Reviews for Koikokoro (Awakening Love) by cloud_wolfbane
Kawaii_Kilala- Fri 29 Feb 2008
Well, i read the sequal (koinonayami (Love Troubles), and i think it is a VERY GREAT story! it's full of Drama, and Suspense, and it has just the right amount of detail....and though you said you went over it sometimes, i still found quiet a few errors :-P im picky sometimes, todays just one of those days....;-P lol........well, i was slightly confused about the in-depth detail of Cloud, and why you explained all that history on Huskies, it makes some sense now, but not so much that im like "oh wow, totaly needed that" its more of an 'un-needed detail that pertains to story somewhat', lol, but, i found it very interesting....and, does that mean they aren't good gaurd dogs then?
I'm hoping you up-date somewhat regularly, because its an almost common known fact that i am forgettful, and i almost forgot the name of a story i was reading ('Sunset Love' on fanfiction.net) so i had to go looking for three whole hours -THREE!- and then i finally found it, it was by some mirakle that i remembered it because of kags being injured by a 'drugged' sesshy....i wont ruin it for you incase you are interested, but,kags tries to warn sessh of something, and this drugg (or poison as i call it) made him loose his head -so to speak- and he grabbed her by the shoulders, and sunk his claws in, un'knowingly poisoning her....thats the only reason i remotly even remembered it! lol.....
And, about the story that is the one this is a sequal to, you shouldn't have rated it NC-17, because there really wasn't any sex in it, and the movies today do have sceans that happen before a rape takes place, and those are rated pg16, so.....yeah, should have rated it R, not NC-17, lol, sorry, but it annoys me sometimes (most of the time) when an author rates a story in-correctly, like, my daughter (5 years old now, but this was two years ago) love inuyasha stories just as much as me, so, i look for a g-pg rated story, i find one that she likes, and i read it aloud, and guess what in it! a Lemon! in a g rated story, a LEMON! pft, needless to say, i told that author off, and said if they cant rate it correctly, then they should have someone else post it, because it was a nice story (Kagome Loves Holidays by sesslover) but, next thing i know when i go back to appologise, the author and story are gone, like from all sites, i felt so very guilty and mad, I never got to finish it! Grrr!
Well, im off topic! Up-date soon! Can't possibly wait! oh, and im going to read your story 'A New Way To Look At Things' as soon as you explain what you mean by ~Other~ as the status, but, im going to read 'Anything' real quick, like in the next day or so, before the first week of march is over with!
lol! Well UP-DATE SOON!
(again....:-P)
TTFN!
joanne
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Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Fri 23 Feb 2007
I just finished reading the prequel to this story and I really like it. Good job.
This is a great start so far and I hope you will update again soon!
Ja!
-[Ashley x3]
Sesshy's angel18- Thu 22 Feb 2007