... hmmm interesting... very interesting.

I love how Sesshoumaru saved the day-- cool imagery!

Wow! This was a pretty good chapter inspite of the cliffy. I liked the twist you did and I am glad I expected correctly that you were up to something. I looked forward to reading how this plays out. Yor G-Dog is going to let you slide since this was a good chapter. The morning thing was a low blow because I am BEAUTIFUL DA**IT! LOL ")

O.O After reading everything up to your last update, I am proud to say this is a great fanfic. Although I just can back from ridding myself of the anger that arose from finding I had no more to read just yet, I think me saying 'please write again soon' is going to come up whether or not that happens. Can't wait to read the next chapter. ^.^

Wow. I didn't see that coming. Tetanus is for sissies,.....and those who don't want to die. Good job. Update ASAP.

Kagome what the hell are you doing?? Oh No one saw that coming!!

Sesshoumaru knew didn't he

The movie was GREAT!! I mean REALLY GOOD!!
But I dont think I'll be keeping my eyes on HIM. I might be laughing the most.

Today I was supposed to be writing a lemon for my story 'Violation of Honor', but instead I spent the day reading yours. I think that it was a day well spent. I know that you are new to the fandom and your questions about things reminded me of my first days joining the guild of Sess/Kag writers. I would be happy to answer any questions you may have to help you along. You are doing a great job with your story. It actually surprised me that this is your first. It is well written and nicely planned. You've done a good job of keeping the characters in character - even when Kagome was under the influence of Nadia. Some of the spellings were off, but that is understandable. Just do like I did and start a notebook that you collect data in for reference while you write. I still use mine all the time. You might try places like Inuyashaworld.com for names and spellings. As for the fanfiction jarga, you can go to Adultfanfiction.net and check out their story codes under FAQ in the main title bar. They list EVERYthing there. That is where I post my naughtier Sess/Kag stories. I love ASSpark too, but some of my stuff can get a little racy. Most everyone in the Inuyasha fanfiction world is very nice and more than willing to offer help. By the way, if you still need a little guidence with the Italics and Bold scripting, just email me. I was just as clueless as you at first, so I'm sure that I can explain it. I would like to encourage you to continue writing Sess/Kag stories (selfishly so that I will have some juicy well written stories to read), but also because you do have talent, and the more you write, the better you'll get. I look forward to reading what you come up with in the future, as well as the remainder of 'To Live is to Love'. Until then... Ja ne! (bye!)

wonderful story! I can't wait for the update. tootles! ^_^

This was very good. I have it in my head that I can't be affected by any sadness in this story now because you said there would be a happy ending. But, that didn't work. I almost cried during this one.

GRRR!!!!!!! *Tosses machete* If you hurt one hair on his pretty boy head, I will hunt you down, and gut you like the lfip-flopping fish that you are!!!! Take that Mr. Burnes!!!

*cries* Yay!!!!! *sniffle* *happy dance* God, I'm so confused.
I remember what you told me about how you were going to end it, but it DOESN'T MAKE ANY FUCKING SENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I!!!!!! DON'T!!!!!!! GET IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope you get eaten by a giant hairball *cough* even though, I would no longer be able to laugh at your expense. I'm such a great friend, aren't I?

lol. Dont Sulk. I click this when I first got on the net. I was checking to see if you updated and you DID!!

So happy but Harry Potter is IMPORTANT!! I'm a loyal fan.

;)

Girl you are tooo crazy! I was on vacation but I didn't forget about my homey! You still are crazy as ever. This was kinda a depression chapter but I have a feeling that you are setting us up for failure. I think that everthing that you hinted at is not going to happen. What author in their right mind will let us know what is going to happen at the end of the story. But wait you never was in your right mind. By the way that cat comment is going to get you to know first hand what a bat in the face feels like! LOL ") Until next chapter don't get bit by Cujo!

I just love this story. I have never love a story as i have loved this one.

Thank you for putting that there will be a happy ending because after that last line i kind of started freaking out!

A knife?? I don't own knifes! (My mother does) If i'll just put an finger on a knife that finger is bleeding, soo I can't throw at you any knife cause first i'll be dead (I am realy terible with knifes-you don't want me to hold one, that I can asure you).
Anyway I realy enjoyed this chapter and I am glad that you promised to update more often.
Please keep that promise.

*grabs knife* Hm, me likey!!!! Muahahahahahahaha!!!!!! I hope you realize just how infinitely evil you are, if you aren't, I'll sic that purple fucker on you again. I borrowed *cough* the tensaiga, and, ya know, with you not talking to me for two days, I might have to do somthing drastic if you don't get the next BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP chapter out!!! Muahahahahah-*cough* *gargle* glug.

