|Llime -Any fanfiction with sexual overtones, which can include everything up to actual sex. No graphic sexual situations are described.
Lemon - Any fan fiction containing graphic sexual situations that are described.
OOC - Out of Character. When a canon character acts in such a way as to be totally contrary to what they would in the series.
PWP-a lemon fanfic with only the sexual activity being described with no other reason
Lauren :]- Sun 16 Sep 2007
|O.M.F.G. i just finished your story. IM IN LOVE! noo jk but that was like awsome. during the end i like started to cry a lot cuz of all the emotions but MAN ur a good writer. once i become an author im going to recomend this storyy. oh yea and please dont give me a cantalope *shows other fruits* i have enough :]
|I loved this fanfic! Though there were times when the story dwindled, at the end I thought it was beautiful. I love the thought of Kagome and Sesshomaru along with Rin ebign a family in the future ^__^ Keep up the great work!
|aw, yey! this story was awesome. i love how you've ended it and brought our dear Sesshy back as a human. he sounds ridiculously gorgeous.
yeah, it would've been nice to see Rin's reaction, but this way it ends with us hoping for the best in their new life together.
it's very rare that a story makes me tear up, but this one did... especially when Sesshy died. I'm very glad that they get a second chance.
Thank you so much for sharing your story with us. It takes guts to post the first chapter, then a lot of time to finish a story... so thank you for finishing the story the way you did. it was very romantic and sweet.
I look forward to reading something else by you in the future. Please don't keep us waiting too long, your talent is too good to be denied for long.
|haha, somewwut amusing that kikyou is a she/he or he/she X3
tatyianna- Sat 04 Aug 2007
|that was a great story better than great but i loved it and skip anyone who didn't like it, that was fantastic loved it waiting 4 another one
Kai- Fri 03 Aug 2007
|Oh yay! And he's human so there will be none of that, she dies WAY before him crap. And now they all look like each other! X3 Oh! A sexy complete opposite of a Sesshoumaru-human? Quite sexy. Was he still pale? I might have run over that description!!! I can't wait until Rin finds out. Oh well. At least they had there time alone together before she comes romping in. Yay yay yay!! 3
P.S. Your daughter's name is too adorable!!! X3
Lady Nya- Fri 03 Aug 2007
|The ending was wonderful! I can't believe it's over. I hope to see you again sometime.
Samantha_Shelby- Fri 03 Aug 2007
|That was AWESOME!!! This is the first story that I have finished that wasn't already complete when I started, and I flipped out when I saw you updated the LAST chapter! I like the end of this alot. I hope that you have a new story out soon! (???) :)
|Oh...my...God! *starry eyes* This has got to be one of the most beautiful and romantic lemons I've ever read. It was so full of feelings and passion...you could almost feel the love in the air! Wonderful! Marvelous! *claps*
If only more people write like you do. Without the over enthusiastic anatomy lessons which always make me want to go 'ick!' and skip a few pages (and thus the lemon). Without the vulgar words which always make me gag and groan!
*ahem* Anyway...wonderful story...wonderful build-up until the climax (no pun intended) and wonderful portrayals. I'm glad that Sesshoumaru was human in the end - equal lifespans equals happy rbk! No matter how they're written out!
Any9- Fri 03 Aug 2007
|The end was great, realy realy great.
I hope as well to see you soon with another story.
For now bye bye.
Mika- Fri 03 Aug 2007
|WAAAAAAh, so sweet!! SO Great1!!! I dunno what to say^^And I can't believe it's the end!!! It was such a great FF, with such an emotional, sweet end!!!! I love it!!!^^
Violetcarson- Thu 02 Aug 2007
Ninjaru- Thu 02 Aug 2007
|*sob* Only one more chapter....and it isnt there! T_T I hope you update soon, this story is very well done and has me completely captivated. *nodnod*
Kai- Sun 29 Jul 2007
|Oh! I mourn with Kagome and Rin. I felt heartbroken when even Rin started to doubt herself. She's supposed to be the light of all things! And Kagome's gotta keep a little more faith. Was that dog-wolf thing Kouga...or Sesshoumaru!?! I can't wait!!! *squee* X3
sessylover- Fri 27 Jul 2007
|more more write more and make a great ending pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase
|OMG u so need to update i LOVE it i NEED to read more PLEASE UPDATE SOON
|OMG! You can't just end it like that. It's not fair. Please update soon. Even though everyone has a pretty good idea who it is please post the next chapter soon.
