Reviews for Visions by Mujitsu

Catherine- Sun 20 Jul 2008
Yayayayayayay! I'm thrilled to see a new chapter up! I'm still deadly curious to see where the story goes! You're a great writer with an interesting story to tell. Have confidence!!

Catherine- Sun 20 Jul 2008
Yayayayayayay! I'm thrilled to see a new chapter up! I'm still deadly curious to see where the story goes! You're a great writer with an interesting story to tell. Have confidence!!

Mlmonty- Fri 18 Jul 2008
That was great. I hope you continue it. It's such a captivating story.

Flightoffancy- Wed 16 Jul 2008
Hooray!!!!!

I am so glad that you have updated. I so love this story. Your characterizations are wonderful, you have captured everyone right to the bone (no pun intended (dog/bone)).

There is mystery, suspense,action and the dialog between the characters is sublime . You just keep getting better. Since you are one of my favorite authors it stands to reason that you would get better.

I think my favorite parts are when they are forced, by the bond and something much deeper, to comfort and protect each other. Acceptance is the greatest gift we can give each other and acceptance is what they give to each other. More than lust or companionship or protection.

I love this story and if you have to finish it somewhere else please let me know. Now that I know Wiccan is your beta I can harrass her as well. I love hearing from you so keep me posted.

My email is Flightoffancy55@yahoo.com.

Til next time, Deb.

sysclp- Tue 15 Jul 2008
Thank you so much for updating! Please have more confidence in yourself and your writing, your story is wonderful and very well written. I can't wait for the next installment!

*A-Kay*- Tue 15 Jul 2008
So exciting! So very happy you updated! Please oh please don't give up on this story. I love it so much. The mystery. The emotions. Everything. Since SS will be closing soon I'll be sure to keep up with it on FF.net.
*does happy dance* Wow that was an intense kiss.

Anna- Tue 15 Jul 2008
So glad to see that you've updated! I thought it was a wonderful chapter, with a very important development between Sess and Kag.

Great job; can't wait to see what's next.

hikari hime- Tue 15 Apr 2008
I really apreciated this fic, so thanks a lot for the good moments your writing gave me. ^_^

So........ Please, tell me you're continuing it???

damp puppy eyes>

dewa mata

Ice_Angel- Mon 03 Mar 2008
Please update! I want to know what happens next! It's getting exciting!

Catherine- Tue 26 Feb 2008
Great story!!! I'm always looking for new and interesting ways that Kagome and Sess can get together. Very well done! And very well written, too. I'm very much looking forward to the next chappie!
-Cat

Catherine- Mon 18 Feb 2008
Hello, Mujitsu,

Your fic, Visions, is AMAZING. You have a great plot and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work!

-Catherine

snowbirds- Sat 02 Feb 2008
Sadly, very sadly I removed this story from my fav list. Each day I check my fav list. Your story keeps coming up 0 updates. I have a feeling you've lost interest in your story since your updates are becoming farther apart. This saddens me since this story was so very enjoyable with the promise of even more. If you do rekindle your interest in this story enough to finish it, please e-mail me and I will gladly replace it on my fav list.

black- Wed 23 Jan 2008
that is an amazing story u wrote i loved it ,i check on it everyday in hope u update .
cant wait to know what happens next .
i usaully dont review but damm this story is good.
plz dont let us wait to lonf for the next chapter .thanxxx ur loyal fan

Megan Consoer- Sun 02 Dec 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

lunabelle- Sun 02 Dec 2007
I like this story very much. I actually found it months ago and have been waiting for the next chapter and the wait was worth it. You have capture my interest so please continue. I love the interaction between all the characters and how Kagome is not protraited as a weak human.

iloveprettysilverhair- Mon 26 Nov 2007
Great update! I love the story, you are doing a fantastic job; keep up the great work!

Ezriee- Fri 23 Nov 2007
I was absolutely relieved when I saw that you hadn't given up on this (props to wiccan!!). I think this is an excellent story with a plot that hasn't been done before. Those are not easy to find now days. You're doing it quite well and I hope you keep at it.

