Anon, maybe YOU should do better research. The Brothers Grimm wrote a version of the Pied Piper of Hamelin in 1816. In 1888 Robert Browning wrote and published a poem by the same name based on the same events. The story itself is quite old as it was an actual event that took place in 1284 in the German town of Hamelin.

So, Crystal don't listen to a word she said or take any offense from the RUDE way she said it. You go right on writing your story.

You did typo the beginning though, unless that was purposeful. o.o

You might want to rethink your summary, before someone flames you. There is no, and never has been any story/poem called 'Piped Piper by Robert Browning'. The poem that you are reciting in your chapter, is the 'Pied Piper of Hamlin', and was from the Brothers Grimm... If you are going to write a fic, based on a professionally published work, you need to make sure that you have your sources and facts correct.