At first I thought, hmmm oh, another one of those split personality/reincarnated demon princess/most powerful warrior priestess Midoriko stories. Boy, did you ever prove me wrong. Thank you! This has been a real treat to read. You have a definite way with words, and your descriptions have a such a deliberate voluptousness in spots.... gorgeous! Well done. Can't wait for me.

Yes the chapter was short but I will forgive you this time. I will even keep my bat to myself as long as the next couple of chapters are longer. Even though the chapter was short as always I enjoyed reading it.

I guess I can reply now:

THIS STORY IS THE BEST!!!

I think I replyed before but i forgot. So anyway


Keep up the good. Work. If you add please add before July 11 because harry Potter comes out.

lol

Yay! He's back! *runs around chasing imaginary tail and doing flips* I'm so happy! I liked this chapter. Her whistling is so Kagome. I often sing that song actually. It usually ends with me getting hit over the head.

Oh good he's back!! For a second, I couldn't believe that everyone just died off. He's back, he's back! X3 I'm happy....*squee!*

Yo!! Waz up with my fave authoress today? OMG!!! Sesshy's back!! Oodles and oodles of happiness!!!! Yay!! I can't wait for the next chappie...*suggestive wink* come on, give us some citrus girl!!! I'm sooo sorry I didn't read the update until just now, pwease don't be mad!! I'll tell you why, AFTER you email me!!!!! Bye, and once again, this story ROX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hehehe.... retarted fish... that was goood. Anyway I think anyone of us will be a retarted fish if a person you love and think is dead is coming from the deads and start to make jokes.
I can hardly wait to see what is going to happen next.
AAAA and stop apologyzing for short chapters this is your story and you are in title to write it the way you want and the way you can.
Next: please update as soon as you can (short chapter or long chapter-it doesn't mater).

another great chapter~

Yay!!!!!(jumping up and down). Sesshy is back. Please update soon.

I did like this chapter a whole lot better because it was not so gloomy as you stated. I look forward to reading what happened to Sess and how he shows Kagome how much he missed her. By the way I love you too! And I have not forgot about the bat! It just I have not needed to use it lately but if you like I can bring it back! ") LOL

Alright, here's the deal, you have my permission to cut out m eyes wuth a razor blade, then sell me into slavery to the Chinese mafia after shoving a jarfull of flesheating ants and taping it for youtube (Anybody else love Foamy? Woot!!!) if youu want to. I am sooo sorry I didn't read this chappie earlier!!!! I know I told I would, and I really regret it, this chappie was awesome!!! I loved it!!! Blood, Guts, and Gore!!!!!!! Muahahahahahaha!!!!!!

Wow. Way to put a burden on a girl's shoulders. The fate of the world depends on you, but no pressure. I like though. I am taking solice in the fact that Sesshoumaru can't possibly be dead, cause otherwise, I may just have to throw my computer out the window.

Long time, no see you.
I hope you recover your muse and he is going to put you to work.
This chapter was realy nice (you left an cliffie there-you mean one) and please update.

Sess-chan better not be dead. *Wait, you say he isn't?* Oh my well with that said, good story. LOL

YOU ARE SOOOOOOOO EVIL! Even though no one can touch me if i didn't decide to review this last chapter I figured that I will take the high road instead of the low road in which you have taken. Your humor never ceases to amaze me! I am glad to see you are back in rare form but you do know this means war and that you should be very afraid! LOL ") On another note this chapter through me off. It was like a curve ball. I got what where you was going but the processes in getting there was little hard to understand. I figure in the next chapter, which shoud be very soon since I reviewed will clear things up for me. Until next time watch your back! LOL

OMG!!!!! Wow, this tory is getting darker, and I think that that chappie ruled!!!!! I know its been a while, but you know why and I know you'd NEVER hold it against me. Right? Right, because as far as I know, Fluffy was answering to ME (boo-ya!) last time I checked so, without further ado, I present to you, the amazing *whistles* FLUFFINATOR!!!!!
*hm, maybe I shouldn't describe what this looks like*
Anyway, you're still doin an awesome job and if your computer crashes, I'll sic my flying llama on it!!!!
Ja Ne!!!!

Hehehe.... computer problem "sigh". I know what you feel (damn tehnology, but this is what unite us).
Anyway I love your new chapter and I hope you will win your batle with your computer so that you can update more often.

I must say, Wow!

I liked how you had Sessh show restraint in the lemon a few chapters back.

