Update!!update soon!!

YO!!! I'm a writer up here and I though your first chapter was great. I'm not sure if I'm right but after she goes to Tokyo she'll change and then all her exes will either want her back or commend her on her changes. Even if I may be wrong I still can't wait to read the rest(I was totally sitting on the edge of my chair). Please don't leave me hangin and finish the story I truly do love it, in fact I have it as one of my favorites.

hey awsome story please update

This seems like a very promising story! Keep on writing--it sure sounds interesting, and I really want to know what happens!! -H-
P.S.: By "beta" do you mean an editor?

I liked it! That's righ! I liked it! (Go get 'em Kagome! Show 'em who's boss!!) hey if you need any help don't hessitate to ask. I just started posting too and i'm nervous obout how much feed back i'm gonna get. So don't worry about it and write. At the very least you know someone else likes your stuff! :D

oohhhh, i really like it! it's something a little different, mmhmm, very well written too! can't wait to read more, continue soon!
-hasu

u don't need a beta and u did an anazing job! i absolutely loved it! please udpate again really soon!

Great first chapter for your first fan fic. You managed to get our attentions and hold on to them until the very end and you left us wanting more. Pat yourself on the back, you did a good job!

this was a great fanfic start andni think that it is going to be a great story

A fanfic with great potential. I, for one, can't wait to see where you take this.

And for not having a beta your grammar is remarkably good.

Great job!

...I LOVE IT XD I'm always into these Kagome-turns-different-ish or something similar stories.. and AUs. LOVE AUs. 3\
Your writing is wonderful!! I really want to know what happens next!
I hope to see another installment soon :D

For a first fanfic with no betaAND unplanned, this is good. Really, really good. Don't worry so much. And if you need a beta, I offer my services gladly...not that you need it. You have a way with words that few authors have. Sometimes it gets frustrating when you see authors with less talent and no grasp of grammar get bigger kudos. But lemme tell you this, if you keep this up...you'll have a loyal fan in me because I see this work has actual, real potential.

Good work. Good luck and I can't wait for the next update!!