Thia is awsome i love the idea of the plot and kira is a awsome charactor she is like my favorite i like sango with a demon it makes a great twist please write more soon

another good chapter. can't wait for the next one to come out. plz update soon.
keep on keepin on,
E.

This is one of the best fanfictions I've read and am always checking for updates so keep it up! Oh, and if you get the chance read mine.

that was soooo totally awsome! You should create more fanficts! you ROCK!!!

i love your story and i like the charater Kira (she's my favorit). I wish you luck in finding your muse and hope that you update as soon as you can. Please don't keep us waiting for to long.

why have you not up dated yet? i really love this story please up date soon

i love it please continue.

i love this story i hope you update soon

hye this is a great story and I thank you for the editing but i have ti ask when do we get to see a new chapter ?

this is an awsome story keep writing and please update soon

that chapter was.. intense. i think they all fell in love a little too quickly, but i like your fic.

i love your story and i hope it wont take long 4 the next chap.

this is a really good story i'm hooked can't wait till you write more keep up the great work! ^.~

Well it seems like naraku just is acting up again to bad that they can't put a collar around his neck and shove him in a coner when he's bad. LOL oh the picture I could see him pouting to.LOL well post soon.

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Aw, love your update. Please get another chapter out soon!

this was good. The funniest part was hen kira was kidnpped and she started to annoy that A** hole driver. i fell bacwords lauging.!!!!!!!

I love this story please update soon
Kamorea Chan

hey this chapter is really good and so it the rest my favorite part is the tatoo and the car case and forget the fist commet i sent with just my name.

first off i just wanted to say that u r a really good writer and the first chaper was really funny and sad. so i hope to see a next book out. and keep up the good work.

first off i just wanted to say that u r a really good writer and the first chaper was really funny and sad. so i hope to see a next book out. and keep up the good work.

This is awesome!! It has a great plot and really creative characters that really express themselves. It's vibrant and very enjoyable. You do make some grammar and spelling problems, but those are so easily fixed you barely need to think about them. It's awesome, so please update soon!!

Glad to see you didn't abando this story. I love the updates, and I look forward to more chapters, not only about Kagome & Sess, but Kira, Sango, and their mates-to-be.

Never mind the first question about Miroku. I still like the story. Keep up the good work. ^_^

The story gets better with every chapter, but I have to ask a couple of questions: What happened to Miroku in this story and do you plan to bring Inuyasha or any other characters back? Keep up the good work ^_^

i love it dont listen to the others LOL well i say Kira should be intamate now LOL great story keep up the good work

Kamorea Chan

now for kira and toga

got to zay so luv the story ,but ya kira should be mated now. please update soon so luv the story

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It is so funny!Kira says ALOT of bad words but Istill like it.

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i love your story your kira character reminds me of one of my friends great job so far i cant wait until the next chapter

kira should get intimet with toga (and kags with sessho that was just an opionon)

Duh you can't make us wait that would be to cruel.

LATER I say later toga should be older than sesshy' right now or else it seems like he is a pedo *gonk*

Oh you realiy got this story going good.I can't wait to see what happens next."Plz"update soon.

Gee...Im so mad at myself for not reviewing your story earlier. I'm sorry. I've been reading it since the second chapter. Anyway, I love it! Any story that can send off my imagination and make me split my sides is a good one. I liked the pranks on the three princesses and I have another nickname for Naraku that my friend and I came up with some odd years ago. Banana Balls...lol. Update soon kay?^_^Ja ne!

I love it so much!!!!!!!!!
Please make the evil plan of kira's really evil (hahahahahahahaha).
I will wait a long time for this story for I really like, no, love it.

Your story is very interesting. I like it. Inuyasha, though, needs a good spanking from his Dad or Kira (his soon-to-be stepmother) and Kagome should get the rest of her soul from Kikyo (or Kinky-hoe; She's rather useless now that she doesn't have her miko powers). Will he come back in this story? If I were you, I'd hook Miroku up with Mimi or someone else in Sesshomaru's palace (Lady Aina?). Anyway, keep up the good work and I hope see more of this story. ^_^

this is your first? I LOVE it!!!!!! I don't know why and I don't care I like it so that means you have to update at LEAST once every week cause......cause I said so. I really like there are some time problems and sometimes I get sidetracked, but it's all good. So......Keep up the good work and update soon!!!!!!!!!

I love this chapter. Kagome, Kira, and Sango are gonna kick some snobs ass! Lol. Any ways can't wait for the next chapter.

i have been keeping a eye out for the next chapter but you have not posted it yet. this is a good fic plz let me know when you put it up. thanks

This is about the 10th time I've come back to this fic of yours,seens you put chapter 9 up.I've been keeping a eye on it,so would you plz tell me when your going to be puting the next chapter up?plz... I realy think it good and would like to read more.