Mika- Wed 25 Jul 2007
|Waa...! Wow..I think I would scream also!!! It's a great chappie( Like a present to me, cuase I passed the theorytest for drivingliscence today*doeshappydancing* *g*)Is it Sessh? I mean, when the sword obeys...? Pleeaase update soon!! I wanna know!^^
Samantha_Shelby- Wed 25 Jul 2007
|Wow! Only one more chapter. I thought this was the last chapter so I was surprised when I got to the end of it! I hope you update soon.
Animelovr87- Wed 25 Jul 2007
|omg this story is AWESOME please put up the next chapter soon now u left me in suspense i fell asleep @ 2 in the morning reading the story please!!!!! ^.^
jessica- Wed 25 Jul 2007
|this is the bets fan-fic i have read so far.i could picture everything as it was really happening.not to mention i cried a river at the end.please continue with the story.its going to be hard sleeping wondering what might happen.i love it so much.so i beg u continue
Any9- Wed 25 Jul 2007
|Hehehe You mean one.
Who was there? Don't tell me, don't tell me. It was Sesshoumaru. he there I told you :P.
Please update soon.
|hahaha! i was about ready to scream bloody murder at you for ending it like that! i love this story... who knew split personalities could be so fun?
well, you obviously.
anyway, i am anxiously awaiting the next bit because you ended it so evilly. there better be gooey fluffiness or i'll begin looking for sharp things as well.
:-D haha, not really. *nods* well, hope you have a happy wednesday!
Violetcarson- Tue 24 Jul 2007
|OMG!!!! Its Sesshy, right?!?! It HAS to be!!!!!! ARGH!!! YOU ARE EVIL!!!!!!! You're lucky I forgot my machete at the library today!!!! *screams in frustration*
Any9- Sun 22 Jul 2007
|Hmm Sesshoumaru is dead?
You are so mean with Kagome, I cry for her heart.
Hope you will revive him soon, so the story might go on.
Sarah- Fri 20 Jul 2007
|ok i read this and the end made me cry.Are there going to be any more chapters to this or is this the end? it was awsome.
|I'm baaack!!! (I went away remember? No, *sigh* oh well) What's better than coming home after a month away to a bunch of new fanfiction chapters for one of your favorite stories? NOTHING!!! I am SOOOO glad that I got back in time for the ending though. I know it will be worth the wait. I hope that you update soon! I hope that you write more fanfiction if this next chapter truly is the last because.... well... YOU TOTALLY ROCK!
Hazel- Fri 20 Jul 2007
|wow....this is....i'm crying over here
Mimichan17- Fri 20 Jul 2007
|PLEASE tell me you're going to write the next chapter soon! I was bawling my eyes out. Now im going to be depressed until you write the next chapter. Thanks! Lol! But seriously, it's an awesome story and completely original. Im really REALLY picky about which fics i read and i am NOT regretting this one!
Mika- Fri 20 Jul 2007
|aaw...hehe..I'm here^^Sry, even though we#ve vacations, there'e a lot of things to do-.-'''
the chappie was great again! WHen Rn and Kagome hugged and Kagome crieed, that was sooo sad, but you've written it very good! Rin' such a cute kid^^
I hope Sessh can come back very soon! But will Kagome see her old friends again, too??
chassly sullivan- Thu 19 Jul 2007
|; . ; chapter 36 made me cry. i cant wait for more though! ^-^
|yey! *does happy dance* i feel all special and loved!
and i must say, while i still don't like the idea of Sesshomaru being 'dead'...
i love how Rin knows just what to say to cheer our Kags up. and i just know that Kagome's mom is going to love her.
now, since you granted my request i will sit patiently and wait for more. ^_~
Samantha- Thu 19 Jul 2007
|What happened to Shippo?