But, how evil to have her happiness torn away so abruptly. Sure didn't see that coming.

Can't wait to see what has happened to our favorite dog.

And didn't we all know Kagome could be dangerous if properly provoked. 5 miles! Darn! Maybe she was the cause of the demon extinction.

Great story, Keep up the good work.

Oh no! What happend? CRAP! I am leaving for a month to a place w/no Internet acsess and u leave me with a cliffe? AHHH!!! I am sure the wait will be worth it!

Thanx,
SS

Wow, not a nice end for this demon..so what happened to Sesshomaru? Is he wounded bad or something?Really big explosion Kagome made..I hope she'll be fine after that..and that Sessh masters this way he must do...Hope you'll update soon =)

As always this chapter was well worth the wait. I never know what to expect from you when I read your chapters and I love that about your writing as well as your sense of humor. I hope the computer demons break their hold on your computer! Maybe you might want to seek the help of a priest! LOL Anyways this was a great chapter and I was sad that it was not more to read. You know we are always harder on ourselves when it comes to are work. So leave yourself alone and I put in a prayer for your computer!

NOOOOO!!!!! YOU MUST UPDATE!

AHHH! You can't stop there! That was a cliffie of epic proportion. Update soon or I might have a heart attack! LOL! This was a great chapter even if it WAS a cliffie AND really depressing. Please keep up the good work!

SS

oh she's P.Oed and gonna kick some ass I can tell! haha, love it as usual.

*tosses pillow at Sess* bad poochie, leaving kagome all alone.
ooo... Kagome gets to kick some ass. this should be good. *pops some popcorn*
alright... i'm ready.
what? you mean i have to wait? *sigh* fine... you're lucky i love this story. ^_^
please update soon! thank you muchly!

Waah..poor Kagome..First such sweeet Moments, and then Sessh leaves, and now this youkai?! I hope Sessh will come back soon..and I'm curious wh this youkai is, and what she'll do to him
I'm soo curious whats going on, and you stop there..!!! Thats not fair!^^
Plz update again soon=)

DONT YOU DARE STOP THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-crys-KAGOME!!!

damn you sesshoumaru

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I really enjoyed the little twist you put into the story and I really look forward to reading more about this twist. This story is really starting to get good. You need to hurry up and fix your computer because I miss your funny little comments! LOL ")

Dun dun dun. I lurv it! You mean it does't help to curse at the computer when it doesn't work? Eh...no wonder. lol

This story is awesome! I know that you just updated it alittle while ago, but I want more! Please??? (Insert puppy eyes here. Pun intended!) Seriously though, you have some very deticated readers. I found this on recommend fics. It was mentioned repeatedly, so I thought I'd try it and I am so glad that I did. Update soon!!!

SS

i always saw this being updated when i would look for something to read but i never clicked on it until now and i have to say that you have out done your self your writing is awsome and easy to read nice plot... what else could i say lol just great job and hope you will be able to update soon

aww... i like it. it's a little Key Lime Pie. and he's so cute at the end.

wait! *reads back* she lost her shard? *rereads last chappie* :-D* i'm sorry... who was hard? *blush* umm...
i seem to have lost my brain.
anyway... please update soonish.

Aaaw, that was just soo sweet!!! I love it so much! The way, Sessh behaved, and the last words he spoek, soo sweet!!!!!
plz update soon!!! =)

Freaks I tell you lmao. Add again soon

But damn that was realllllllly good. Why she get in fully clothes if he was going to take it off?

OI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was short!!!!!!! DAMN YOU!!!!!!!!!!1 -shivers- Sesshoumaru kisses. lmao@ the reply man it would be soooooo GOOD if Kagome beat kikyou hoe up man. Inuyasha a shit bag.

-coughs-

Okay, I'm worried now!!!! Are you hinting that you are going to force her back into the modern day and leave her there? Or through some strange twist of fate, is she going to either stay in this era, or meet him in the next? I wanna know!! Waaaaa!!!!!!!! *uncontrollable sobs* WTF!!! *uncontrollable giggles* OMG! Maybe the funny farm isn't such a bad idea, I hear they have good chicken sandwhiches...

Hehehehe....... That was a good diversion. I am not mad, but I want to see who took the shard and what is going to happen next (there I now how to spell next :) ).

I absolutely love your story! Everytime I log on I look to see if you've updated. Keep up the good work!

I like the turn of events that happened in this chapter. I didn't even notice the age difference until you mention it. However, it would not matter her age becasue he will always be like 700 years older than her. She could be 18 and it would still be weird for the both of them considering the age difference is undeniable.

