Spark

its really good please iv been dieing to know what happens next so please keep going please

great story but not only do yuo need longer chapters, you also need a beta to help read and correct typos

update please

Longer chappy's plz?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo! Please would ya' make so new
CHAPTER(S)!!!

Finally TOOK YA LONG ENOUGH, but any how THAT was GREAT, i'm not a good speller, 'k "k!
BYE,
p.s. (make more chapters)

Update!!!!!!!! I want a lemon!!!!!!

This story has potential, but the grammar, spelling and punctuation are quite bad. If you need help, I volunteer to beta this story for you.

like the story but needs work on spelling and make your paraghraphs neater its hard to tell sometimes who's talking/thinking i recommend a beta dear

0.0 ........ MORE plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

like it... its interesting hope you update soon

A very interesting idea, although your story is very hard to read due to a lack of punctuation.

A little extra work or a beta would help this story immensely.

Hmm...an interested guard, ooh lala!

-Dani.

how jealous can a Taiyoukai get?

GREAT!!!! :D
More please :>
BYYE,
Faviola

This story has promise but needs a lot of grammar, punctuation, and perhaps more to the storyline (detail.)

Your story looks interesting, but you need to use periods. I can' t wait to see how it ends.

good luck!

Go anyway and slap the one who gave it to you! Infuriating and denying him sounds sadistically satisfying to me! Wear it then, and deny him.

WoW! i thought you stopped writing this story, I'm so glad you continued it, I really REALLY like it! Please update soon! And when will they start making those offsprings?....hehe.

-Dani.

is Inu jealous?

Hey, you've got a great idea with this one. The only thing was that the presentation was choppy. It was hard to read and the grammar mistakes were a bit difficult to get around. Still, it was an interesting read. All you need is a beta reader and you're set.

THANK-YOU soooooooooo much I've been hoping yu'ed update this one. ( It's one of my Most Faverits!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) and sorry for the Loong Please'es, I just couldn't wait any longer. Oh and I can't waqit to read the next chap. Love this last one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is a good story.. I can't wait to see what happens between the two of them..
Yes i read the birthday card and the christmas card both were every good too..
Hurry with next chapter plz..
Take Care
mari

This is really good and all but could you make the chapters a bit longer and not have things move so quickly

good plot so far ii hope to read more soon ^^

great chapter

MMoorree of this one now PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
( panting heavely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hank you.

It's great that you finished Birthday Card, and are working on The Christmas cardbut I lik this fic to and would really like to see more of it. But please go at your won pace don't hearry because I asked you to Okay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow this is such a great story

It would be funny if Kagoem fights him and is not seduced by his beauty...especially if he becomes jealous of one of his guards or something, hehe. Update soon, and hopefully a longer chappie? Me want more!

-Dani.

I loved it! Woah, bet Kagome didn't expect that XD. Can't wait till the next update!

wow i like it please keep going

I Like It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luv your story

wow i like it please keep going

You think she'd have been through enough and been taught enough not to brush something off like that. But No, she has to go for the infinitely human failing of 'I like it so it can't be a bad idea.' I'm not going to say that she deserves All that she gets, but a hit upside the head would be a good idea.

I like the story a lot, but ai hope you won't make Kagome a crybaby or stupid. I like your stoury and I hope you update soon because I want to know when Sesshoumaru will discover the crest and if he knows...as well i fhtere are any interesting side affects...like hentaish ones so I shall wait with great anticipation!

-Dani.

Longer chappies plz, and update soon.

Veru promising I look forward to the next chapter. Blessed Be.

I luv it plz update it!!

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