Kagome357- Fri 28 Dec 2007
Uh, well...the first chapter had enough grammatical errors but the second was just unreadable. It looks like your beta used a text program and somehow the quotes and apostrophe symbols were messed up pretty bad. Too bad too because I really wanted to know what happened after the hot springs...

Sesshomarus_Goddess- Fri 24 Nov 2006
i luv it update soon please

daydreamer extream- Thu 24 Aug 2006
I love it but aaaa what is with all the um yea white boxes?

Debra_loves_sesshomaru- Sun 20 Aug 2006
OMG so lacivious. Love it. you simply must update...Man I say that a lot huh oh well it true.

Samantha- Sun 20 Aug 2006
This story sounds so awesome! Update soon! Peace.

elsy- Sun 20 Aug 2006
you better update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SummerSnow- Sun 20 Aug 2006
um... some white blotches going on, might want to take another look at it.

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