Reviews for Looming Chains by Kags21

SilentThunderstorm- Mon 29 Oct 2007
i loved it...i am such a sucker for happy endings keep writing

SilentThunderstorm- Mon 29 Oct 2007
i loved it...i am such a sucker for happy endings keep writing

whythis?- Sun 07 Oct 2007
Ok this story just just plain sick and I mean sick. The rape the abuse god what kind of mind made you write this? IT SICK JUST SICK!!!

valarie- Sun 07 Oct 2007
YES!!!! great story... i'm currently reading/read yur other ones... i think yur the best aurther on here... i'm not styin to suck up to u, or anything... but still!

valarie- Sun 07 Oct 2007
YES!!!! great story... i'm currently reading/read yur other ones... i think yur the best aurther on here... i'm not styin to suck up to u, or anything... but still!

Arielle langley- Sun 07 Oct 2007
Thank u so much for finishing the story it was excellent! I hope that u continue to write more stories bc u r so talented\blessed with writing please keep up the good wrk!

Koiishi_Beloved- Fri 31 Aug 2007
I finally read it and it was cool. I look forward to the next chapter.

cocoke5- Wed 29 Aug 2007
love the story and can not wait for the next chapter of the story and will kagome get her members of sesshamura up date soon.

Koiishi_Beloved- Tue 28 Aug 2007
That chapter was so awesome! I was so into it too! LOL

-KB

Arielle langley- Tue 28 Aug 2007
wow! Thats all i can say. This story is so gooood! U got me hooked! Please do continue n keep up the good work. Love it!

Koiishi_Beloved- Sun 19 Aug 2007
I just read the last 2 chapters you wrote and was amazed. Those were really good and I realized I didn't read those 2 chapters yet until now lol. I'm glad I went here and looked.

-KB

Tricia- Thu 02 Aug 2007
oooooh great chappy :)

Koiishi_Beloved- Thu 19 Jul 2007
I really enjoyed this chapter! :]

-KB

*~*Faithful Vampire*~*- Thu 19 Jul 2007
OH OH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! lol I love this story. =] Hehe. And it's killing me to see how it's going to end! >.

Magz- Fri 13 Jul 2007
that sick twisted son of a - sorry. i'm never gonna be done with calling Naraku names.

anyway, i absolutely love your stories!! i can't believe he killed her mother.

can't wait for your next update!

tilayha- Thu 12 Jul 2007
sick, twisted and dark. i love stories like this.
tilayha

demon13o- Tue 10 Jul 2007
Now Kagome has officially made room for herself in the nut house lol!

Please hurry and update real soon okay!!

Ja Ne!

Aurora Potter- Tue 10 Jul 2007
thats evil.........poor Kagome

Koishii_Beloved- Tue 10 Jul 2007
Wow O__O...K-Kagome's mom died! That's so awful. -sniffle-

-KB

lIgHtNiNg_PaNdA- Tue 03 Jul 2007
what's going to happen? this is such a great fanfic it even makes me scared

demon13o- Tue 03 Jul 2007
-looks around silently-

And Kagome's mother is going to die in the next chapter right?

-sighs-

That poor woman... Okay well do me a favor!

Update more and soon!!

Ja Ne!

Tricia- Tue 03 Jul 2007
Awesome chappy as usual. I can't wait to see how it all plays out. I like how you have not softened Naraku knowing anything nice he does suits his own reasoning.

Arielle langley- Wed 20 Jun 2007
All i can say is wow! Just wow i love the story. ? For u is kagome actualy going to die or is sess. Goin to save her in the nick of time it would make things more interesting if she did or was close to. Anywho i love it n please update a.s.a.p. K thank

demon13o- Sun 17 Jun 2007
-drops the mouse letting it land upon the floor beside the desk while starring at the computer screen like an idiot with a lack of words-



-remains silent for quite some time-



-still silent while trying to form some kind of words-



-slams fist down on to the table making the keyboard jump in response-


How could you write such a thing?! That is so mean and cruel!!

Kagome dying! OMFG!!

You will sit back down at your desk and type that next chapter now! That's an order from your's truly!


-picks up the fallen mouse only to slam it down knocking the ball out from the mouse-


I'm so mad that you could do something like that!


-calms down some while placing the little rubber ball back into the mouse-



-shudders quietly before the sound of her voice becomes deathly cold and monotone-


You will type the next chapter soon and have it up.