It doesn't matter if it takes you a week, two weeks, or even months, as long as you don't give up. Keep writing and I know for a fact that at least I'll still be here reading. Your work is too good to pass up and I'll just keep checking from time to time for the day where I can get all giddy because I'll be able to see what happens next in this wonderful story.

Good luck in your classes and don't give up!

Ezzy
Ps: If life gets you again, give it a figurative kick in the balls. It may not cry out or anything like that, things still may seem crappy or stressful, but hey, how many people can say they gave life a swift kick to the jewels?

Maru-KunKun- Fri 23 Nov 2007
yaaay !!!! -does happy dance- UPDATE SOOOOOON !!!

Jasmine- Thu 22 Nov 2007
I have to admit that this is one of the most addicting fanfictions I have ever read. The details are vivid and the plot is fantastic.

Erica- Thu 22 Nov 2007
I love this story &i'm desprate to know will happen next. Please update soon.

TruGemini- Wed 21 Nov 2007
Very intriguing story. Please update soon.

snowbird- Wed 21 Nov 2007
Thank you so much for the update. This chapter was very interesting and enjoyable. I'm glad to see that Sesshoumaru is finally beginning to accept his fate. Now he just needs to have patience for Kagome to be ready for him as a sexual partner. I'm curious if you're going to let the reader enter the world of the other miko as a separate story. I have to admit I'm curious about how she met Sesshoumaru's uncle, his personality, his looks. Also, how long were they together and did they have any children? I'm just full of questions aren't I? Oh and yes we can't forget about your mysterious evil soul stealer. It seems he's looking for a particular soul but who and why. Maybe the reincarnated soul of someone from his past? It's a thought since this killer is bound to be different in some way from the other killers that Kagome has encountered. I anxiously await the next update.

Koori Youkai Hime- Tue 20 Nov 2007
I love this story! Do you send out notices when you have updated? If you do, would you send them to me? I really want to continue reading this story. Please update soon! :)

chocolate- Tue 20 Nov 2007
So I have to admit that I sorta forget about this story. But once I saw that you updated , I re-read the chapters, and I'm hooked again. The growing relationship between them is making me giddy and that sexual tension, will I'm hoping it will snap soon. I'm glad you updated and I look forward to your future updates.
Mir.

sesshys_jaded_samuri- Mon 19 Nov 2007
ACk... I must apologize for my lack of reviewing. on your stories.. so here goes...

Gomen nasai (kneels on floor, placing forehead at your feet)

I truly am sorry for not taking the time to review your other stories, but I have read them... I have this REALLY bad habit of reading everything that catches my interest, so I save it to my computer and read it when I have time...

Well, I had time last night, and I read this story. It pulled me in and I was unable to even look at anything else until I had read every single word that was posted. I truly hope that you update this again soon, as I am so thoroughly hooked.

dsm1980- Mon 19 Nov 2007
I rarely review, even when I really like a fic. But if it's going to encourage you NOT to drop this story, then here I am, telling you this is some seriously good stuff you got going ;) Please rest assured I am dying to read more of this! I hope you won't keep me waiting for long.

Nyx- Mon 19 Nov 2007
I am so glad you didn't give up on this story! I love it so much and I am glad you have the inspiration to start writing it agian. I understand that life can get pretty hectic and writing a story, especially a good one, is a lot of work! I hope you will find the time to update soon, but if not I will wait patiently for the next chapter. Or as patiently as possible anyway. ;)

clavira- Wed 07 Nov 2007
Hey Mujitsu, just wanted to know how you're doing - I read the note at the end of ch. 4, and I realize that you're busy but I hope you'll manage to post another chapter sometime in the nearer future!

