CONTINUE! please? cuz i love this story line. the spelling kinda sucks and at times i can't make out the phrase but i love it ne ways. umm no offense! ^^;; but yesh please continue! your the first person i've ever reviewed so now you no its good.

I like this story so far, please continue.

there some errors mostly spelling maybe u should get a beta but than that im liking it....

I like how this story started off.So please write another chapter soon.