How can you possibly end it there??? I wonder who took her shard, I have an idea but I will keep that to myself to see if I'm right. This story is well written, it has a lot of detail & an excellent plot. I can't wait to read what happens next!

Thank you for bringing Kagome back.
Now who took the shard from Kagome?
I can hardly wait till nest chapter to see who.
Please update as soon as you can.

But this is gooooooooooooood

you know what you should do, you should make kagome go back and kick kikyou to the ground with her shoe on her cheat demanding the jewel shards, the make Kagome say a spell she learned from Nadia that give's Kagome back her soul but gives Kikyou a new one but without Miko powers. She just be a weak human.

Yup. Thats what you should do and I am mad. That was short lol I was like THATS IT DAMN YOU!!

*tear* I'll miss them both sooo much!! I liked Nadia too...
Ah well, I'm better now!!!!! I'm just soooooo happy you updated!!!!! Yay!! TTYL!!!!! OMG!!!!! its HIM michael...*runs screaming to find the chainsaw mentioned in the previous chappie*
Bye!!!! :-)

this in my opinion is a great chapter however I dont remember how she lost her jewel shard. The relationship with Sesshoumaru and Kags is developing nicey, however I would like to see it go a little further, not all the way yet but a little further, get my drift.

mooooore need moooore!

i love the fic so far but i just wanted to mention one thing, in chapter 20 you mention kagome figuring out she had schizophrenia i just wanted to correct you by saying she really had D.I.D (dissociative identity disorder). People who are schizo only hear voices and experience hallucination they dont take on a new personality only a person with D.I.D does that. When the other personality or alter ego is in control the real person has blackout and doesnt remember anything about what hapened when the alter is in control, however the alter (Nadia in Kagomes case) remebers everything even when theyre not in control. Anyway i just wanted to point that out to you and say that this is a really amazing fic.

Waa, how could you end it there!!??
Poor Kagome again...what a nightmare!!
I hop she'll recover soon ?!
Great chapter!!!

*gasp* oh my god. *love, love, love*

i really love how you've described her little dream hell. it's amazing.

so glad that inuyasha finally learned to keep his big trap shut. if he forgets again anytime soon... *grabs duct tape* let's just say it'd be in his best interest to remember.

I can hardly wait till your next update. I want to see what is going to hapen next.
Please update soon!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jade was TOTALLY evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ADORED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But wait... *reads ending of chappie* NOOOOOO!!!!!! Nadia can't be gone!!!!!!!!! This sucks! Waaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sniffle* No, I shall not be angry *sniffle* I shall remain calm *sniffle, sniffle, cough, cough, laugh* WTF *evil laughter* Muahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*grabs chainsaw and follows Jade running screaming over the hill*

Honestly!!!! It wasn't me!!!!!!! It was the other half of my personality! Blame it on her!!!!!! *points*
Toodles

This chapter was properly named because I was confused myself but once I start reading more I understood where you were going. It was still another good chapter and I look forward to reading more. I didn't know my use of violence had a time limit but I want to let you know that you are not the only one that is good at pulling hair! ") LOL

man I was like WHAT A CLIFFY! WTF? but damn. Nadia saves the day lol

The chapter was well worth the wait. I just hate that you left us hanging. I think I just might have to make use of that bat. I would have thought that Kagome would have put up more of a fight or even Nadia would have appeared. I guess the Nadia thing probably wouldn't have worked since they are becoming one. I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter.

NOO!!!!!

oh well... good thing Sesshy has Tessaiga. Please update soon! this is one of the most intriguing stories... it's almost like Othello (manga) and that makes me happy.

Please update..... you can't let Kagome in that state for long. Please update.

And please don't be concerned about my interest cause you hooked me and I can't free myself without the final chapter of your story (which, hopefully will be after many others chapters).

Waah, poor Kagome!! What was this black substance? Poison?
Not nice, this guy...

But the scene before, kagome and Sessh, again so sweet!
pleeaase write again soon! Have to know what happens to Kagome!
^^
lg

OMFG! It was mushy and I ADORED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Holy Sh*t, that chappie rocked!!!!! ANd how come you didn't tell me you were giving away signed bats?!?!?! *pouts* humph!

Again I love were the plot is taking you. Please update cause I can't wait to see were it goes.

OMG! It is imposssible for me to express how sorry I am! I should burn in all the 7 layers of hell for fergetting to review!! Curse Micheal, and his stupid time-consuming running away! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry!
I absolutely ADORED tthis chapppie!!! I think it is my fave so far, unless of course, there is a lemon inthe next one *evil grin* Anywho, I. AM. SO. SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!