Inuzands- Mon 05 Nov 2007
How much do I love this fic, let me count the ways.....or not as I'm at work and need to hide the fact that I became addicted to this fic instead of working. :) I'm a huge fan of mysteries and this one has really hooked me in. I hope you haven't given up on this one, even though it looks like you're really busy, but I hope you update this when you have a chance! Keep up the excellent work!

snowbird- Fri 19 Oct 2007
I have fallen in love with this story. I like when Kag is strong as a human miko without having to make her a youkai or hanyou. I just like her to be able to live as long as Sess. I like unique plots which this one is. I don't think Sess is that much OOC because the anime never really delves into what emotions he hides behind a stoic facade. It only hints at certain ones. I know you said your're going to have a heavy class schedule so I won't whine too much (sniff, sniff), but it's been since 8/20 since you last updated. Could I twist your arm just a little bit? Please update when you can.

Bobbie- Thu 30 Aug 2007
i like this one i hope you finsh this soon and update i would like to know where it going to go thank you

CrabbyBrat- Wed 29 Aug 2007
Hey Hey, I've been reading your stuff since FROP, and I still enjoy your fanfics! I know things are really getting busy for ya, but I'm glad the passion and enthusiasm in your writing haven't died out! Can't wait for the next chapter ^^

Mlmonty- Thu 23 Aug 2007
Very nice story I hope you finish it.

Sarah- Wed 22 Aug 2007
You shouldn't be surprised at your nominations. Truly your stories are brilliant and this one is no different. I find that I ignore anything that is construed as OOC because I am so wrapped up in your plot that I simply don't care.

Deepest sympathies with the bio unit. I remember my own two semesters of it less than fondly. Thank goodness I changed my major. Still, keep your head up it can't last forever.

Rhonda- Wed 22 Aug 2007
I hope this reaches you... Just wanted you to know that you have become one of my favorite authors.

I have a handful that I read WHATEVER they write (well, InuYasha items anyway) and I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy ALL your stories... I can't wait for Visions to be updated and I just finished reading Midnight Meets Moonlight and Speechless and For Richer or Poorer. (In fact I stayed up WAY WAY to late several nights in a row to finish them)

Your writing style is so fluid and well written that I can actually see the characters in my minds eye. I fall in love with them all over again.

I thank you for sharing your incredible talent with us.
Rhonda

chiyori- Tue 21 Aug 2007
I think its amazing how your doing all the other work and you still make time for a story. I wish I was good like that,
I didnt want this chapter to end it was great even though the characters are a tad OC I really like it.

dsm1980- Tue 21 Aug 2007
This story just keeps getting better and better! I wish you could update sooner, though. Anyhow, keep up the good work :)

Nightqueen- Mon 20 Aug 2007
I absolutely love this fic! The storyline is very original and I love the way you've written the characters. You've done an incredible job so far and I for one can't wait to read the next chapter.

serasvictoria666- Mon 20 Aug 2007
I'll wait as long as it takes for your updates. I think I wrote this before, this is one of my favorites fics! ^-^
And I will definitely look into that voting thing for this fic. Your story definitely deserves to win! Good luck!

*A-Kay*- Mon 20 Aug 2007
awesome chap. update soon. this is a great story.

demonlordlover- Mon 20 Aug 2007
Fantastic update. I loved the way they woke up, and how you are drawing out Sesshoumaru's decision on whether or not to embrace the whole 'Chosen One' theme.

The killer is certainly a nasty bit of work, and the dream she had of the past gave added depth to the backstory.

The characterizations are well done, in my opinion. Congratulations on your nomination, you certainly deserve it! This could place for best AU/AR as well, I think.

Jenn- Mon 20 Aug 2007
I like the different take that you have and I eagerly await the next installment.

Rhonda- Wed 01 Aug 2007
I really love your storyline and can't wait for you to update. Don't take too long... I have saved this link in my files and will hope to see an update soon... Rhonda

loveyaa1210- Fri 29 Jun 2007
I really enjoy your story and can't wait to see or read what is going to happen next. I really love the idea behind the story and I can only imagine where the story is going to go next. (*smiles*)

Maru-KunKun- Tue 26 Jun 2007
okay, im reviewing!! so update !!!
i love this story !! its very original, and the characters are mostly .. in character. obviously at times shesshomaru is .. different .. but that makes sense in this case. and it works.
keep it up. loved the last chappie XDDD
UPDATE SOOOOOON PLEASE !!!! XD
Ja-ne.