I really love your story, but you have not writen in a while and I am really wanting to know what happens next. Please write more soon.

love love love this story i think miroku should be good with girl, kohaku with rin, and koga gets with ayame please update soon i really want to know how kagome spends the day as a slave

Miroku good and gets a girl
Kohaku gets freed and get together with rin
Kouga goes totally crazy and gets his ass whooped

Kohaku should get freed and stay with RIn. And it would be good for there be a little bit of tension due to Sesshomaru's father instincts when it comes to boyfriends. Bye!

I think that Miroku should get a girl and be the good guy. Koga get together with Ayame.

Koga:
Sees Kagome, Kira, and Sango sisters and gets with Ayame,

Miroku:
gets girl and good,

Kohaku:
freed and gets together with Rin,

love the story can't wait for next chapter

ok heres my votes:
Miroku Gets girl goes bad then gets different girl goes good again

Kohaku gets freed and gets with Rin since in this fic Shippo only thinks of her as a sister

And I think Koga should go after Kagome then relize that she likes some one else and at her wish mates some one else but he still really loves her

Koga:just is a total idiot that still chases after Kagome.

Kohaku: gets killed

Miroku: gets girl and bad

Miroku no girl and good
Kohaku freed and gets together with Rin
Koga just is a total idiot that still chases after Kagome.

Definatley a yes please

very nice i like your new character developments. yes to citrus they are all ways good to spice up a story. if you need help just type and i will do my best see yah. and update soon please

YES to the citrus get as graphic as you want I'll injoy.

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update soon i dont care if there a lemon or not just a anther chapter

yes to lemon, and sorry I am not a writer, or i would write it.
p.s. love the story. keep up the great work.

yes you should

WOW!! You did a very good job on this so far.Just keep it coming.Can't wait until the next chapter.

I think you should have a citrus between Sess/Kag it just makes since lol

YES!!!!! oh and make the things she have to do funny but sexy! That would be hot! juss a sugestion

yes

i really like the story please write more pppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeeee!

hey love this story really hope to see the next chapter soon. can't wait to see what Sesshomaru does.~.~ -wiggles eyebrows suggestively-

I love that kagome forgot that bet with sesshoumaru that will defedently be a chap that i can't wait for.

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good + girl or gay

Kyōkotsu

Suikotsu

they should meet up with Renkotsu, Suikotsu. By the way this is a great fic.

it was good and i whant it to be Renkotsu

suikotsu

suikotsu

suikotsu

I think that they should meet up with Suikotsu. I can't wait until your next update!

Suikotsu!!!!!!!!! LOL!

Suikotsu

Renkotsu

love it, keep up the great work, update soon please???????
personally i think that the monk(muroku) needs to stay one of the good guys, and get a girl, if that don't work keep him good, just make him gay as a 3 dollar bill,

oo i love your story...you have to write more now...

Hey! I loved your story. And I think that Miroku should have a girlfriend(mate), maybe a hanyo? Well that is my opinion and I hope you at least look at it, so bye!

I liked the story will you be adding more chapters to it? I have got to know 'cause I really liked it.

this story is awesome. Miroku should be good with a girl. plz continue this story.

Miroku shud be good with a gurl, oh pleze continue tha story! Bye!

I LOVE this story it is one of the best Sesshy and Kagome stories ive read yet! i hope you finish it soon!

Way to go girl. I like the way you think. Well update.

chapter 1 and 2 are the same thing you might want to fix that before you post your 3rd chapter or we might not know whats going on. Thanks and post soon.

hugs and puppies

Hi i really liked ur story its got a good plot. but u posted 2 times. chapters 1+2 are the same i think so u might wanna fix it cause some people get annoyed about that and they might flame u. *i am not flaming nor will i ever flame* just a sugestion! :)
Good luck and write fast cause i can't wait to find out what happens!!!!!!!!

I LOVE IT!!!! Keep it up! Please update ASAP!!!

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can each of them fall for there priestess's?

wow... it was really good so far

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Well all I have to say is MORE PLEASE. I'm lov'n it. Hope to read more soon.

BYE BYE

I lov your fic but chu posted the 2end ch. twice,and your stlye it dosent seem like the stlye a lemon would be really....but still tight ficon and will we see gods of hell/heven or toga? will toga fall in love with Kira and kira would have to chose who to go with?? I wna know your fic is cunfuzing and times but agter a wile chu under stande it more~!!! yay~!

Update soon
~suki

0.0 ...................... YAY!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Add more soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey, I really like your fic. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update and post more chapters soon.

not bad but please space the dialogue!

sweet i love update soon