Jaded_butterfly- Wed 28 May 2008
awesome. thanks for updating. cant wait for the next chapter

bell- Wed 28 May 2008
good story, i really enjoyed so far.

Kelly- Sat 26 Apr 2008
Great story! The ending, while sad when Kagome got yelled at by her dragon, was funny when Inu talked about the mating! can't wait to see how they will handle this!

Hieisdarkdragon7- Fri 29 Feb 2008
This is a pretty good story. Theres not a lot of dragon storys out there. Keep up the good work.

Also i don't know if anyone else noticed this but Ekira is Arike spelled backwards. lol

Lady Kubira- Wed 27 Feb 2008
Oh good one hurry with the next chapter!

Princess_Of_The_Stars- Wed 27 Feb 2008
Whoa, that's a lot to swallow for Kagome and Sesshoumaru huh?

Though I'm sure their mating will be worth it in the end, in anycase I really like this story, its pretty diffrent from the ones I've read.

Update soon!

Jaded_butterfly- Tue 26 Feb 2008
awesome as always keep up the updates when you can. cant wait for the next chapter!!!

hasu86- Tue 26 Feb 2008
I was wondering where this story went! I'm glad to see an update though. I really love the world you've created. All the little details and the descriptions are absolutely lovely and I can't help falling in love with these dragons. Excellent job and the chocolate bit had me laughing.

I'm looking forward to the next part, reading all their reactions. Makes me excited!

-hasu86

Susan- Mon 02 Jul 2007
Im not even into th story far enough to really leave a comment, but it reminds me soo much of eragon. Am i right?

mina- Sun 01 Jul 2007
love it, more please...very new idea to the fandom

Cosmos Writer- Fri 29 Jun 2007
This is a very interesting story. Being a huge fan of the *Pern* series, I can't wait to read more!

Cosmos Writer- Fri 29 Jun 2007
This sounds remarkably like the Dragonriders of Pern books. I love that series, it's one of the best i have every read.

TONI- Fri 29 Jun 2007
GOOD!

Alyakcm- Fri 08 Jun 2007
I still love this story! I t is one of my favorites, and I really wish you could update it, PLEASE! I know you are proabably busy and stuff, but could you please maybe take some time to just update this, please!

Raven88- Wed 02 May 2007
Oh I like I like I really like this story:)
Could you please write more often?
(Beggs on knees)

Trice- Wed 02 May 2007
I am glad that you updated this story because I missed reading it. It is very unique and I look forward to reading more.

matimay- Thu 08 Mar 2007
please please please keep writing! i'm begging you!(and i despise begging) i love stories like this and this one caught me immediatly. keep up the exellent work!

Alisa- Sat 24 Feb 2007
I love it. It is great. Please keep up the good work. can't wait for you to update again.

Lady Kagome-sama(^_^)- Thu 22 Feb 2007
i LOVE ur fic PLEAZE SUBMIT NEW CHAPPIES.

Amara sama- Wed 21 Feb 2007
Such devious Dragons!!!!!! I can't wait to see what is going to happen, once Sesshoumaru and Kagome realize the dragons pulled a fast one!!!! LOL! Great chapter! Hope to read more soon!

sesshou's gurl- Wed 21 Feb 2007
I like the direction that the story is going in. Update soon ok??!!! Ps. how do you manage to come up with all the details of the story.??!!! Anywayz just update soon. OK?~!@@@

Zyren- Wed 21 Feb 2007
woah!woah!woah! Major problem detected!....no more chapters.......

fluffy- Wed 21 Feb 2007
cute chappie ^^ Can't wait till the next one!

Frozen Rose- Mon 19 Feb 2007
WRITE MORE LOTS AND LOTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

neptunie- Mon 19 Feb 2007
I really like this story cloud-wolfbane-san. It actually attracts me alot more than other stories and while I'm reading it I just feel as if I want to read more. so please continue writing the story. I love It!

Seli- Mon 19 Feb 2007
Wonderful story! I, for one, love the world of dragons. It's so wonderful to finaly have a fanfiction on this site with such an awsome theme.

There was a few mistakes in the first chapter. Like 'majestic lookin beans'. Now unless you call demons 'beans' I think that they are beings instead. Also, homophones. I cant stress enough on homophones. They, they're, and their happen to be the worst in most grammar. You, happen to have 'their' when it should be 'they're'. Think it was when Kagome was guessing the gender of the new dragon egg in the first chapter.

Also, there were a few run on sentences. As well as a few instances where commas were sorely needed. (Perhaps a quick revision of the chapter is in order.) Just stating the errors incase you want to make this story error free.

One mistake in the first chapter stuck out like a sore thumb. It was when the readers got a first look at the mating barn. When it was talking about the rooms for the dragons' partners, you said that they were 'human' partners eventhough there hadn't been a dragon bonded to a human till Kagome in the next chapter.

Meh, just ignore my rantings if they offend you or annoy you...I'm just a really huge grammar nut, but for the life of me, can't correct my own writing.

I love the story none-the-less. I'm absoutly enthralled with it, and can't wait to see what happens next. The suspence is murder. I will be looking out for resemblences to Eragon (the book, not the way off movie) since that, sadly, is the only one of the books listed I've read.

Please turn this wonderful idea into a masterpeice!

Eternity of Tears- Mon 19 Feb 2007
wow, i love this! ^_^
dragons are amazing.
=)

Well, if it isn't a bother, do you think you could email me when you update?
i'd appreciate it.=)

Well, anyways great chapter and please update soon!

hasu- Mon 19 Feb 2007
hmmmm...now this is quite interesting and not to mention a little different. you've certainly caught my attention, =) continue soon!

Amara sama- Mon 19 Feb 2007
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is SO original! I L.O.V.E. your plot line too! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Kris- Mon 19 Feb 2007
Wow, can't wait for the update. This seems like it is going to be a really great story.

sesshou's gurl- Mon 19 Feb 2007
Update like tommorow or now!!! **jokes***
Good story though.

Rowen- Mon 19 Feb 2007
That it just too cool those were the three I was going to guess! Update soon I really like this;D

BlueKitsune79- Mon 19 Feb 2007
I love it so far. I'm glad that you updated, can't wait for the next chapter... Dragon's blood was a cool story but I love your much more.

Frozen-Rose- Wed 07 Feb 2007
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AND SOON>PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ari- Sat 03 Feb 2007
Dragonriders of Pern... probably Eragon... and perhaps some of Earthsea?
Im only placing bets on the first one though.
good luck with the thread
Ari

Darkness- Thu 01 Feb 2007
please review soon i love

kiki- Thu 01 Feb 2007
I love love love you story it remind me of a book i read but i cant remember the name.. I LOVE UR STORY PLZ CONTINUE

Elisa- Thu 01 Feb 2007
This story is very interesting I really hope you decide to continue it. Fantasy stories are the best, though I haven't read any with dragons, I think I'll start now especially after reading this. ^_~

purp1ebabe- Thu 01 Feb 2007
interesting story im looking forward to seeing how its gunna turn out.

Fluffy- Thu 01 Feb 2007
This story started out awesome! I can't wait until you update.
I can't really think of many dragon stories since i haven't read many, but the only dragons stuffz I can think of is 'Dealing with Dragons' and then the movie 'Eragon'

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