Violetcarson- Thu 19 Jul 2007
|*pulls out machete and hurls it at you* NOOOOO!!!!!!! *throws baseball bat* WHY *Tosses knife* ARE *hurls frying pan* YOU *throttles your monkey* SOOO *Hurls computer at you* EVIL?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! *gives 39 lashes with Whip* ARGH!!!!! Sic her Fluffy!!!!!!
You are so MISSY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I apologize, my other personality got a hold of the keyboard. It won't happen ag- ARGH!!!!! I will rip out your effing SPLEEN!!!!! Muahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm still going to kill you.
I wsould just like to make it clear, that this is NOT a flame, I am merely frustrated (Yo liar!!! You cannot cage me forever!!!! Muahahaha!!) I promise nit to inflict bodily harm on you, if you give us the promised lemon, NOW!!!!
Mika- Thu 19 Jul 2007
|yay, finally Naraku is dead!!
But Sessh..he'll not survuve it..ne? Aw, but he will be resurrected, won't he??? Plzplz update verysoon!!!^^
|*melts into a puddly mess of sadness and goo*
You can't do that! WAH! i actually started blubbering and nothing made sense... you can't kill him off... *cries*
ok, i love this story and request more.
and i love how Sesshomaru made her fight off Naraku, or course Kagome will succeed once you make her mad enough!
anyway, i'm gonna tell you right now what i'd like for my birthday... more of this story!! *cheesy grin*
well, you can't blame a girl for trying.
Any9- Thu 19 Jul 2007
|Sorry for my absence! I read the chapters today. They are sooo good. Thank you.
hazel- Thu 19 Jul 2007
|it was good. I started to cry!
Trice- Wed 18 Jul 2007
|Mama is so proud of her baby! That was a great chapter inspite of the sad overtones. I was feeling the pain and the hope in this chapter. I hope in the next chapter that Kagome can at least get rewarded for all her hard work. I am sad to have the story end it was very entertaining and I also enjoyed our banter back in forth. Your a great writer and I look forward to reading more of your work. You even put this chapter out quickly! I am proud of you! Well until the next chapter! GO GET SOME SLEEP! ")
swtdrm01- Wed 18 Jul 2007
|First, let me say the story is awesome. I sat here and read the entire thing. Finally, please don't take this the wrong way, but, damn it, Y-O-U CANNOT KILL HIM! The kamis better save his butt or for some type of miracle to happen because you cannot do that to him, to Kagome, their hearts, their souls. Just the idea makes me cry, I mean actually cry and I'm not talking about feeling like crying, I'm talking about genuine heartfelt tears. It is soooo unfair. I don't care what you do, turn him into a god, have someone make the wish for Kagome's happiness, have Kagome all of a sudden wake and save him or maybe even Nadia. Just, plz, plz, plz, I beg you do not kill him. If I were Kagome, I could not bear the fact he is gone after the ups and downs, the struggles, the sacrifices, the battles that were fought with their heart and soul to lose the one you love. What was the point of winning the fight agains Naraku? What was the point of fighting to be Kagome and not Nadia? What was the point of acceptance? If at the end she lost her soulmate. Please consider my wishes. I'm sure I'm not the only one out there who feels the same.
sweetie- Wed 18 Jul 2007
|is this story gonna have sad ending? sob sob
sweetie- Wed 18 Jul 2007
|is this story gonna have sad ending? sob sob
Trice- Tue 17 Jul 2007
|Great chapter but you really do suck for the cliffy. That means you will have to update reall soon. I am not a pretty hooker but am one hot B*tch! I will miss you girl but that just means you will just have to start writing another story or you can just shoot me a personal email it is not like you don't have it already!LOL
Lady Nya- Tue 17 Jul 2007
|I completely understand! It just, happens. Just like I don't know where the oreos went, they just..... disappeared. Anywho, the chapter was awesome! Kagome would so do something like that! Kudos and brownie points to you!
Hazel- Tue 17 Jul 2007
|He somewhat knew Naruka was in Kikyous hoes body!!
Yes i enjoy the movie
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Tue 17 Jul 2007
|*Sends out a serch party in hopes of finding Fluffysgirl? and forcing her to finish the story*
*Dogs pick up scent and start baying *
Or am I???
