| completeley, and absoltely amazing!I love it! the plot and Sesshoumaru's coniving little ways! so great! You have to update soon!
Brittney- Wed 24 Jan 2007
Oh I love this! It's excellent and I love the "Pretty-chan" as well.
Oh and in the second chapter I didn't see anywhere expressed where he actually said "Are your lips as soft as they look." I was a little confused when Kagome suddenly said "huh?" about him asking that since is was ever verbally shown in the chapter by sesshoumaru.
Fukki maru- Wed 24 Jan 2007
| awesome
judzea- Tue 23 Jan 2007
I like this story but your updates are too slow in coming...work faster *brings out the whip* (LOL)...just kidding. Lovely story...plse update whenever you can as your time allows. I know you have a life other than writing stories for us non-writers that sit around waiting for updates *big cheesey grin on face*
Just kidding again. UPDATE SOON!!!!
:) *sunshine and smiles* :)
| this fic is so cute... i love it.... is cute okay.... oh well... i still love it... heheheheheee... more please...
kuma- Sun 21 Jan 2007
| im liking it update soon 100000000000000000000000000/10
DeJanea M. Steward- Sat 13 Jan 2007
| I love your fanfiction but would like it more if you made it longer and stopped teasing people with short chapters!Just a suggestion.
| wow, Sesshoumaru is sooo sweet in this chapter! I can almost feel my heart melting out of my chest. I am looking forward to more chaps. I hope you have time to update soon.
hehe... nice chapter. I thought you did a really good job with the progression of the scene and word choice. This was definitely not your run of the mill lemon.
I also thought it was waaaay cute how Sesshoumaru asks if he can court Kagome... cute, cute, cute.
I love the description of Kirei-chan's looks, especially how you combined the color of Kagome's eyes with Sesshoumaru's... I can readily imagine it. Very beautiful!
I also really liked how you had Kagome call Kirei-chan "pretty-chan"- nice play on words. ;) Keep up the great work.
| How the heck does he know the flavor of the lip gloss? Does he use them too? Anyways, I really like it. Update soon.
jen- Fri 12 Jan 2007
| weel you are welcome... and thank you for putting up anouth wonderful chapter
Sess' Sakura- Fri 12 Jan 2007
Wow i love and i can't wait for te next update.
Sakura
Embury- Fri 12 Jan 2007
| Awesome story; I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
Trice- Fri 12 Jan 2007
| I am finding this story very entertaining. You keep us wanting more. By the way if you know that your chapters are so short, why do you keep torturing us so? ") Until next chapter.
Fluffy- Fri 12 Jan 2007
| Nice chapter. Can you make them a little longer please? ^^
jen- Tue 02 Jan 2007
| omfg that was soooo cool man i can not wait for you to finish
Must read this!! And does this mean that all the girls in the world can have little Sesshy's since he has his eggs waiting on the block.
-Dani.
judzea- Fri 29 Dec 2006
Great start...more please :)
Update soon!
DeJanea M. Steward- Thu 28 Dec 2006
| Luv your fanfiction. Keep it up I luv it. The way the second chapter ends is different from the way i expected it to end. Please keep up with the chapters I can tell that this will be a good story.
Patrice- Thu 28 Dec 2006
| it's a great story
hi really like this story plz update soon....
WHOA he already wantz tooo court her plz update soon the story is really good
malice_babe- Thu 28 Dec 2006
DUUDE..
HURRY AND UPDATE!!
This is a pretty good story so far..
I like the moon miko.. Makes it more orginal..
Can't wait for the next chapter.. Hurry and update plz..
Happy Holidays to you..
Mari
WriterLady1031- Thu 21 Dec 2006
| This looks interesting! Please keep updating this one. I caught your story by chance and now I'm really glad I didn't pass it up. Good job! 10's for you, dear. ^_^
Faye- Wed 20 Dec 2006
| Moon miko?!? I HAVE to find out what that is!!! Please update soon!
Animeholic- Tue 19 Dec 2006
| interesting.....
Amora- Sun 17 Dec 2006
| to short but hopeful it goes somewhere
Eila- Sun 17 Dec 2006
| I like your story please update whenever you can this story is unique
Brianna- Sun 17 Dec 2006
| Love the first chapter! it's great! hopefully you update soon!
awww....COOL!!!
ii wanna see more!!!!
MORE MORE MORE MOREMROERMEORMEORMERMEROEM....UH I MEAN MORE!!
Mi: sigh.....there she goes again....better listen to her... T^T
MORE MORE MORE MOREMROE...*deep breath*...phew...
sooo....please update soon!!!! ^-^
bluemoon_175- Sun 17 Dec 2006
| Sounds like a really good story can't wait to read more so I hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE.
Kris- Sun 17 Dec 2006
| This sounds like it is going to be a really good story, but i think you should make the chapters a bit longer and drag out some of the details. Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^!
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