lilmoe31- Tue 26 Jun 2007
Two words; LOVING IT. This fic is quickly becoming one of my favs, You are already there as one of my favorite writers. Midnight meets Moonlight was simply delicious. I love your writing style. Please, I beg of you to go on writing and updating this beautiful peice of literature. (sorry bout all that for some insane reason I felt a need to sound smart in this review for you.) But please do continue on with this fic, I'm so loving it. Update soon. Thanks

serasvictoria666- Mon 25 Jun 2007
An update of yours always has me smiling!
I still am in love with your wonderful fic and I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

Risa- Mon 25 Jun 2007
I loved the dialogs and the details. Very insightful and joy to read.
So happy you updated. :-)

*A-Kay*- Mon 25 Jun 2007
I love your story. Please update soon as you get a chance.

*A-Kay*- Mon 25 Jun 2007
I love your story. Please update soon as you get a chance.

bluemoon_175- Mon 25 Jun 2007
Yay, another udpate. I love your story, it's fantastic and I can't wait to read more. It's stories like these I hate when they end, but the author seems to always come up with more fantastic stories. I can't wait to read more of your future stoies. So I hope you keep up the fantastic job and try to update as soon as you can.

Rhonda- Mon 25 Jun 2007
WOW!!! I got the link to this story from your beta (Wiccan, I Think) and just LOVE the first 3 chapters. I can't believe that (according to the note before chapter 2) you had serious doubts as to your writing ability. You are truly gifted in protraying a situation and people. I felt I was in your story and felt connected to the people.

I don't write reviews often, but I have my favorite authors, and I have to say.... you have joined the rank of favorite. Your story line is consistent and characters are on target and I find I like how they are protrayed and the story environment you have put them in.

So for my money, you are one the mark and get 5 Stars ***** and a A+++. Write again soon, can't wait for the next installment.
Thanks,
Rhonda

inukamisashi- Mon 25 Jun 2007
more more more!!! ^^

kamori- Mon 25 Jun 2007
I am very much in love with this fic, please keep up the good work. ^-^

Arryelle- Mon 25 Jun 2007
Very nice can't wait for more. Great detail too and I love the plot as well it's an amazing story so far keep it up

Arry

fizzywig- Mon 25 Jun 2007
you already have me hooked to your story. I usually like canon fics but yours still keeps to the original characters in a new setting and makes it fun and interesting to read. Keep up the awesome work. I eagerly await your next update.

Andia- Sun 24 Jun 2007
This is entirely wonderful! I love it just as I have loved your other works!!!!! Keep up the fantastic work... okay I sound like a cheerleader. But seriously, it's very good. You have me hanging on the last sentence.

Nyx- Sun 24 Jun 2007
I was so excited to see another chapter up! I hope you update agian soon!

autumngold- Sun 24 Jun 2007
I love your fabulous new update!! Poor Kagome, even though she feels comforted by Sesshoumaru's pressence, it must be terrible to know that he doesn't want it or her!! I hope he doesn't fight it too much, or she might never trust that he cares for her!! This is such a great story!! I hope you update again soon!!

Gryphonwills- Sun 24 Jun 2007
I love this story!

mlmonty- Sun 24 Jun 2007
I have to say this is bookmark worthy. Thanks Wiccan for posting this as a read at demonlordlover's yahoo group or I wouldn't have known this was out there.

Jenna- Sun 24 Jun 2007
I just started reading your story today and I have to say that I'm hooked. I love the plot and how you bring the characters to life. You write wonderfully and I can't wait to read what happens next. Update again soon :]

Sidhe- Sun 24 Jun 2007
WHAT DO YOU MEAN, YOU NEED MOTIVATION??? You're already damned good...::grumbles:: people like you write the kind of stories that motivate the rest of us...

But on a more serious note, I had been waiting for another update on this for a while now, and am most pleased with the results! ::giggles:: you have just joined the very short ranks of my favorites list!

- Sidhe

Giannix- Sun 24 Jun 2007
i loved it :D

Flightoffancy- Sun 24 Jun 2007
Hooray!!!!! Mujiitsu is BACK with a vengence. This is a wonderful story. It is exciting, action packed, mysterious, malevolent, terrifying and heart-wrenching. Also very funny in a couple of places.