Anyhow, please finish soon.
|yaaay!! Sess save Kagome!! P.S. Godan was truly hideous-- what a great monster
|Sesshoumaru is suuuuch a tease!!
hehe... but i liked that chapter a lot. The way you resolved the Inuyasha, Kikyo, Kagome thing was masterfully done.
|oh ouch Sesshoumaru.. ouch. That was painful. Why did you have to go and say a thing like that to Kagome-- you know you like her ;)
|I love the line 'her spiritual aura made night turn to day' what a cool image!!
Whoo hoo, Kagome and Nadia are awesome!!
Poor Sesshoumaru-- it sounds painful. I hope Kags can heal him
|Nadia-- nice name! I wonder where it comes from thought. Why did you choose Nadia?
hehehe I can't wait to find out about Kag's personality switch
|holy crap! Kags doesn't recognize Sesshoumaru!! Oh no!
|Wow great first two chapters!! So Kags soul is going to awaken? And Naraku doesn't want that to happen... hmmm interesting... very interesting.
I love how Sesshoumaru saved the day-- cool imagery!
Trice- Fri 13 Jul 2007
|Wow! This was a pretty good chapter inspite of the cliffy. I liked the twist you did and I am glad I expected correctly that you were up to something. I looked forward to reading how this plays out. Yor G-Dog is going to let you slide since this was a good chapter. The morning thing was a low blow because I am BEAUTIFUL DA**IT! LOL ")
Smittee- Fri 13 Jul 2007
|O.O After reading everything up to your last update, I am proud to say this is a great fanfic. Although I just can back from ridding myself of the anger that arose from finding I had no more to read just yet, I think me saying 'please write again soon' is going to come up whether or not that happens. Can't wait to read the next chapter. ^.^
Lady Nya- Fri 13 Jul 2007
|Wow. I didn't see that coming. Tetanus is for sissies,.....and those who don't want to die. Good job. Update ASAP.
Hazel- Fri 13 Jul 2007
|Kagome what the hell are you doing?? Oh No one saw that coming!!
Sesshoumaru knew didn't he
Hazel- Fri 13 Jul 2007
|The movie was GREAT!! I mean REALLY GOOD!!
But I dont think I'll be keeping my eyes on HIM. I might be laughing the most.
Rinseternalsoul- Thu 12 Jul 2007
|Today I was supposed to be writing a lemon for my story 'Violation of Honor', but instead I spent the day reading yours. I think that it was a day well spent. I know that you are new to the fandom and your questions about things reminded me of my first days joining the guild of Sess/Kag writers. I would be happy to answer any questions you may have to help you along. You are doing a great job with your story. It actually surprised me that this is your first. It is well written and nicely planned. You've done a good job of keeping the characters in character - even when Kagome was under the influence of Nadia. Some of the spellings were off, but that is understandable. Just do like I did and start a notebook that you collect data in for reference while you write. I still use mine all the time. You might try places like Inuyashaworld.com for names and spellings. As for the fanfiction jarga, you can go to Adultfanfiction.net and check out their story codes under FAQ in the main title bar. They list EVERYthing there. That is where I post my naughtier Sess/Kag stories. I love ASSpark too, but some of my stuff can get a little racy. Most everyone in the Inuyasha fanfiction world is very nice and more than willing to offer help. By the way, if you still need a little guidence with the Italics and Bold scripting, just email me. I was just as clueless as you at first, so I'm sure that I can explain it. I would like to encourage you to continue writing Sess/Kag stories (selfishly so that I will have some juicy well written stories to read), but also because you do have talent, and the more you write, the better you'll get. I look forward to reading what you come up with in the future, as well as the remainder of 'To Live is to Love'. Until then... Ja ne! (bye!)
vaneles- Wed 11 Jul 2007
|wonderful story! I can't wait for the update. tootles! ^_^
Lady Nya- Wed 11 Jul 2007
|This was very good. I have it in my head that I can't be affected by any sadness in this story now because you said there would be a happy ending. But, that didn't work. I almost cried during this one.
Violetcarson- Tue 10 Jul 2007
|GRRR!!!!!!! *Tosses machete* If you hurt one hair on his pretty boy head, I will hunt you down, and gut you like the lfip-flopping fish that you are!!!! Take that Mr. Burnes!!!
