I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

im dyin for an update Mnemosyne im gonna go crazy

That was good I love it take your time don't rush

i like it...update soon

Errr...third review because I discovered two things you should fic.

Try to leave a space after period or comma (I hope I spelled that one right). It's better for visual effect and for reading.

Also try to not write 'a breath' or anything else like this. You can't very well say a breath, two breaths. It doesn't sound right. *smiles* Otherwise...everything good!

That review was mine...forgot to login. *rolls eyes* Anyway...I'm begging you to update. And keep the story slow.

Sexual tension is already there. Keeping everything hanging until the last possible moment is the best choice.

I love it. If you keep this up, I can almost guarantee that I'll review (I'm kind of lazy sometimes *ahem*)

The whole feel of this fic appeals to me. Sesshoumaru's personality (even if a little AU), Kagome's calm and serene demeanor, the setting of this story and the fact that it actually makes me think of real life and not just fiction.

*two thumbs up* Lovely work. Keep it up. Oh, and try to make Kagome a little happier when not working (like when she's spending time with Hojo or Sango). Her personality is usually more happy and bright. Even if her mother isn't that good of a person.

*bows* Do update soon okay?

This is interesting. I do like your writing style, and the story has grabbed my interest. I look forward to your next update.

I really like this story. The sexual tension is through the roof and you should take your time with it. Keep it going until we are screaming and begging for mercy. You don't want her to look like an easy lay, Sessomaru already has more of those than he can shake a stick at.

You have got a very good start on a captivating story. Keep up the good work.

I love reading " Beyond all Reason" so please don't stop working on it. I find your writing quite good , especially K and S's characters seem so real. Thank you for posting your fanfic! Love Stefanie

this is good :)
i recon that the person at the door should be Sesshomaru... also if the whole marriage thing goes forward then just before they get married Kagome should stumble into Hojo and see him lip kissing another (very beautiful) girl.. so then the Marriage is canceled and Sesshomaru comes to the rescue and helps her through the heart break.. she could try to commit suicide and Sesshomaru finds her... and there relationship precedes from there... of course Kagome has to get over the whole Inuyasha thing.. but i'm sure Sesshomaru can extract a good revenge from his half-brother.. lol

I like it so far. It's interesting, and you can almost taste Sesshomaru's interest in her, even though she seems oblivious. I have to say, I would absolutely love it if when she opens the door for the first guest, it's him! That would be interesting. Anyway, looking forward to more!

having problems reading it...thoughts n talkin r confusing me wen i was readin it...good story so far...i like it...it just the talkin n thoughts confuse me a bit...can't wait for the next one...good luck

so far i have liked the story and i think it's good that you are taking things a little slow I think it helps with the development of a story although i do think the chapters could be a little longer i like it so please update soon

Very Well Written! Great Job!
Lovin' The Fic So Far!
I Like This Particular Situation and Relationship Of The See/Kag Emplyee/Assistant Deely...
Fricking Wicked!
Please Update As Soon As You Can!
Ja Ne!

Its good but can we get a slight move on please thx other than that its pretty good

You have to update

Why is he that way with her? She should just act withdrawn with him. Nice first chapter. Update soon!
PS Too lazy to login.

your story sounds nice but i think you need to write a little more for your first chapter to get the story going.

hi-
great start for a fic...update soon kay?

ta!
Silk_worm