I really liked it when she pinned Kouga and Inuyasha to the wall. The connection between Kagome and Sesshomaru is spell-binding. I read these chapters in record time and was aching for more.

I am so glad to find another story from you. You are one of my very favorites. I don't care how long it takes you to update. Don't apologize for it. You have a life too. We are just blessed that you have a driving need to write and post these creative imaginings for us.

I just think it is a shame that any of the authors feel they have to explain their stories to anyone. There are many stories that I don't connect to or just flat out don't like, but there is no reason to discourage someone from writing what they want. I just don't read any more of it.

It takes alot of courage to write something from your heart and put out there for people to read. You cannot please everyone no matter how hard you try. Not everything is going to appeal to me and it shouldn't. Don't let them discourage you. I don't want to lose you too.

Now I have to go and do my "Mujitsu Is Back" happy dance. Til next time, Deb.

demonlordlover- Sun 24 Jun 2007
Lovely chapter! I'm offically in love with "Visions!"

So much Sesshoumaru/Kagome interaction! And, while not all of it was fluffy love, it whetted my appetite for romance while making me smile. I could definately feel his reluctance to accept the bond, while Kagome's desire to hold onto him, despite her pride, was so true to character!

I hope you are enjoying writing this as much as I am reading it!

dsm1980- Sun 24 Jun 2007
Truly, this IS getting interesting /\_/\ More plz

Faye- Sun 24 Jun 2007
WOW!!!!! Very good! Please update soon!!!!

tiny- Sat 09 Jun 2007
this has got to be one of the best stories youve done so far... its so detailed and just so intense already that a reader cant help but beg for more... i just hope you realize that this story is a instant eye catcher once you start reading... well hope you update soon and keep up the great plotline!!!! ^-^ peace out, girlscout,
tiny

Megan- Mon 04 Jun 2007
AWESOME! I love your writing style--It's so thought out clean that I can't stop reading!! (you make me late to my classes) :)

Great JOB!

Update sooooonnnn!

ezzy- Mon 04 Jun 2007
You know, I've read these two chapters multiple times and I haven't gotten tired of it yet. I just wanted to stop and let you know that you're doing a wonderful job! I can't wait to see what happens next with this!

Ezzy

anime pixie- Thu 24 May 2007
I am enjoying this story so far and I hope that you will continue with it. Please don't make us wait too long for the updates! I love all of your previous work so don't lose faith in yourself and your ability to write this story. Happy writing!! :)

Maru-KunKun- Tue 22 May 2007
omg u updated !! woooot !! -dies happy- i loved this chappie XDDD soo very good, and sad and and and and ... me loved !! -does happy-squee-dance- XDD very good very good XDDD pllllease update soooon !! i can't wait 4 u 2 ! Ja-ne. Good writtin XDD

WiccanMethuselah- Mon 21 May 2007
OMG, now that I've read both chapters, I am AMAZED that you even THOUGHT about giving up on this!!! Please, PLEASE, the next time you have an aberrant thought like that, CONTACT ME!! You have my email ... don't hesitate!

To put it simply, this story has all the classic hooks that the very BEST of fan fiction has ... Kags, Sessh, danger, unwilling attraction, instinct vs. rational thought ... WOW. And all in only TWO chapters. M'dear, you are TEH SHITZ!! Seriously!

I am now completely and irretrievably HOOKED. I will hound you mercilessly to complete this story. Well, maybe not quite THAT bad, but I will become the biggest pain in your inbox if you so much as whimper about abandoning it again! So THERE!

Um, sorry ... I get so carried away sometimes. Anyway, in case you couldn't tell, I loved every minute of it. Please ... don't mind the crazy lady ... continue!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

Faerie- Sun 20 May 2007
This is one of the best new stories I've read in a long time!! You're doing a great job. I wondered where you had gone after your last story; I thought that one was great too. I'm glad you are back and writing Sess/Kag again.

