wow...this is going in a differnet direction than I had anticipated...and I am highly intrigued by that direction. I was just on hoping for something goo to read, and you have provided it. Thank you very much!
- Sidhe
| I like it, it's very well thought out, but there is one problem. Your prologue is missing, you have the second chapter there instead...just thought you might want to know ^_^ update soon please!
| Ooooooooooh Fluffy you got it bad already...poor Jaken...then again,I am not overly fond of him so there :P
ElegantPaws- Sun 08 Apr 2007
| You know something, I am already bookmarking this piece, I have a very strong feeling I shall enjoy it. Write on...
mortefille- Sat 07 Apr 2007
Please write another chapter. I love how you write. Can you please make your chapters longer. ^.^
StormSIngerRaven- Sat 07 Apr 2007
Hello. I'm glad my challenge was undertaken. You seem to be doing rather well so far. I congratulate you. Keep up the good work.
Raven
BTW: Do you need a beta?
ren- Fri 06 Apr 2007
| Wow. This is written very well. I'm hooked! Please add on to the proloug!
Aya-chan- Fri 06 Apr 2007
| hey, i really like this fic, it's awsome. i've recently become a fan of sesshy/Kag fics, and i haver to say from everythign i've read so far you'rs is one of my favs!
| Such a promising start! ::bounces in her chair with glee::
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