-looks at the keyboard to find water drops on the surface then laughs about it-

Uh heh heh heh!


Ja Ne!

Red-Smartiez- Sun 17 Jun 2007
OMG!! Kags is going to die!! Which can only mean one thing...the story is coming to an end!! NO!!!! It was an awesome story!! Don't stop now!!

PLEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!! ^_^


Arielle langley- Wed 06 Jun 2007
Please update a.s.a.p. I am completely in love with this story. Its excellent! N keep up the good work.;-)

demon13o- Sun 03 Jun 2007
Aww kohaku made it to sesshy! now one is safe for now yay! poor Kagome though but we all know she'll survive it all!! Please hurry and update more real soon okay!

Ja Ne!!

Koishii_Beloved- Sun 03 Jun 2007
That was awesome!! Update soon please thank you!! ^__^

-River

Red-Smartiez- Sun 03 Jun 2007
Oh my god!!! What a cliffhanger!!!!!! I am on the very edge of my set wanting to no wats going to happen and its driving me INSANE!!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!!!!! ^_^

demon13o- Tue 22 May 2007
aww poor Sesshomaru so close and yet so far. I hope Kohaku can sneak out safely and make it to Sess! okay well I hope you can update soon so tell your beta Ashley to work faster lol.

Ja Ne!!

Red-Smartiez- Tue 22 May 2007
this story just gets better and better!! You hit Naraku's character DEAD ON!!! i mean, with the whole needles, sounds like something a modern Naraku would do.

I can not WAIT to read more!!!
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^

demon13o- Sun 13 May 2007
-does a classic faint-

..........

-an hour later-

......... NOT ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER!!!..... god blast it you have to update soon I must know what happens!! you and your cliff hangers will kill me one day and this is the reason why!!! GHA!!

Ja Ne!!!

Koishii_Beloved- Fri 27 Apr 2007
Everything always seem to go wrong for Kagome lol. Nice chapter. Update soon!

-River

Red-smartiez- Thu 26 Apr 2007
man, i wonder how he's going to do dat? PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK YOU!!! ^_^

P.S. lemons pweeez

inuprincess- Mon 16 Apr 2007
YEAH a new chapter!!! I love getting updates so I can read them when they are still "fresh off the presses." Loved the new chapter! can not wait for more to see how everything unfolds!

Thank you for the update!
Inuprincess
"Amanda"

Heather- Sun 15 Apr 2007
Poor Kagome, when is Sesshoumaru going to save her? Guess we'll have to wait for an update to find out ha ha ^_^

Koishii_Beloved- Sun 15 Apr 2007
That was a great chapter! Man that is so depressing, poor Kagome. Her life sucks huh? I hope you update as soon as you can. ^_^

-River

jessica- Sun 15 Apr 2007
way to go good job

Priah- Thu 22 Mar 2007
NO! NO! NO! NO!!!!!!!!!!

Naraku has to die now!!!!!

(BTW loved it)

Red-Smartiez- Wed 21 Mar 2007
that was harsh! he broke her bone n then pulled it straight....OUCH! the little lemon was hot though....Naraku marked Kagome, wonder how Sesshomaru is going to take that? PWEEEEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!!!! =)

P.S. more lemons pweeeez.....e-mail wen u have updated it!

Heather- Wed 07 Mar 2007
Wow this story is awesome! It keeps you on the edge of your seat! Hurry Sesshoumaru and save Kagome!!!

clock-winder- Tue 27 Feb 2007
Go! master! go!
I'll never disobery you!

demon13o- Sat 24 Feb 2007
O.O .... update quickly i have to know what's next!!

emmyjenny- Sun 14 Jan 2007
wow :) wow!!!! OMG!!! in the next chapter you could have Sesshomaru see Kagome banging on the limousine window and run after it but loose it in the traffic cause there were a lot of limousines driving round... :) i love this story :)

demon13o- Tue 09 Jan 2007
good chapter!