ChaosWingDragon- Sun 20 May 2007
*stares* You’re worried that your writing isn’t up to par? Pft! What have you been smoking? This story is freaking awesome! It is structured very well, is superbly written and is so original there is nothing that comes even close. I even threw a little hissy fit when the first chapter ended. Imagine, a grown woman flailing around like a 2 year old in the cereal isle^^. No matter how long it takes for an update I will definitely be waiting. The hooked,
~Chaos

serasvictoria666- Sun 20 May 2007
You really shouldn't feel disappointed at this second chapter. I thought it was amazing! I totally liked the part when she stops the fight between Kouga and Inuyasha. So funny! And the part where Sesshoumaru holds her... I don't think my smile could get any bigger. lol
I definitely am in love with your fic and cannot wait to read the rest of it. You truly are an amazing writer.

Aly- Sat 19 May 2007
Man, if this is your feel good fic it's my extremely bright star in the day. *sighs in contentment* This fic is AMAZING! I mean, we're talking mind blowing, eyes glued to the screen, making funny noises to yourself(that sounded wierd) amazing. Sigh, I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm hooked beyond belief, please update soon!

v1cky84- Sat 19 May 2007
I love reading your fanfics...you are such a talented writer. I'm glad that you have come up with another S/K fanfic. I personally thought that these two chapters were great. I hope you'll update soon.

Trice- Sat 19 May 2007
I am really enjoying reading this story. I think you are a little to hard on yourself. I guess you are you worst critic. I didn't find anything wrong in how you had the two meet. It needed to have some tention but having the attraction there as well. This is a great story and I look forward to reading more.

autumngold- Sat 19 May 2007
Shame on you!! You are never, ever to doubt your writing abilities again!! You are an incredible author!! I love all of your stories!! This one is amazing!! I love the fact that Sesshoumaru fought against going to Kagome!! That was so in character!! He would hate having to obey and even though he is attracted to Kagome I imagine he hates being the "Chosen One." Please update again soon!! This is such a great story!!

Inukamisashi- Sat 19 May 2007
don't look down on yourself. you're such a good writer that i'm already hooked up with this story from the the moment I read the first chapter. You're really good! Looking forward to the next installments! ^^

Noacat- Sat 19 May 2007
Like an idiot, I almost didn't read this story. I'm SO glad I did. Sometimes avoiding being an idiot is hard... but it's what we must do to read awesome fanfiction like this...

dsm1980- Sat 19 May 2007
I'm so happy with your new story. The plot looks interesting, while the way Sesshoumaru and Kagome (she really kicks ass!!!) seem to connect feels promising enough. I don't know what you had planned for ch2 that you felt disappointed. All in all, I think it rocked. I'm dying for more here!!! I hope you won't leave your faithful readers stranded for too long, ne ;)

mir- Sat 19 May 2007
I found the wait worth it. I'm glad you are attached to this story, because I 'm already attached. Thus far, the story development is very intriguing.

Mir

killing perfection- Sat 19 May 2007
Why did you have to stop there, are you trying to make me cry, I'm crying now are you happy? wah wah wah
I want moooooore!!!!!!

autumngold- Tue 17 Apr 2007
The beginning of your story is wonderful!! Both Sesshomaru and Kagome's characters are so interesting!! I can't wait to see how their first meeting will go, something tells me not so good!! Please update again soon!!

Risa- Sun 25 Mar 2007
Welcome Back!
This story is awesome! I love it!

Chiyori- Wed 21 Mar 2007
I just wanted to say that Im glad your writing another sess/Kag story because I loved midnight meets moonlight and I have no doubt that this story will turn out to be just as good. Please update soon I really want to know what happens. [Sorry if I seem impatient I write too and I know its time consuming.] =]

amanda- Sun 18 Mar 2007
i think that this story will turn out to be your best. i can not wait for the upcomming chapters and to find out where this story headed. great job and hope you update soon!

Ezzy- Sat 17 Mar 2007
I gotta say, you have me hooked already with this one. I love all your stories because they're so damn good! keep up the excellent work and I cant wait to see Sesshomaru-sama's reaciton to Kagome!