Aaw, so great again. Does she kiss hi in the end of the chappi? And this mysterios "it..Kiko?
Oh, I really love your ff=))

NO MORE CLIFFY!!!!!!!!!!

There will be no need for a baseball bat no matter how enticinig that might sound! LOL I was not offended at all! I enjoy your sense of humor as well as your story. I am just messing with you all in fun so instead of giving me a baseball bat how about some more chapters! Until then try not to offend anyone else! LOL

I love it. Please update as soon as you can.

I liked this chapter too. It was COOL!!!!!!! I liked the way you made Sesshy, and how you portrayed his fear. It makes us realize that no matter how godly he may seem, he isn't QUITE perfect. *sigh* Anyway, you ROCK Lady! Go-Go gogglers in green tutus glance at gudy glasses of gross sake!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^.^ you now have a Faithful reading LOl Very Nice and *Waits For more*

PS No you Rock more then I do LOl

ohohoh, so whats this with Kikyo?
We'll know that soon, don't we?
Great chapter again! So...are they a couple now? They're soo sweet..and then her gaze to him....=))))
pleaase update soon^^
(ah..one question*g*g* what means "atcha"?^^''cause english sin't my language, so sometimes I just don't know the words =) )
lg

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Is it that bad that I don't review everytime. I love this story and I find it very entertaining. Sometimes the chapters just speak for thereselves and no comment is needed. Just to let you know your silent reading appreciates and enjoys reading your work.

OMFG....how could you do that to me?? Didn't I leave many words of praise for your wonderful story? Was I not profuse enough in my accolation of your great plot?

And how do you repay this? WITH A CLIFFIE!...

EVIL AUTHOR!!! I'm so desperate for the next chapter!!!!!

Please update soon.....I can't wait to see what your wonderful mind comes up with!!!!!

AWESOME STORY!!!!!

Inu~Lover

ooo... i love this story. Naughty Nadia, but then again who wouldn't love to find themselves suddenly in the arms of Sesshomaru? *sighs*
i know i would like to... i'd probably faint.
anyway, i can't wait to read more. ^_^

Aaaw, that was great again!
This scene, this kiss, soooo sweet!
I absolutly love it!
But of course somthing must disturbed...stupid Kikyo...^^
plzz update soon, will you?^^
lg

Sorry for not hearing from me so long.
I like what you have done in the last 4 chapters. I can't hardly wait to see were it goes from here.
Please update as soon as you can.

Eep So good, I can't wait to see what happens Next ^_^ By the Way You Rock!!!!

P.S If you have any Non Sessy/kagome you can If you want put it here http://www.freewebs.com/mikasfanfictionsite/index.htm
I'm Trying to get the Name out so yeah I'm Telling Everyone I can. Also I am Wrighing a Sessy/Kagome story and Will post it some time soon ^_^ Well talk with you later

Mika Chan

Well, you did it girl. I won't be able to wipe the smile off of my face for at least half an hour. I doubt even Furby and his evil little smile would place a frown on my face. Muahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
To anybody els reading this who also loves this fic, lets give it up for my favorite author! FluffysGirl?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*wild cheering*
Now, where did my whip go?

okay i gess it didn't give me the feeling of suspense like i get with all the other chapter

okay i gess it didn't give me the feeling of suspense like i get with all the other chapter

Heyho^^
Great chapter again! oh yes, it can really feel good, if you let your anger out somehow, like Kagome did!^^
And Nadia stated, that she's in love with Sessh?! Great!!! =)
I'm really curious how the story will go on ^^

you soooo rock i'm shuch a big fan you rock you rock + i love that you right short chapters this one was the shortest i've read so far but it makes my tummy get fuzzy you rock and i say it one more time you rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

one word "Wonderful!"

Your comments always make me laugh. It is another good chapter and I really am enjoying reading this story. It should be interesting to see how are favorite couple become closer in the next chapter.

Yes!!!!! That was a major happiness boost for me! You rock, McSquishy! I love fluff, as you know, and I think some Sess/Kaggy fluff included in next chapter would be totally awesome!! Please include some fluff. Please? pease?
Oh, my split personality has decided that the fact that Nadia is going bye-bye is very depressing, and hopes you prolong her existance at least a couple chapters more. I agree with her. Although, it is definitely awesome that Kags is coming to terms with her emotions, frankly, I love Nadia! She is soooo funny!!!
But, of course, whatever you decide to do is absolutely fine wiht me, just because, THIS FIC ROCKS!!!! Oh yeah!!!!!!
See ya later DUDE!!!!

very Nice Please keep writing. Please E Mail me okay.

i love it tell me when you write it.

oooo... i loved that!

he listened to his heart... er... ESP link thingy... anyway... AWWWW.
i can't wait to read more. *sits on edge of seat*

OMG, OMG, OMG.....I started reading the story and thought hmm, interesting.

