you really need to stop throwing songs in the middle and continue on with the story....

anyway i like it. update soon.

so cool cool i love it update soon please

wow so good where is that song from or did you write it? Any way i loved it

your summary: "InuYahsa,Kikyo,Miroku,Sango,Sippho and Sesshomaru are hunters.They hunt demons and witchs that use their powers to harm others.After the 'loss' of a member they brough in Kagome.Unable to trust Kagome,who looks alot like their dead friend,Sesshomaru is on garde.The others fully trust her,she is just so inicent,too inicent.Kagome has a secrat,one that will tear them all apart...."

proof read: InuYahsa,Kikyo,Miroku,Sango,Shippo and Sesshomaru are hunters.They hunt demons and witches that use their powers to harm others.After the 'loss' of a member they brought in Kagome. Unable to trust Kagome, who looks a lot like their dead friend, Sesshomaru is on his guard. While the others fully trust her,she is just so innocent,too innocent.Kagome has a secret,one that will tear them all apart....

(not to mention the numerous grammar problems)

try innocent...not inicent -_- that was just from reading the summary... you might get more people to read your fic if you used some sort of spell check (no offence)

this story is good so far i relly like it. it's like its on it's on category because it so dark in a sence you caught what many writers hope to accomplish in less that a page