Wonderful!
Ezzy

Inusbabe- Fri 16 Mar 2007
Read this last night on MM.org and really enjoyed it.

xPimx- Fri 16 Mar 2007
Yay! A new story by Mujitsu! I have read all of your other stories and I can honestly say that I can't wait for more of this one. You are one of my favorite authoress'. =]

Until the next chapter,
A.J.

mortefille- Fri 16 Mar 2007
nooooooooo how could you stop right there argh I wanted to ahh please update. sooon ^.^

Naomi- Thu 15 Mar 2007
I like the setting and tone of this new story. I'm so excited right now I don't even know where to begin! So for now, thank you for your hard work and I eagerly await the next chapter.

Jean- Thu 15 Mar 2007
Sounds like the beginning of an intriguing story. I will look for updates hopefully soon.

cyin- Thu 15 Mar 2007
wow! ur story's great! please update soon!

sumire- Thu 15 Mar 2007
HURRAY YOU'RE BACK!!!! :D

This story sounds VERY INTERESTING. XD ::on a caplock spree::

As usual, the plot is super unique and the characters are... well, in character XDDDD

I hope to see another chapter soon!!! I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru and the others react to Kagome!!!!!!!!! ::EXCITEMENT TO THE MAX!::

jam_on_it- Thu 15 Mar 2007
This is one of the best fics i have read in a long time!! Please update soon.Good luck and please write more!!

DarkMiko6Decortiquer- Thu 15 Mar 2007
I like, I like I like! ^_^

-Dani.

UPDATE SOON!

And what will Sesshy think when he sees the leggy brunnette with startling blue eyes? Will he mistake her as weak as he asumes her petite form to be all that there is? Or will she surprise him and prove that there is more to her than big boobs, and sexy long eyelashes that enrapture prey?

Who will be the hunter and who will be the prey?

Silverwaters- Thu 15 Mar 2007
Wow. I am really excited for this story and I can't wait to read the rest. The disclaimer at the end gave me some high hopes for a well written and ::ahem:: interesting story. ~_- Good luck with it!

HonouTenshi- Thu 15 Mar 2007
Wow! One chapter and I'm already hooked. XD I loooove your writing style....and I don't think I noticed even one mistake. Very good, I can't wait for your next update! ^_^

I like the idea of Kagome having those visions! But, wow, I wouldn't want to be her...having to die in each and every one. That's awful. But, it's good that she is strong and is able to deal with it.

Hehe, Sesshomaru-sama still has trouble keeping himself from killing the annoying humans. XD LOL!!

I, too, love a good mystery, and I can't wait to see who the killer is. XD Update soon! ^_^

itachiiyoubastard- Thu 15 Mar 2007
Hellz yeah! Update soon!

demonlordlover- Thu 15 Mar 2007
Well, you got me at the 'feel good' part.

This is promising the be an interesting ride. I haven't read anything like this before, so the element of an 'original' definately adds appeal to this for me.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Well, actually, I can wait. This is going on my must read list. Thanks for the new fic!

SesshysKagome A.K.A. Sesshomarus Angel Bride- Thu 15 Mar 2007
Your work is as impressive as ever Mujitsu-san. I really like this story and can't wait for more.

bluemoon_175- Thu 15 Mar 2007
Sounds like a really good story so far and i can't wait to read more so i hope you update asap please.

hasu86- Thu 15 Mar 2007
i must say that it's definitely intriguing so far. mmhmmm, as i'm already a fan of yours, it's great to see another fic by you! i'm really excited about this though and what person doesn't like a little lemony action here and there?!?! haha, i know i do! can't wait to read more so please continue soon!
-hasu86

SesshomaruCrazy- Thu 15 Mar 2007
Wow!!! Sounds interesting so far... I surley like it so far... I am looking forward to the mext chapters... You have my attention... Poor Kagome though having to keep seeing her own death,,, makes the story interesting...
Iam sure I will enjoy this as much as your Moonlight meets Midnight...
I have you as one of my Favorite Authors...
Hurry and update please... It sounds like its going to be a great story....
Take Care
Mari

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