Now I'm like when is the author gonna update??? I NEED to know what happens next!!!

Very good story line and interesting twist!!!

Please update soon!

Wow!!! This chapter was awesome!!!
It was so exciting, and..*speechless* ;P
You descriebd her feelings and sessh very good! Wow...I never wanne be in a place like that...and with a crrazy guy like Godan. And the Scnes with Sesshomaru were great too!
Pleaase update so soon again =)))

Wow!!! This chapter was awesome!!!
It was so exciting, and..*speechless* ;P
You descriebd her feelings and sessh very good! Wow...I never wanne be in a place like that...and with a crrazy guy like Godan. And the Scnes with Sesshomaru were great too!
Pleaase update so soon again =)))

I loved that chapter!!!!! I think it was one of my favorites, probably because I'm morbid as hell!!!!! I'm so sad I won't be able to read again until Sunday! Can't wait dude!!!!!!!

Oh, what an evil cliffie!!!!!! My other half would like to inform you that you are definitely the queen of evil cliffies!!!! How cruel!!! You'd better update tonight, I'll be waiting!!!!

Wah?? Oh man..poor Kagome!!!
Who has captured her? Is it Naraku? Or an Offspring!
Pleease update soon!!

I love the way that you made Sesshoumaru such a tease. I thing I like him more this way.
So please keep updating soon.

I loved the new chapter!!! i like your story it is original!

well, the cat's among the pixies now. MUST HAVE FLUFF!!!

Even though I do not review this story that much, I am really enjoying reading it. It is very entertaining and I am enjoying the process of bringing our favorite couple together while dealing with split personalities from both of them! "P

This was something. Inuyasha choose Kikio, how stupid of him, but I guese that could't be helped. Kagome must be free of her past so she could concentrate on her future.
I can hardly wait till the next update. So please update soooooon.

*happy dance* Yay! Yasha's out of the way and Kags gets to fall for everybody's favorite, McFluffy! I like the new name I'm giving him. Anyway, bring on the fluff!!!!!!

hmm... appologies can be quite fun if executed properly. *wink. wink*

i love the way you write... keep up the good work!

WHAT THE HELL!?!? She gave in to EASY!!!!!!!!! Kagome what the FUCK are you doing!?!?!? ManI would have be like, "So your going to hell with her? Give me your Sword!"

Yee is geting realy hot in there. I can't hardly wait till it will be boiling :)).
I loved this chapter as much as the rest of the story, so pleeease update sooon.

*g*
reeeeaaly nice, how Nadia gave him a piece of her mind =)
So, now she's with Sesshomaru again =)
Hmmm...so, what would Sessh do, if Kagome speaks to him in such a way again..? *g* =)
Hope you'll update soon ^^

cant wait for u to update

I like how Nadia gave him a piece of her mind. Please update soon this story is really good.

*giggle* green spots *giggle* OMG!!!! Its a rabbit youkai!!!! And its on the TV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry if I'm scaring you with this
UPDATE soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am really enjoying reading this story. It is different but in a good as I have never read a story where Kagome has a split personality. I hope that you update soon.

Hey=)
Just another great chapter!!
Poor Kagome/Nadia..to walk with a growling stomach and a bruised ankle..But Nadia is really great=)
And now, what is it with Rin? Was she attacked? I hope, She finds Rin soon enough...and I'm sure I'll enjoy how Nadia will confront Sesshomaru =)))

OMG!!!!!! This is a very intense story. And I just love Nadia!! Update soon. I want to know what happens next.

OMG it's getting even better please keep writing I can't wait to read more and nice touch by the way on the split personality thing I don't think I have read anyothers with that in them yet.

I love it your story rocks!!!!!! Can't wait to read the coming chapters keep them coming.

MMM i push the wrong buton and I send you an incomplet review. :P Sorry!
Now I wanted to tell you that I am glad that I read this two chapter at once. It was realy good and I enjoyed every sentence of them. Please continue to update so soon and I hope that I won't loose another update.

