Florny Girl- Sat 31 May 2008
Great now I'm wet. Thanks alot! (skulks)

Lunar Nightmare- Fri 18 Apr 2008
Don't worry about people not enjoying this, I thought this was kinda funny. I liked it, so don't worry, like I said, it was good.

dani- Fri 28 Dec 2007
cool story!!! u should right more.

lazy- Wed 04 Jul 2007
lemons... juicy =D

courtney- Mon 02 Jul 2007
i love you. this is soooooo funny. please be my friend. sorry, that sounded creepy. i just agree that there are too many inu hurts kag... stories out there. most of them suck, too. good job at mocking them!!!!!

VENNY- Sun 17 Jun 2007
I like it. The lemon overall is alright and the last two lines made me chuckle. I just hope my BF doesn't read this. He'll be telling me that he's not a pervert. He's just a guy. = P

Saraiyu Aes Sedai- Mon 28 May 2007
"I am not entirely convinced that you wish to live."

"What?"

"I believe that I require a second evaluation. Possibly a third."

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::gigglesnort:: LMAO!

Risa- Sat 05 May 2007
HILARIOUS!! Too bad it ended.

AxA- Thu 19 Apr 2007
that was so funny i am totaly annoyed with "inuyasha hurt kagome..." type stories too so more power to you
~AXA ^_^

Favi- Wed 11 Apr 2007
preety good

Dawn Hayashi- Tue 10 Apr 2007
I liked it...tasteful and funny

Rainumora- Tue 10 Apr 2007
That was awesome! I needed a reprieve from this type of fanfics as well, and you definatly pulled it. -thumbs up- Awesome one-shot. x3

Tabrikah- Tue 10 Apr 2007
Really funny! But one thing thats been nagging at my mind, Sesshoumaru with a male!!! Crazy! but all in all really good Humer/Parody

sesshomaru_lover13- Tue 10 Apr 2007
this was great....to get me to forget the pain a good laugh was involved,this is also the first story i have printed out seeing as the others were not worthy of my friends.

AnimeFanime18- Mon 09 Apr 2007
xD Little Tokijin. "No, Ka Go Me, I'm a male." Figures. xD I love this story! It's fricking hilarious!

deAth to Ko0Kie- Mon 09 Apr 2007
AH! I loved it, it was really funny, "little tokijin" that was great.... ^_^

inumaru_rapture- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Lets see... Inuyasha hurts Kagome (check) Sesshoumaru saves the day (check) Kagome's jealousy of his hair...(check) Sex (check) all there!

Good job! No worries about the hentai. Some people like smut...lol I like writing lemons, but I never can get too sure of doing too much into it--unless it's entirely necessary. Read my Utopia for examples--only one sex scene (so far) is laid out in detail.

Katherine- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Haha that was good

Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Mon 09 Apr 2007
*claps* Bravo! Bravo! A true work of genius!

You had me in freaking stitches at the 'Little Tokijin' part! Seriously though!

Loved the funny-ness of it all!

Great job, keep up the great work, and good luck on your stories that were nominated for the Annual Awards!

Toodles! and keep those fingers - a - typin' -!

Luvs, Ashley

royalbk- Mon 09 Apr 2007
*snickers* Good one! I too was getting rather tired of seeing those...unless well written, in which case I will happily read them (unfortunately, there aren't many of those)

*applauds* Loved the lemon! And loved the pervert Sesshoumaru who needs more than one go at it. *giggles*

Good work!

Elisa- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Parody or not that was good. If you have anymore you just can't get out of your head you should totally write them and post them because that was great.

~*Elisa*~

Keva- Mon 09 Apr 2007
I liked it. Very good if theres more to this I can't wait to see what happens next.

As for the lemon. I totally understand about writing them. I had the same problem and still do when I have to write one. I have found that with each one you write it gets a little better and easier to write. So be patient and just let it flow as it comes. Keva

Lady Ashira Taisho- Mon 09 Apr 2007
I think that for a spoof it was really good you know really you should have made it a little funnier though like those movies date movie or not another teen movie but it was still good.

GleefulSorrow- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Hahaha...awesome. That was a great little parody. Yay for you :)

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