Shadows_Of_A_Sin- Mon 04 Jun 2007
hwen will you update?

Shadows_Of_A_Sin- Mon 04 Jun 2007
hwen will you update?

Megan Consoer- Fri 22 Dec 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

sessy girl- Wed 06 Dec 2006
your story was very amazing. i saw the whole picture in my head.please do a countinuing story about sesshomaru and kagome. for the next time they meet. i give you a 10/10. that was a perfect story. good job.

swtdrm01- Wed 08 Nov 2006
That was awesome! I loved it.

DarkMiko6Decortiquer- Wed 08 Nov 2006
I know this is a lot to ask but can we have a continuation? or another story? Way cool. G'nite.


Yuki Asao- Tue 07 Nov 2006
"no one disservices" - it's spelled deserves.

When you had Sesshoumaru talk to Kagome and not say her name, he called her woman. It's not women, that's plural. It's woman, with an a, not an e.

You spelled plate wrong. Plate, as in what we have our food on when we eat, you spelled it - plait. It's supposed to be plate.

You also could have used punctuation in places where you didn't have it.

It is an over all great story, but you DEFINITELY need a beta reader. Please continue, I would like to see where you will take this.

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