Sorry for not reviewing your last chapter. I wake up this morning, open my laptop, enter a single spark, and what do I see? two chapters of one of my favorites fanfic. B

I like this story! And I cannot wait for next chapter, and the ass chewing that Sesshoumaru is gonna get :) :) :)

ooh, how mean!!!!! A cliffie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I might just have to bring my whip out again... By the way, can I borrow your machete? I found a lead on Elmo, and it might come in useful. I dont think I can handle them, just me, my whip, and my other personality. BTW she told me, to tell you, that she thinks cliffies are bad for herself, and requests that you stop leaving them, me on the other hand, well, I like them! It keeps the story interesting, ya know. I better say goodbye before this review gets too long. Bye!!! Keep writing and UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

Wow!! That was ....not nice from Sesshomaru! That's right, his regret should not pass! He knows that he's don wrong....I think...Poor Kagome..I hope nothin happens to her, when she is like this..and if, that Sesshonaru will sve her...
Although the chapter was very sad, especially at the end(The Title suits the chapter! This doing of Sesshomaru..pooor Kagome..) It was a great one! Very good written =)
But pleeeaase update soon =)
thx^^

Loving your story so far can't wait to read more.

So it was short, so they had a fight, I STILL loved it. You rock dude! Keep writin', I cant wait till tomorrow and another update, especially with the cliffie ending.

finish it!

This was as good as ever. Do you realy want to kill Inuyasha? Anyway I think that is your decision and I am sure that I'll love the finish of this story as much as I enjoy reading the new chapters.

The story is great I am loving all the twist and turns but killing Inuyasha dont you think thats a little extreme.

The more chapters I read the more interesting this story gets. I am really enjoying reading this story and I look forward to reading more.

I really liked this chapter. You were right, you are getting really good at this. icant wait for the next update! Although, if it is posted tonight, dont expect my review until tomorrow. Email is soo tiring, ya know. Muahahaha!!!!!! Anyway I cant wait for some Sesshy & Kagome fluff. See ya! D.I.G.

This was realy good. Please continue to update and do it quick so I can be amazed by another chapter of your beautiful story.

I liked it, even if it was short. Although, that foreshadowing of the next chapter has me worried. I hope Sesshy doesn't react TOO badly to her treating his wounds. Anyway, I can't wait for the next update. BTW, its spelled Saimyosho and a lime is like a lemon, but it isn't as in depth and doesn't quite go all the way. For a better definition you can go to google and type in define:lime. You may have to sift through it a bit, but you'll find what your looking for. Until next time then, I bid you a fond farewell, and have only one thing left to say, CHEESEY QUESADILLAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yaa, you're right, she really is stronger...finally Naraku must show fear =)
Oi, he'll find her to close for comfort? =))*bigcurouseyes* I'm sure that'll be great
*g*

It was another great chapter but you were wrong for the cliffy. "P
I hope you don't make us wait to long for the next chapter.

Omg! Go Kagome!! I hope she kicks Naraku's ASS!!!!!!!! But you are so mean to Sesshy! You better make it up to him in the next chapter by including something juicy between him and Kags. Until then, I bid you Adieu, and urge you to read the email I sent you. Toodles!!

interesting story update soon

wowowow, what great chapters!
THis Kiss..soooo sweet! Wonderfull described!^^
And now, he sacrifices himself for her?? How could yu end it there?????^^
ANd, is it Kagome or Nadia, who starts this great attack? I hope, Naraku will be seriously injured(or more?^^)
It's really a great story!!!!

This is a good story, keep it up

Hei was Kagome or Nadia? I want them merge back so they became more and more stronger. Anyway interesting idea. Please update soon!

Yay!!! I really liked this chapter for several reasons 1. It WAS long! Thanks! 2. Yasha got put in his place by Nadia and Kagome! 3. I love this fic and any update, is a good update! 4. There was a little 'moment' at the end! Even if it wasn't very long, and not very intense, it was still a kiss. Although he was technically kissing Nadia, not Kagome. Does he prefer one side of her personality> anyway, keep writing and hopefully I'll see you again this time tomorrow! Love this fic! Violetcarson

This story is getting really good now. I see how your are leaving a little cliffy. How are you going to have him kiss and take off! LOL "P What will be interesting to see is his feeling for Kagome or Nadia. I am going to enjoy reading how you work that out.

*cries* Thank You, Thank You. First, I would like to thank the academy! And my mom, and my dad, and all my wonderful fans! Oh, and most of all I would like to thank you! I'm so happy to know that one of my favorite authors on A Single Spark thinks so highly of me! You Rock FluffysGirl?! Keep Writing, i can't wait to read what happens next! I'm soooooo sorry for not reviewing the moment you posted!

