That was a really sweet story. I started crying at the end. And i NEVER cry. It was sad yet....sweet.

*sniffle* Such a touching and lovely story. Ya know, its so refreshing to read something like this. Most fics show Kagome living young and beautiful forever.This one seemed so ... real.? I really liked this one! Short yet sweet and heart warming. I really felt tears in my eyes.
Great job.

I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!! IT MADE ME CRY!!! Good job!!

omg! i cried !!! so hard my mom was like r u ok?....man that
was soo sad!!!!!....poor guy!!!...............that was a awesome story i
really loved it!

bex *cries*

i like it but she died o god now im crying love the story

I liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow that was sad i started cryin man not alot of ppl can make
me cry n u made me cry ..Wow there no words for its
.....................

that was really cute and sad. It was really good i enjoyed it.

*sniff sniff* poor sesshomaru!!! atleast he got to hold her during her finall moments of life

I loved your story... but it was just so sad

you could turn this into a bigger story.
this be a separate prologue.
that he finds her later,reborn.
but it's just an idea.
this was nice,but sad.