Jennirfer- Mon 08 Jan 2007
great i loved the first on e and the second one how mean to bring naraku bakc but in my mind he is going to die so i may once again do my happy dance

Liz- Sat 30 Dec 2006
I was enthralled with both of the stories in this series. Your literary talents are amazing. I really liked the twist, it was entirely shocking when Naraku took out those contacts. I will never forget the way you betrayed his character in these stories. You did a wonderful job with his character. You also did a wonderful job with Sesshomaru's character as well. You have really brought Inuyasha to the 21st Century with these fics.
I know this is a lot to ask, but can you keep me updated with your story. Please it would be very much appreciated.
Thank you...

demon13o- Tue 26 Dec 2006
OO hurry......... update SOON!!!! AND QUICKLY!!! *raging fan wanting to read soon*

emmyjenny- Thu 21 Dec 2006
wow you did the sequel and so fast to ;)
i like it :) well i can't wait to see what happens to Kagome and Sesshomaru and Naraku i hope she escapes :) and that she doesn't get pregnant again ... i wonder if you could make Kagome crack.... go mad and do crazy things..... lol you never know what might happen :)

Priah- Thu 21 Dec 2006
YES!!!! Sessho is coming after Kagome!! I knew it!! Now we can kill Naraku. In this chapter he seemed almost nice though. Not like the disgusting bastard we all know and hate. Good chapter.

ranbow!!- Thu 21 Dec 2006
lets go fluffy lets go!!!

demon13o- Mon 20 Nov 2006
awesome 4 thumbs up and if i had more thumbs i'd use them lol

kathy- Sat 18 Nov 2006
omg.. what a sad story.. poor kagome.. and sesshoumaru need to get off his butt and go safe her.. lo.l please update soon.

Priah- Sat 18 Nov 2006
aww, now she's stuck with Naraku again. I hope that she does NOT ever have another baby because of him. That would just suck.

inuprincess- Sat 18 Nov 2006
ohh boy do I like where this is going.

cant wait for more chapters

kathy- Wed 15 Nov 2006
pmg!!! no sesshy isnt there... poor kagome. update soon plz

Irish Black Rosie- Wed 15 Nov 2006
Oh My God! I LOVE YOU! Within Temptation! Loves Loves Loves! I LOVE YOU!!! I WILL HAVE YOUR BABIES!
Okay ahem,^^ You left me hangin man D:
Angel save Kagome! ^_^

Priah- Wed 15 Nov 2006
OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!! This is like totally scaring me and making me want to seriously read the rest. I'm in total suspense. Jeez!!!

inuprincess- Wed 15 Nov 2006
I love the way the last chapter ended. I am reallly looking forward to the next chapter!

I have read all your other works and this is right up there with all the others. I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see where you take the story.

i really love this story...it's really good so far.

Priah- Sun 12 Nov 2006
OMG! OMG! OMG Naraku is suck a sicko, that idiot needs to die and not quickly. Anyway before i offer to kill him again I'm gonne say nice job and end it now . Still that sicko needs to die.

kathy- Fri 10 Nov 2006
wow.. so naraku is alive... and sesshoumaru is being dumb!!!! please update soon!

Priah- Thu 09 Nov 2006
OMFG, I knew there was a huge eason i didn't like him besides being a twin, That damn Naraku. Can I use my earlier suggestion for Kagawji on naraku now? That would be cool. All i need is a non-stick cast-iron frying pan, a hammer and a knife. If you want to know what i have in mind, email me and I'll tell you. But the truth it that anything is too good for the idiot. Okay, done ranting. WTG!!!!

Priah- Tue 07 Nov 2006
OMG, I was wondering could I like jump into the story and kill Kagawaki? That would so totally be fun and, extrememly unexpected. Then Kags and Sesshy get back together. I seriously want to kill him cuz I don't like him. But on a different yet the same note I figuratively speaking, cannot wait until the next update. lol (I'm so weird)

inuprincess- Sat 04 Nov 2006
All I can save is LOVE IT!

REDWOLF- Wed 01 Nov 2006
Sometimes I think Kagome is a fool! I wish she would act normal, don't you??? Trust seems to come to her so easy and she seems to always trust the wrong persons (LOL)! Yep, she is nutty sometimes. I really am enjoying the story!

Priah- Wed 01 Nov 2006
Okay, I loved the first one, Now I'm really liking this one. It's awesome. I get the feeling about both of the twins. It isn't good but, I'll wait. Any way good 2 chapters.

Kambri_Jade- Tue 31 Oct 2006
Great first two chapters!!! i'm so gald that you did a sequal!! But now i'm scared for Kagome, god you had to do that. leave it on a cliff! Udate ASAP!
Later,
Kambri_Jade

hrc- Tue 31 Oct 2006
hey, loove it..
im going to guess Kagawaki is really naraku or something like that

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