Wah, what an end!
Nice stunt Kagome/Nadia made..but she will survive, won't she?
The last chapters were great again...Good idea how Nadia was created! And when they "hugged", when Nadia nearly fell..sweeeet^^

I just caught up reading all the chapters thus far and I am really enjoying reading this story. It is kinda neat seeing how Kagome deals with her split personalities. I look forward to reading how you make two become one as well as bring our favorite couple together. This story keeps me wanting to read more and I have to admit like everyone else I would love to have longer chapters. I won't threaten you are anything, I will just make a request! "P

Muahahaha!!!!! I'm so scary, oh so scary, and wary, and crazed!!!!! Because you knonw, I'm definitely not pretty, I have the wit of a baboon, and if I was gay, I would kill myself. Anyway, I'm so glad you updated, althoguh it definitely could have been longer... *evil grin* Muahahahaha!!!!!!

OMG! What a cliffie! One moment Nia-whatever her name is is plotting to kill Sesshy, the next she's going all gaga over him! HOw does that work? (As for the machete, you may win this round, but this is not the last you'll see of me!! Muahahahahahahahaha!!!!)
Have a nice day.

OMG! I am sooooo sorry I didn't review last night! I was caught up in something else, and forget to check the newly posted fics before I went to bed. I'm soooooooo sorry!

Umm so what exactly is happening here does he fall for Kagome or her other side?? It's good but it doesn't make a whole lot of sence just yet.

Um, your italics and stuff wouldn't carry over unless you use HTML codes
italics: "words"
bold: "words"
underline:"words"
heh, ya, hope that helped...uh...ya, but you "words" is where you put whatever you want to italicise, bold,e tc. hope it helped
Anyway ^_^ great chapter, wah...what's going to happen next!!!??? wh is Nadia!?!?! Update soon, great fic you've got going here!

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WhY NanDia??? ShE iS KaGomE

rIghT? AnD wHaT hapPen To

KagiE? ToO maNy qUesTioNs To

Answer. PleaSe UpdaTe!! I lOve

The chApTer!! ThaNks

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review fast cause that fafic was great!!!

it is great

so,,okay, its not midoriko, but is she going to gain control over this powerful being so she can kick some major ass with the new power?

this is a wonderful story so far. I can't wait for an update. I hope to see it soon tough! ^_^ well until the next chapter... ja ne

wow, another great chapter =)
WHats happening now? She'll not hurt Rin, will she? Sesshomaru will come in time I hope^^
WOuld you send me a mail again? =)

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PleaSe UpdaTe sOon!! I waNna

kNow whO iS tHe owNer Of the

Voice ThaT KagoMe hearS!!!!

ThaNks FoR tHe NeW cHaPter!!

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Yay!!!!!! Another chappie!!! *dances around with whip in hand* Now *cracks whip* Write!!! Faster!!!! I must know what happens next! And if it isn't Midoriko, then who. Wahhhh!!!! I want to know!!!!!!!!! :-(

Hmmm ... Randomness ... Kagome Is Realli Goin Through Some Things If I Do Say Soo Mah Self!

oh this is really good.

Yay! Another great chapter!
um...a lemon is a sex scene and I'm 90% positice that OOC means out of character...you've probably already been told this by now but oh well ^_^ thanks for the great chapter, can't wait for more!

Oh no, Kagome called him filthy... Not the wisest thing to do. And what happened to her? Who or what is controlling her? You must update! ^_^

Wow, a nice beginning!! These chapters were great! And now Kagome wants to attack Sesshomaru? I'm curious to know, who or what it is wth Kagome^^
I you would send me a mail, when you update another chapter, I wouldbe reeaally happy =)
(and sry, if my english isn't right..normally I speak german^^)

That was great and I can't wait for the next chapter. What will happen to Sess and will Kagome stop herself on time?

oo, i cant wait to see what happens. was it midoriko? that took over i mean.

UPDATE..its really good so far.

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IT'S GoOd!! I wAnT tO kNow WhaT

wIlL hAppEn!! HeY tHaNkIEs!! I LoVe

The ChaPie!! ThnKS agaIn!!

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OMG! That was really cool! You HAVE to update soon, what a cliffie! And please make the chapters just a teensy bit longer! Keep Writing!!!!!!!!!

well that was a turn of events.lol

hey this story is awesome can't wait for more

It's a great start. Please update again soon.

Sounds like a good story. Please, keep writing it and update soon!

great start:)

OMG the poor villagers!! please update as soon as possible. ^.^

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PleaSe UpdAtE!!! ThaNks!! I lOve It

WaNNa Know What WilL haPeN

neXt!!

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