*cries* Yay!!!!! *sniffle* *happy dance* God, I'm so confused.
I remember what you told me about how you were going to end it, but it DOESN'T MAKE ANY FUCKING SENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I!!!!!! DON'T!!!!!!! GET IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope you get eaten by a giant hairball *cough* even though, I would no longer be able to laugh at your expense. I'm such a great friend, aren't I?
Hazel- Tue 10 Jul 2007
|lol. Dont Sulk. I click this when I first got on the net. I was checking to see if you updated and you DID!!
So happy but Harry Potter is IMPORTANT!! I'm a loyal fan.
Trice- Tue 10 Jul 2007
|Girl you are tooo crazy! I was on vacation but I didn't forget about my homey! You still are crazy as ever. This was kinda a depression chapter but I have a feeling that you are setting us up for failure. I think that everthing that you hinted at is not going to happen. What author in their right mind will let us know what is going to happen at the end of the story. But wait you never was in your right mind. By the way that cat comment is going to get you to know first hand what a bat in the face feels like! LOL ") Until next chapter don't get bit by Cujo!
sesshoumara-hime- Tue 10 Jul 2007
|I just love this story. I have never love a story as i have loved this one.
Lady Nya- Tue 10 Jul 2007
|Thank you for putting that there will be a happy ending because after that last line i kind of started freaking out!
Any9- Tue 10 Jul 2007
|A knife?? I don't own knifes! (My mother does) If i'll just put an finger on a knife that finger is bleeding, soo I can't throw at you any knife cause first i'll be dead (I am realy terible with knifes-you don't want me to hold one, that I can asure you).
Anyway I realy enjoyed this chapter and I am glad that you promised to update more often.
Please keep that promise.
Violetcarson- Tue 10 Jul 2007
|*grabs knife* Hm, me likey!!!! Muahahahahahahaha!!!!!! I hope you realize just how infinitely evil you are, if you aren't, I'll sic that purple fucker on you again. I borrowed *cough* the tensaiga, and, ya know, with you not talking to me for two days, I might have to do somthing drastic if you don't get the next BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP chapter out!!! Muahahahahah-*cough* *gargle* glug.
~*Mystra*~- Mon 09 Jul 2007
|At first I thought, hmmm oh, another one of those split personality/reincarnated demon princess/most powerful warrior priestess Midoriko stories. Boy, did you ever prove me wrong. Thank you! This has been a real treat to read. You have a definite way with words, and your descriptions have a such a deliberate voluptousness in spots.... gorgeous! Well done. Can't wait for me.
Trice- Mon 09 Jul 2007
|Yes the chapter was short but I will forgive you this time. I will even keep my bat to myself as long as the next couple of chapters are longer. Even though the chapter was short as always I enjoyed reading it.
hazel- Mon 09 Jul 2007
|I guess I can reply now:
THIS STORY IS THE BEST!!!
I think I replyed before but i forgot. So anyway
Keep up the good. Work. If you add please add before July 11 because harry Potter comes out.
Lady Nya- Mon 25 Jun 2007
|Yay! He's back! *runs around chasing imaginary tail and doing flips* I'm so happy! I liked this chapter. Her whistling is so Kagome. I often sing that song actually. It usually ends with me getting hit over the head.
Kai- Mon 25 Jun 2007
|Oh good he's back!! For a second, I couldn't believe that everyone just died off. He's back, he's back! X3 I'm happy....*squee!*
Violetcarson- Mon 25 Jun 2007
|Yo!! Waz up with my fave authoress today? OMG!!! Sesshy's back!! Oodles and oodles of happiness!!!! Yay!! I can't wait for the next chappie...*suggestive wink* come on, give us some citrus girl!!! I'm sooo sorry I didn't read the update until just now, pwease don't be mad!! I'll tell you why, AFTER you email me!!!!! Bye, and once again, this story ROX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Any9- Mon 25 Jun 2007
|Hehehe.... retarted fish... that was goood. Anyway I think anyone of us will be a retarted fish if a person you love and think is dead is coming from the deads and start to make jokes.
I can hardly wait to see what is going to happen next.
AAAA and stop apologyzing for short chapters this is your story and you are in title to write it the way you want and the way you can.
