| Kagome is incredibly out of character, she wouldnt just put the clothes on like that without questioning, and she sure as hell wouldnt play along with that scenario when she didnt know who was watching.
litlest_amazon- Tue 12 Dec 2006
| Spelling and grammar checkers can be useful.
Aurora Potter- Mon 11 Dec 2006
| awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was cute..........................
Sesshomaru12262- Sat 09 Dec 2006
| You need spacing between every line.
slm_candle- Sat 09 Dec 2006
| OMFG YAY!!! I loved it. Update with that damn sequel lol. i await it.
skye- Fri 17 Nov 2006
| i really love the chapter i can't wait to read more. please update real soon. ^_^
katie- Fri 17 Nov 2006
| wow i like it please keep going
| Funny...but nice...
| hey loved it update soon
Aurora Potter- Thu 19 Oct 2006
| awwww thats cute..............
Skye- Thu 19 Oct 2006
| OMG!!! I can't wait for your next chapter. Please update soon...
slm_candle- Thu 19 Oct 2006
| Yay. I love this please update i expect it to come from you.
Lady Angel Of Sleep- Wed 11 Oct 2006
That was great XD...please update soon lol :P
~Kristina a.k.a Angel
| I orgnaly wrote this fan fic in Septebe and posted it on Adult Fanfic.net sorry about the confusion
zen- Mon 09 Oct 2006
Um, you mean october right? 'Cause september ended nine days ago...
Luv the story
Sa-sa15- Thu 05 Oct 2006
| I like this this san Fic, in the beginning it's said then once it got to the middle it was kinda happy but kinda mysterious. keep it up!
Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Wed 04 Oct 2006
| this is really good! i really like it!...please update soon!
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