More, more!!! We must have more!!!
I like this...no...I LOVE this!!!

This was really interesting, and I would love to read more, but I do have a question. It was Kagome he was talking about, right? But if it was, and this isn't a one-shot (which I don't think it is, seeing as you said it was incomplete) then how is she going to come back into the story? Anyway, great job! Keep writing!