Next: please update as soon as you can (short chapter or long chapter-it doesn't mater).
chicke- Mon 25 Jun 2007
|another great chapter~
|Yay!!!!!(jumping up and down). Sesshy is back. Please update soon.
Trice- Sun 24 Jun 2007
|I did like this chapter a whole lot better because it was not so gloomy as you stated. I look forward to reading what happened to Sess and how he shows Kagome how much he missed her. By the way I love you too! And I have not forgot about the bat! It just I have not needed to use it lately but if you like I can bring it back! ") LOL
Violetcarson- Thu 21 Jun 2007
|Alright, here's the deal, you have my permission to cut out m eyes wuth a razor blade, then sell me into slavery to the Chinese mafia after shoving a jarfull of flesheating ants and taping it for youtube (Anybody else love Foamy? Woot!!!) if youu want to. I am sooo sorry I didn't read this chappie earlier!!!! I know I told I would, and I really regret it, this chappie was awesome!!! I loved it!!! Blood, Guts, and Gore!!!!!!! Muahahahahahaha!!!!!!
Lady Nya- Thu 21 Jun 2007
|Wow. Way to put a burden on a girl's shoulders. The fate of the world depends on you, but no pressure. I like though. I am taking solice in the fact that Sesshoumaru can't possibly be dead, cause otherwise, I may just have to throw my computer out the window.
Any9- Wed 20 Jun 2007
|Long time, no see you.
I hope you recover your muse and he is going to put you to work.
This chapter was realy nice (you left an cliffie there-you mean one) and please update.
Sesshoumara-san- Tue 19 Jun 2007
|Sess-chan better not be dead. *Wait, you say he isn't?* Oh my well with that said, good story. LOL
Trice- Tue 19 Jun 2007
|YOU ARE SOOOOOOOO EVIL! Even though no one can touch me if i didn't decide to review this last chapter I figured that I will take the high road instead of the low road in which you have taken. Your humor never ceases to amaze me! I am glad to see you are back in rare form but you do know this means war and that you should be very afraid! LOL ") On another note this chapter through me off. It was like a curve ball. I got what where you was going but the processes in getting there was little hard to understand. I figure in the next chapter, which shoud be very soon since I reviewed will clear things up for me. Until next time watch your back! LOL
Violetcarson- Sun 17 Jun 2007
|OMG!!!!! Wow, this tory is getting darker, and I think that that chappie ruled!!!!! I know its been a while, but you know why and I know you'd NEVER hold it against me. Right? Right, because as far as I know, Fluffy was answering to ME (boo-ya!) last time I checked so, without further ado, I present to you, the amazing *whistles* FLUFFINATOR!!!!!
*hm, maybe I shouldn't describe what this looks like*
Anyway, you're still doin an awesome job and if your computer crashes, I'll sic my flying llama on it!!!!
Any9- Wed 13 Jun 2007
|Hehehe.... computer problem "sigh". I know what you feel (damn tehnology, but this is what unite us).
Anyway I love your new chapter and I hope you will win your batle with your computer so that you can update more often.
oh Please- Tue 12 Jun 2007
|I must say, Wow!
I liked how you had Sessh show restraint in the lemon a few chapters back.
But, how evil to have her happiness torn away so abruptly. Sure didn't see that coming.
Can't wait to see what has happened to our favorite dog.
And didn't we all know Kagome could be dangerous if properly provoked. 5 miles! Darn! Maybe she was the cause of the demon extinction.
Great story, Keep up the good work.
Samantha_Shelby- Tue 12 Jun 2007
| Oh no! What happend? CRAP! I am leaving for a month to a place w/no Internet acsess and u leave me with a cliffe? AHHH!!! I am sure the wait will be worth it!
Mika- Tue 12 Jun 2007
|Wow, not a nice end for this demon..so what happened to Sesshomaru? Is he wounded bad or something?Really big explosion Kagome made..I hope she'll be fine after that..and that Sessh masters this way he must do...Hope you'll update soon =)
Trice- Tue 12 Jun 2007
|As always this chapter was well worth the wait. I never know what to expect from you when I read your chapters and I love that about your writing as well as your sense of humor. I hope the computer demons break their hold on your computer! Maybe you might want to seek the help of a priest! LOL Anyways this was a great chapter and I was sad that it was not more to read. You know we are always harder on ourselves when it comes to are work. So leave yourself alone and I put in a prayer for your computer!
