omg i sooooo know what you mean. Everytie i write a one shot someone asks if i will coninue it! lol and i can't say no half the time...lol

Hmmm. Not a bad way to start ur story, but it doesn't give much to how the story is goin to be as it plays out. Good summary though. It reminds me of the TV series, Alias. I love that show. I hope that ur story will show more progress in the future.