judzea- Mon 06 Nov 2006
Just too...too sad :(
Sweet & lovely *sniffles*
Overall...good job. But what killed him? A broken heart maybe...humm? I see a spark of an idea for a story here...do you? :)

Aurora Antheia Raine- Mon 06 Nov 2006
Wow... So sad... @_@ I loved the poem though! Good job on that! ^___^ It's definitely a new twist and I loved the imagery in the story.

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