DarkAngel495- Mon 16 Apr 2007
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PleaSe UpdAte SooN!! ThanKs i waNNa kNow What wIlL haPpen neXt!! ThanKs!!

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GleefulSorrow- Mon 16 Apr 2007
Holy crap. Poor Kagome. She needs to just...win the lottery or something. Poor kid.

Update soon please!!! Very interesting story :)

kimiko- Sun 15 Apr 2007
daw you endeded it too soon >_

Update update update...please?

Raceen_Ecstasy- Sun 15 Apr 2007
"When I was recuperating the hospital was used as a terrorist attack, guess who's ward was used as hostages and as a bargaining chip.. mine." I found that so funny, I don't know why.

Good start.

Koishii_Beloved- Sun 15 Apr 2007
Damn that girl has had a hard knocked life. That was really good for the first chapter. I hope to read more soon.

-River

mary- Sun 15 Apr 2007
your good but the man is disgusting but other wise your story matches up pretty good to the origonal besides inuysha being tied up and all -kagome was the one who got tied up-

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