girlygirl- Thu 28 Feb 2008
that was soooooooooo freakin cute!!! :)

Sunset Love- Mon 22 Oct 2007
this was a great story that you did i am in the process of reading one of your other stories a one-shot when i get the time. I was wondering though why all the stories are pg-13 or g? whey not highter?

ElegantPaws- Sat 28 Apr 2007
A perfect ending...

Like a fine wine that has a wondrously aromatic bouquet that leaves you feeling fulfilled, pleasantly surprised and cherished.

Thank you.

ElegantPaws- Sat 28 Apr 2007
Nice..

One could feel the palpable emotions in the room.

ElegantPaws- Sat 28 Apr 2007
Chapter 7
Your prose were wonderful. I love the private moment between Kagome and her father and the revelations there. Your setting, the feel of the day, the moment, all blissfully quiet and fragrant peppered with sadness, and yet understanding and acceptance.
Equally magnificent, what a truly magnificent study of a mind in turmoil. I speak of Sesshoumaru.
Unlike other works pertaining to the dormant and impending love of these two, you allowed both sufficient maturity, or more accurately, you allowed Kagome, the strength of character to answer his question of “why?” without the sometimes unnecessary banter just truth. This is sometimes far more poignant.
What resonates with me as a reader in this wonderful piece is the growth of their intertwined coils of love, though not spoken in the previous chapters, from his sneeze to her burnt tongue, to his gorging on her cookies, the taste of love indeed. There paths are intertwining whether they recognize it or not. We as readers are privileged to watch them falling in love, even sharing the same sleepless moments and mirroring their own internal dialogues attempting to sort out their emotions. The difference between the two being, Kagome is that much more able, or yes, lets say strong to call it what it is. Sesshoumaru, being crushed, is having that much more difficulty with it.
Anyway, enough of my drivel, such a wonderful read, on a pleasingly quiet and rainy Saturday. Thank you. Time for dinner and then polishing off this delectable piece of fiction. Well done…one winged indeed …*chuckle*..not handicapped in the least *wink*.

ElegantPaws- Sat 28 Apr 2007
Chapter 6 was wonderfully emotive and gave a wonderful overall of Sesshoumaru's emotional state. Just amazingly well written and poignant. Two loses, two great loves and enter number three.

ElegantPaws- Sat 28 Apr 2007
I have reached the aromatic chapter number five and about to start savoury number 6. This is lovely,really and truly. It has many flavours, pardon the pun. Delicate, light, pleasurable and just a hint of something else. Well done.

ElegantPaws- Sat 28 Apr 2007
Funny, but I find Sesshoumaru - Sama very much in character here, a very nice second chapter I might add.

ElegantPaws- Sat 28 Apr 2007
Wonderful, just began reading this as I was impressed with your current new work "Listening and Hearing". Off to chapter two. Sesshoumaru cast as a Cordon Blu chef? Most excellent and Jaken and Rin as Sous Chefs hilarious!

judzea- Mon 23 Apr 2007
I had to read your whole story before reviewing. It reminded me a little bit like the movie 'Soul Food' and I believe "Woman On Top". Both movies centered on food and it's relation to peoples emotions and feelings.

I was a good story and I loved it. Will there be a sequel?

Very well done :-)

Eternity of Tears- Sun 07 Jan 2007
I loved it! I love how you made the make up between them a simple dish. very original and AMAZING! ^_^ Great job!

orchid- Fri 05 Jan 2007
loved it... update soon...

demon in disguise- Tue 02 Jan 2007
bravo !! well you should thank me for giving you the courage to write this ... and don't even think that i haven't notice the part where you liken sesshoumaru to a giant squirrel :p for this, you'll not be given this year's b'day present hehehehe .. *evil smirk*

Lilith-sama- Mon 01 Jan 2007
That was absolutely amazing. I've been on a single spark for a while now, but I never leave a mention to any stories I read. I usually forget to, actually. But this story was amazingly...wonderful. It was so unique that it left me speechless. I love unique fics like this. It warms my heart to see things like this!

I applaud your writing, and I hope you create something else. To you, the first writer I have ever reviewed on! Cheers to your story.

Kimonno Rose- Mon 01 Jan 2007
PLease don't make this the last chapter. There should at least be an epilouge or something.
PLease do an epilouge.
The story would be so much better that way. PLease , please, please, please.

Shaedow- Mon 01 Jan 2007
Beautiful... Simply beautiful. I loved the story! It was soo touching the way you ended it. I truely hope you are writing other fanfics right now. I want to read them. (Please write more... Pretty Please) Anyways. Keep up the great work! Hope I'll be reading your other works soon. XD

Jane- Tue 26 Dec 2006
You so need to finish this story soon. It's so good. PLEASE!!!!???

bob- Tue 26 Dec 2006
Wow. I can feel the emotion live! It's so.. Wow. It's amazing. :D LOVING IT.

Lady Ashira Taisho- Mon 25 Dec 2006
I love this story it reminds me of my own life right now. It's very insightful you must understand what the characters are going through yourself or you would not be able to write about something like this with such passion. Please continue I am eager to read more.

Flightoffancy- Mon 25 Dec 2006
Boy that was heart-wrenching. But I believe in Kagome and if she just hangs in there he will get so tired of fighting himself, he will just give up.

Are you a chef as well.? Your descriptions of meals and philosophy on cooking feels like it comes from the soul.

I really like this story because it is a unique idea and you are a very good writer. You explain things with just enough detail to keep the story moving forward but not so much it lags. I think what I am trying to say it that you spark the imagination and do not tell us everything to think about a situation or the characters. You credit us with enough intelligence to bring the story to life in our minds and hearts.

