| Wonderful story! More, please more!
I Love Sessomaru AKA FLUFFY- Sun 13 May 2007
| Please write anagin soon Bye bye
| Wow so much drama. Can't wait for the next chapter. What a small world LOL.
Gini- Wed 09 May 2007
| So, I never send reviews and for me to be sending this one that means something. This story is absolutely brilliant and has me on the edge of my seat. I kept going "Who is her husband" and the way you revealed it was perfect. Well done and I hope to see more soon.
lehcar132- Wed 09 May 2007
| Huh? A one shot? It says complete but clearly still has more to go. If it is complete, then again, huh? It started out really well but the following chapters leave a lot to be desired, that is, if they were ment to be the conclusion. Anyway, thanks for writing what you did.
zenfluence- Tue 08 May 2007
Ohhh, love the role reversals,
Could you change the summary?
Please continue
~zen
sweetkijo- Tue 08 May 2007
| My Goodness...that was pretty intense. It is so good it made my head spin...keep a grip on that pen...cus you need to keep on writing....lol. great job.
| I really like this story. I hope you continue it! :)
Kai- Tue 08 May 2007
| Not to be rude or anything, but this story strangely reminds me of Unfaithful......Is it supposed to or something?
sirinya- Tue 08 May 2007
NOOO I need to know what happens! I;ve been looking for this story XD. Last time I guessed wrong on who Kagome's husband was ... but is it Kouga? Or will there be more ppl popping in later ;x poor guy but oh well, Sesshoumaru is hotter >_>;
I love this story... update soon please ^^
ooooooooooooooooooh man!!!! please don't make this a one shot! it has sooooo much potential and it would be amazing if you would keep going on this!!!
*bats eyelashes* pretty please ^^
Destiny- Sat 13 Jan 2007
I liked it. The sex scene sorta reminded me of Unfaithful. Good movie. Good story.
*pulls out gun*
continue.
elsy- Fri 01 Dec 2006
| i think its beutifull. i loved it. its very romantic in a soft kind of way.^__^
candy- Thu 30 Nov 2006
| i loved it. I like it that its Kagome who is cheating and not the same old, same old. The ending was good...it leaves us wanting more. I think if you extend this to more than a one shot people would love it. Anywho keep writing, your good at it.
I hate YOU!!! This fic just calls for another chapter... I wasn't gonna say nuttin but then I read over it again and I got pissed. I'll be forever in your debt if you write a continuation... please.... I'll love you forever....
Luv ya,
-Kjinuyasha
apache_rose- Wed 29 Nov 2006
i think you should write more! i like it, and i would be really grateful if you would write more! it's great, don't stop here!
gracias!
apache_rose- Wed 29 Nov 2006
i think you should write more! i like it, and i would be really grateful if you would write more! it's great, don't stop here!
gracias!
phishbon3s- Wed 29 Nov 2006
I like it.
The lemon was short but portrayed with enough detail to make an impression. With some of the minor nuances of long and drawn out lemony scenes cut, it leave the reader a chance to exercise their own imagination. And the imagination of a fangirl(boy) can be a very powerful thing.
The cliffie however, was an evil touch. An unending cliffie is just sheer madness! You have hooked me enough to read it if it was to pass beyond a one shot. I would enjoy a pervert like Miroku explaining the “wrongs†in sleeping with, and even loving a married woman.
Excellent work! I greatly enjoyed it.
Yumi Tenshi- Tue 28 Nov 2006
| GREAT one-shot! I love it, I wish you would write more, it's so good! Thanks for the write!
| This was fantastic! I loved it. You should definitely continue to write (only if you want to though!) I bow down to your awesomeness. :)
Kim- Tue 28 Nov 2006
| Very good, but seems like it could easily become more! What happens next?
jestergirl- Tue 28 Nov 2006
| wow, I loved this fanfiction, the ending was really good. It would make a good fanfiction. Keep writing i liked this story and will soon read some of your others.
| hey, nice fic! who's kagome's husband though? i hope it's inuyasha. XD
katie- Tue 28 Nov 2006
| What your gonna leave it there! No come back here and write some more....please? Pretty please with sugar on top and sprinkles and hot fudge and...cherries and strawberries and..sprinkles please write more this is really good
Jennifer- Tue 28 Nov 2006
| You haven't lost your touch. Of course to me the ending is screaming more more but its a one-shot. Keep up the great stories. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!
| Uuuuuuu! Cool!! I liked it! It was...different. There are just about 3 or less fics I've read where Kags is the one cheating. *wiggles eyebrows*. I say, Girl Power! Hahahaahaha. Yeah, why should she always be the victim, uh? I like ur fic. ^^ *Thumbs up*
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