Hey!!!!!! I TOTALLY agree with Ana. How could you leave a oneshot so unresolved? You left your readers feeling tortured. At least do one more chapter to clear up all the questions and confusion. I was enjoying the chapter until the cliffie ending. Shame on you! Never, ever do a cliffie in a oneshot! It takes away from the story. Please don't be mad at my ranting. It's just that I was disappointed with the ending.

ok, please don't take any offense in what i have to say, but please remember that its mostly just due to hormones and late nights kei? that and the fac that i'm under heavy stress and frustration as well as disapointments aren't helping either (yeah right, like others don't experience that...)
anyway...

What the hell were you thinking?! leaving the readers hanging like that?! i mean seriously?! the least you could've done was give a reason for the guy's presences in the room with Kags before Maru barged in!! like that was her brother, or someone broke in the house, or she had a friend over, wasn't feeling well, slid down in the position Maru found her in while the guy tried to help her up!!! i mean thats just plain evil man!! do you want the readers to suffer? or are you just promoting the use of imagination?!
don't take any offense though coz i thought the story was great! even though it was short, but still!! it's reeaally not nice!! i've read countless stories that have the cliffy kinda feel for the ending and it sucks!!! you know the author was doing a good job with the story and then, BOOM! cuts off the story like *snaps fingers* that!

*sigh* but i can understand though if you are really through with the fic... mebe you were just under an enormous amount of stress, lost your password to this account, forgot all about it, lost your email add, or just don't feel the need to continue... either way, i hope though that you will be able to cope with whatever is happening and consider writing a sequel, even though the story has been published a long time ago and the chances of that are slim to none,,, i'm sure it will be highly appreciated...

oh, and whatever you wish to reply to what i said would be welcome too, so if i offended you or anything, or just need an outlet or something, i insist that you email me at my e-add,,, don't care if you cuss at me like there's no tomorow, or threaten to kill me, as long as you let me know, kei?

great story, hope you keep up the good work! take care!!

~Ana~

That's so sad! Are you gonna do a sequel?

so what happened? did Kagome kinda get cornered by the guy? or did she choose to be with him? i think you should have put a bit more... i dano but it was good.. :)

omg, that's so sad.... now i say you HAVE to type up another one that ends happy, otherwise i'll cry.... and which bulletin was it??
great story
~Faerie Maia

very awesome please put a part twoo or something to show what happens next or what happens in a year or something like that.

This can't be it....can it? This needs to be finished. If it wasn't what it looked like than what then? There's no other conclusion if she wasn't struggling, screaming, doing anything to show or say otherwise. This must be rectified. You can't leave our beloved Sesshoumaru being left this way. Kagome is not that kind of woman...ever. I just can't see it. Please do something for those of us who are left hanging out here in limbo. Great storyline. Captivating, intriguing, fansinating, mindblowing....GOT THE IDEA...Keep going Girlfriend,you got us right where you want us.

wtf?!?! you are going to continue thhihs right?! RIGHT!!!

OMFG! You can't leave it there! Go back Sesshy!!!!! Go back! Kagome chase after him you baka!!!!!! Why!!!!!! NOoooooooooooooooo! What was happening with that dude? NNOOOOOOOOO!!!!! It's the cliffie that killed me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *falls over dead*

sooo.... was it what it looked like?

Noooooooooo!!!!! please correct the mistake, don't end it lake this, don't be soooo EVIL,

ohhh that was awesome!! Please if you are going to continue, do so! Update soon!!

Great one-shot but i think you could probably continue on with for maybe a couple of chapters, so then we would know what was really going on. Anyway great job.
Sakura