I hope you keep the ball rolling with this and will see you soon. I look forward to the next chapter.

Deb.

Never-Here-4-Me- Sun 24 Dec 2006
Man! I lovd the chapter alot! Please update soon! Can't wait!!

Never-Here-4-Me- Sat 23 Dec 2006
Love the story so far! Sorry but i will try to read the rest of the chapters tomorrow or soon. Please try and update soon!! Ja Ne!!

slm_candle- Sat 23 Dec 2006
Yay! Good job on this one, got to hand it to ya very good indeed.

orchid- Sat 23 Dec 2006
sorry for the confusion... i was wondering after kag went to the restaurant, wasn't she suppose to write up what she thinks of the the food and the restaurant that sessh works at..... she is a food critic.... it wasn't mention... hope i clarify my question, if not... sorry for being so confusing.... still, this is a great fic... keep up the good work...

nostalgic-maiden- Sat 23 Dec 2006
aww i love this fic so far! please continue to update =)

sabrina- Thu 14 Dec 2006
I liked it, I really did, but (ah, always a but, no?) most of the story...was dialouge, don't you think? You hardly described anything. Its a good story, and a very original idea, but it was still mostly dialouge. Gomen

orchid- Wed 13 Dec 2006
great job... just one question... did miss kag's column on sessh's cooking and restaurant.... just wondering.... very good fic... until next time...

Eternity of Tears- Wed 13 Dec 2006
Once again, good job! ^_^ very well written chapter, and i enjoyed it! ^_^

Flightoffancy- Sun 10 Dec 2006
This is a facinating story. I would never have believed Sesshomaru as a chef but it works really well. You still retain alot of his characteristics, his aloofness and arrogance while adding a little something extra that I can't quite put my finger on.

I love it when the sparks fly between the characters and you are certainly on the mark with these two. The fact that her father was also a great chef gives her that edge she needs to level the playing field with Sesshomaru. It seems that they will be showing each other a thing or two.

You made a comment about Sesshomaru's character in a certain chapter and just let me say that you shouldn't worry about things like that. If the story is good the people will read.

The really good stories come from the spirit and the heart. You have imagination and originality going for you plus some really good reviews. People who criticize your characters need to write their own stories and just let yours unfold and enjoy. Suggestions are good but if you let someone change your style or ideas then it becomes their story and I like yours much better.

Good Job.

Dana Daidouji- Sun 10 Dec 2006
This story is so sweet! I hope Kagome teaches Sesshoumaru a thing or two!

Brandie- Sat 09 Dec 2006
I read the new chapter and I really like the story so far and can't wait to read the rest.

Maru-KunKun- Sat 09 Dec 2006
if i was sesshomaru id be like, "well then, go buy some" 'nooooo!! my flour' -nods- yup yup. my mind would be crying ....
lol.
anywho, that was great. update soon. Ja-ne. XD

Eternity of Tears- Sat 09 Dec 2006
Awesome chapter. very short ansd sweet.
=)

thank you for emailing me when you updated!

clavira- Sat 09 Dec 2006
hehe - out of flour... I should have guessed. rin would have continued until the end of dawn if she could have :D
anyway, update soon

nickel- Sat 09 Dec 2006
Aww, poor Rin.. you can only hope (or hope not!) that she gets her hands on some flour..
...and the ultimate question. Will Sesshoumaru finally see the error of his culinary ways?! *giggle*
Next chapter, please!!

Addah- Thu 07 Dec 2006
Please update soon, fluffy & kags need 2 butt heads.

g- Mon 04 Dec 2006
very interesting!!!=) i love it!!!! and cna't wait for more!!!!=)

KBong- Mon 04 Dec 2006
you know who am I
Anyway, I just drop by to congrats you with such nice fan fic... keep up
will tell you whenever I write one.
fanfic I mean.

nickel- Mon 04 Dec 2006
I really like what you're doing here!!!
Plus, I love the way Rin and Shippou are incorporated. Too much kneading and even the most well-chilled butter can turn into dough too heavy to digest. Nice and light makes my day! La-la la!!
Ignore my babbling, it isn't worth a whit, but just know that there's one more reader out there who checks ASS every day to see your fic!

Eternity of Tears- Mon 04 Dec 2006
wow. this is so awesome and very original.
i have never heard of anything likeit. i mean, in the food world, yes, but nothing where kagome was a critic and sesshoumaru a chef.
=) great job with the chapters!

oh, if it isn't a bother or anything, could you please email me when you update?

thanks!
and once again, great job!

sesshou's gurl- Sun 03 Dec 2006
I like this story. It was very cute. Please up date really soon. I want to know how it ends. ja ne.

kags- Sun 03 Dec 2006
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Shadow's Angel- Sun 03 Dec 2006
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

clavira- Sat 02 Dec 2006
well, I like it. and how Sess behaves and... well... IS; is entirely up to you - it's your story afterall!

Kodomo- Wed 29 Nov 2006
Um... in stead of "critique", which is like "your boss filled out a critique", I think you mean "critic", as in "the movie critic".

Oh well though. Just trying to help.

Brandie- Wed 29 Nov 2006
I read your fan fic and can't wait to read the rest

Shaedow- Tue 28 Nov 2006
Interesting idea! Keep up the good work and please update soon! XD

Alianne- Tue 28 Nov 2006
Wow...Sesshoumaru a cook? That's just....so CREATIVE and original! This is really good so far! Update soon plz!

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