Jay- Sun 10 Jun 2007
|NOOOOO!!!!! YOU MUST UPDATE!
|AHHH! You can't stop there! That was a cliffie of epic proportion. Update soon or I might have a heart attack! LOL! This was a great chapter even if it WAS a cliffie AND really depressing. Please keep up the good work!
kotainuchan- Thu 07 Jun 2007
|oh she's P.Oed and gonna kick some ass I can tell! haha, love it as usual.
|*tosses pillow at Sess* bad poochie, leaving kagome all alone.
ooo... Kagome gets to kick some ass. this should be good. *pops some popcorn*
alright... i'm ready.
what? you mean i have to wait? *sigh* fine... you're lucky i love this story. ^_^
please update soon! thank you muchly!
Mika- Wed 06 Jun 2007
|Waah..poor Kagome..First such sweeet Moments, and then Sessh leaves, and now this youkai?! I hope Sessh will come back soon..and I'm curious wh this youkai is, and what she'll do to him
I'm soo curious whats going on, and you stop there..!!! Thats not fair!^^
Plz update again soon=)
Hazel- Wed 06 Jun 2007
|DONT YOU DARE STOP THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
damn you sesshoumaru
Trice- Wed 06 Jun 2007
|I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I really enjoyed the little twist you put into the story and I really look forward to reading more about this twist. This story is really starting to get good. You need to hurry up and fix your computer because I miss your funny little comments! LOL ")
|Dun dun dun. I lurv it! You mean it does't help to curse at the computer when it doesn't work? Eh...no wonder. lol
|This story is awesome! I know that you just updated it alittle while ago, but I want more! Please??? (Insert puppy eyes here. Pun intended!) Seriously though, you have some very deticated readers. I found this on recommend fics. It was mentioned repeatedly, so I thought I'd try it and I am so glad that I did. Update soon!!!
chibi-nova- Fri 01 Jun 2007
|i always saw this being updated when i would look for something to read but i never clicked on it until now and i have to say that you have out done your self your writing is awsome and easy to read nice plot... what else could i say lol just great job and hope you will be able to update soon
|aww... i like it. it's a little Key Lime Pie. and he's so cute at the end.
wait! *reads back* she lost her shard? *rereads last chappie* :-D* i'm sorry... who was hard? *blush* umm...
i seem to have lost my brain.
anyway... please update soonish.
Mika- Wed 30 May 2007
|Aaaw, that was just soo sweet!!! I love it so much! The way, Sessh behaved, and the last words he spoek, soo sweet!!!!!
plz update soon!!! =)
hazel- Wed 30 May 2007
|Freaks I tell you lmao. Add again soon
hazel- Wed 30 May 2007
|But damn that was realllllllly good. Why she get in fully clothes if he was going to take it off?
hazel- Wed 30 May 2007
|OI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was short!!!!!!! DAMN YOU!!!!!!!!!!1 -shivers- Sesshoumaru kisses. lmao@ the reply man it would be soooooo GOOD if Kagome beat kikyou hoe up man. Inuyasha a shit bag.
Violetcarson- Tue 29 May 2007
|Okay, I'm worried now!!!! Are you hinting that you are going to force her back into the modern day and leave her there? Or through some strange twist of fate, is she going to either stay in this era, or meet him in the next? I wanna know!! Waaaaa!!!!!!!! *uncontrollable sobs* WTF!!! *uncontrollable giggles* OMG! Maybe the funny farm isn't such a bad idea, I hear they have good chicken sandwhiches...
Any9- Tue 29 May 2007
|Hehehehe....... That was a good diversion. I am not mad, but I want to see who took the shard and what is going to happen next (there I now how to spell next :) ).
Lady Nya- Tue 29 May 2007
|I absolutely love your story! Everytime I log on I look to see if you've updated. Keep up the good work!
