that was totally awesome lookin 4ward to next story!!!!!!!!!

its pretty good so far, kinda sad how everyone seems to pick on inuyasha, but to each their own. sesshoumaru is a bit out of character, but no worries. im off to read part 2 now

Update soon!!!! P.S. I know that Sesshoumaru is still alive. He was just transported somewhere else right? Well update soon ok?!!! ^_~

oh wow! this amazing! i just adore this story!

Bummer about them having hanyou. They're too chaotic, insecure, and uncontrolled.

I just read the first part is so sad, but here go my favorite quotes
‘Oh kami…I can feel her legs, her chest…No wonder why Inuyasha preferred this way to travel…you can feel every muscle tension in her body.’ Sesshoumaru had to mask his scent of arousal from the kit, as he took off and felt her legs squeeze into his sides. Suppressing a groan that would surely give him away, he made sure to dance along the treetops, just to feel her legs tension into his body.

"Don’t you dare insult my Kagome, you filthy pile of regurgitated horse shit! She’s never done anything but care for you and love you even when you pushed her away! Just because she is my mate and carrying my pups does not mean you have the right to insult her or my pups! Do you understand me?" His voice was slow, deep, and angry, a deep growl emitting from his throat at each word. Inuyasha stared in shock then anger at the man who held him aloft by his neck.

PLZ make him NOT be dead..................................... AND show up................ JUST as Kagome goes into LABOR............................. and she is ONLY able to gain back her will to live................. when he YELL's her name while holding her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was so sad. I was in tears literally. Will there be more? I hope so and maybe with a little happiness in the end.