| I really like this story, please update.
Jjvalour- Sat 18 Nov 2006
| Oh god that was great, specially the part with Rin coming in.(passes out from fluff and humor overload, but with a smile)
| You so totally rock. Now update!!! Please?
| love your story so far!!!! I love the way it is coming together... I can't wait to read more so update asap.
45cats- Wed 18 Oct 2006
| This is quite good. I don't detect OOCness. The behavior of the characters is consistent with the evolution of their individual personalities. Different circumstances and life experiences have an impact on an individuals behavior and these are reasonable. This is very cisp, clean writing. Very nice.
Rinseternalsoul- Tue 17 Oct 2006
| It's great to see a new up and coming fanfiction author with talent like yours. I decided to check out your story (I'm a sucker for the memory loss plots) and was pleasantly surprised to find that Blank was well written with a very good representations of our favorite characters. Great Job. I look forward to your future updates.
renee- Tue 17 Oct 2006
| this fic get better by every chapter. Update soon!
Michelle- Tue 17 Oct 2006
| I love this story, you have a way with words. Your grammar is immaculate. I applaude you. Now just as a funny little side note you might want to write that Kaiken is not to be confued with Kaikan which means sensual in japanese. I just thought that was funny, and at first my mind kept trying to put 2 a's instead of an a & e in that word. Which totally made no sense at that point of the chapter.
Nan- Tue 17 Oct 2006
This is a splendid fanfiction, one of the best Sess-Kag stories I've read in years. The beginning reminded me a bit of Octavia Butler's _Fledgling_, a book about an amnesiac vampire. Perhaps you've read it? If not, I highly recomend it.
You've done a wonderful job so far, and I look forward to reading more. My only complaint, if you could call it that, is the references to Sesshoumaru's "beast." It's a bit of fanon that's a pet peeve of mine, but I'm glad you didn't refer to it as "his youkai." It wasn't enough to make me push the back-button...and believe me, that's something. I'm very picky when it comes to fanfiction. But overall, again, great job! Keep up the good work!
Suicide- Mon 16 Oct 2006
| I've fallen head over heels in love with this fic. >>utterly enthralled Please write more soon. or i might just die from anticipation. lol.
christine- Sun 15 Oct 2006
| i'm totally into this story, keep it up
Absolutely magnificant!
i love your fanfic! It kind of reminds me of one I've read before, but of course, with your own special brand of writing.
And the chapters come so fast!
Keep up the great work!
mizunosora- Sun 15 Oct 2006
| PLZ PZL ZPLZPLZPLZPZLPZLPZLZPLZPZLPZLPZLZPLZPPPLZPLZPZLPZLPZ update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon! This story is awsome! KEEP AT IT!
Ari- Sun 15 Oct 2006
AFF.net is such a love. update here soon
the plot you put before your smut is awesome
Ari- Sun 15 Oct 2006
AFF.net is such a love. update here soon
the plot you put before your smut is awesome
LuaHaunted- Sun 15 Oct 2006
WOw!
I must say this is really good...
Please keep writing!
And update soon!
I loved the idea!
Bye!!
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