Sessy_LoveBug- Tue 29 May 2007
|I like the turn of events that happened in this chapter. I didn't even notice the age difference until you mention it. However, it would not matter her age becasue he will always be like 700 years older than her. She could be 18 and it would still be weird for the both of them considering the age difference is undeniable.
Kimberly- Sun 27 May 2007
|How can you possibly end it there??? I wonder who took her shard, I have an idea but I will keep that to myself to see if I'm right. This story is well written, it has a lot of detail & an excellent plot. I can't wait to read what happens next!
Any9- Sun 27 May 2007
|Thank you for bringing Kagome back.
Now who took the shard from Kagome?
I can hardly wait till nest chapter to see who.
Please update as soon as you can.
hazel- Sun 27 May 2007
|But this is gooooooooooooood
hazel- Sun 27 May 2007
|you know what you should do, you should make kagome go back and kick kikyou to the ground with her shoe on her cheat demanding the jewel shards, the make Kagome say a spell she learned from Nadia that give's Kagome back her soul but gives Kikyou a new one but without Miko powers. She just be a weak human.
Yup. Thats what you should do and I am mad. That was short lol I was like THATS IT DAMN YOU!!
Violetcarson- Sat 26 May 2007
|*tear* I'll miss them both sooo much!! I liked Nadia too...
Ah well, I'm better now!!!!! I'm just soooooo happy you updated!!!!! Yay!! TTYL!!!!! OMG!!!!! its HIM michael...*runs screaming to find the chainsaw mentioned in the previous chappie*
Sessy_LoveBug- Sat 26 May 2007
|this in my opinion is a great chapter however I dont remember how she lost her jewel shard. The relationship with Sesshoumaru and Kags is developing nicey, however I would like to see it go a little further, not all the way yet but a little further, get my drift.
kotainuchan- Sun 20 May 2007
|mooooore need moooore!
Hanyoukagome962- Sun 20 May 2007
|i love the fic so far but i just wanted to mention one thing, in chapter 20 you mention kagome figuring out she had schizophrenia i just wanted to correct you by saying she really had D.I.D (dissociative identity disorder). People who are schizo only hear voices and experience hallucination they dont take on a new personality only a person with D.I.D does that. When the other personality or alter ego is in control the real person has blackout and doesnt remember anything about what hapened when the alter is in control, however the alter (Nadia in Kagomes case) remebers everything even when theyre not in control. Anyway i just wanted to point that out to you and say that this is a really amazing fic.
Mika- Sun 20 May 2007
|Waa, how could you end it there!!??
Poor Kagome again...what a nightmare!!
I hop she'll recover soon ?!
|*gasp* oh my god. *love, love, love*
i really love how you've described her little dream hell. it's amazing.
so glad that inuyasha finally learned to keep his big trap shut. if he forgets again anytime soon... *grabs duct tape* let's just say it'd be in his best interest to remember.
Any9- Sun 20 May 2007
|I can hardly wait till your next update. I want to see what is going to hapen next.
Please update soon!
Violetcarson- Sat 19 May 2007
|YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jade was TOTALLY evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ADORED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But wait... *reads ending of chappie* NOOOOOO!!!!!! Nadia can't be gone!!!!!!!!! This sucks! Waaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sniffle* No, I shall not be angry *sniffle* I shall remain calm *sniffle, sniffle, cough, cough, laugh* WTF *evil laughter* Muahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*grabs chainsaw and follows Jade running screaming over the hill*
Honestly!!!! It wasn't me!!!!!!! It was the other half of my personality! Blame it on her!!!!!! *points*
Trice- Sat 19 May 2007
|This chapter was properly named because I was confused myself but once I start reading more I understood where you were going. It was still another good chapter and I look forward to reading more. I didn't know my use of violence had a time limit but I want to let you know that you are not the only one that is good at pulling hair! ") LOL
hazel- Sat 19 May 2007
|man I was like WHAT A CLIFFY! WTF? but damn. Nadia saves the day lol
Trice- Thu 17 May 2007
|The chapter was well worth the wait. I just hate that you left us hanging. I think I just might have to make use of that bat. I would have thought that Kagome would have put up more of a fight or even Nadia would have appeared. I guess the Nadia thing probably wouldn't have worked since they are becoming one. I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter.