Good job! I have been looking for this story for a year now~! You should really update! Despite the minor spelling errors, it's a great story to read and understand. Thanks for making me laugh XD Please continue to write and update! Thank you and have a good day!
Yuli- Mon 23 Jun 2008
hey1 wheres the rest! please dont tell me you've forgotten about this story! this story is great, cant wait to read more, please remember it and update!
Thea- Sat 26 Apr 2008
i very much like this story, the idea is so different from other fics, please continue it
update update please... when do we see kag all grown up...... please update soon...
kat- Sun 10 Feb 2008
I read this story and I think it is real good I hope you will up date it soon I have read it four times already I hope you update I would like to see what happens more between them
.zen.- Tue 15 Jan 2008
Hey BR,
I've just recently started reading this fanfiction and I've got to say, i'm in love!
I'm not exactly sure if this is still an active story, but I'd love to see you keep posting new chapters! The idea is great, though the story might be in need of a little spellcheck. It's nothing big, really.
Anyway, I really love where this is going, and I'd love to see where you take it! Is kagome going to progress in her learning? And how will Sesshoumaru handle the temptation of his 'sweet, little mate'?? I can't wait!! ^_^
.zen.
it is a verry good story.
I would like to see where this will end. Please update often if you can. I like your story and I'm very interested in its progress. I'm glad you started writing on it again.
*hugs and smiles*
annemarie- Tue 16 Oct 2007
the plot is good, you should finish the story. and if you need any help you can always ask me if you want. also, if you can, could you let me know when you post your next chapter?? thanks
Dh7- Thu 11 Oct 2007
Ooo you're alive again. And that was a very warm chapter ^-^ Never losing your spark ey... And I missed Updates on a breeders world :P So goood :P
Dh7- Thu 11 Oct 2007
Ooo you're alive again. And that was a very warm chapter ^-^ Never losing your spark ey... And I missed Updates on a breeders world :P So goood :P
bluemoon_175- Thu 11 Oct 2007
You've made my whole week by updating, I was afraid that you have quit writing on this story, and I can't wait to read more so I hope you try and update asap please and keep up the fantastic job on your stories.
ohiowriter- Thu 11 Oct 2007
Thanks for the update and the e-mail. I look forward to more.
tif- Thu 11 Oct 2007
hiii so can kagome sugumi "PAPA SUGUMI" hehhehehe its just so CUTEE!!!! waaaaaa pls... update again soon thanksss
tif- Thu 11 Oct 2007
yes!!! finally you have updated pls... update again soon and pls.. dont forget breeders word okiii thankss waaaaaaa sooo wonderful thanks
Jaded_Butterfly- Thu 11 Oct 2007
love the stories. both this one and a breeder's world. they are both awesome. they both keep me guessing on whats happening next.
Akari- Mon 03 Sep 2007
nice so far this story really got me hooked up and i really hope that you update soon and i also enjoy the descriptions of how sesshou and kaggys are interating its fluffy and kawaii so yeah when you updat i would really really really appreciate if you could send me a small note to this email so yeah hope once again to hear from you
Ja!!
SexyKitsuneNeko~- Sat 18 Aug 2007
wow's the story is so creative! ive never befor have read anything like this please keep up the good work!
please update T_T
please update T_T
FangedBeasty- Sun 10 Jun 2007
Please do not give up, I do not like the curse that seems to stick to me. I find a fanfic that I like and the author never finishes it. This is really sad, too. for it was an excellent story with lots of potential. I would greatly appreciate it being continued. :)
-Fanged Beasty
tif- Wed 30 May 2007
plss update soon pls...
Like I said before, I love this story! I checked it out again to see if there might have been an update but there wasn't. I just hope that you continue this story, I love the whole entire plot of it all, and lets not forget about how cute! well, I hope you are still going to continue with this story! So Please update as soon as you can! Please!
Kambri_Jade
nekokotori- Fri 02 Feb 2007
pwease update!
i check every day and i look forward to an update.
PLEASE!!
its very good (:
good job!
keep at it!
Odie- Sat 13 Jan 2007
hey i love your story!! i think its cute. are you gonna keep it going??? i think you should!!! i would really enjoy reading it!!!
sweetiefoxy- Sun 07 Jan 2007
This story is one of my favorite story. Why did you not continue writing this story? I love this story so much and I have been waiting for a update on this story. Whose Child is This? ROCKS!!!
sweetiefoxy- Sun 07 Jan 2007
This story is one of my favorite story. Why did you not continue writing this story? I love this story so much and I have been waiting for a update on this story. Whose Child is This? ROCKS!!!
sweetiefoxy- Sun 07 Jan 2007
This story is one of my favorite story. Why did you not continue writing this story? I love this story so much and I have been waiting for a update on this story. Whose Child is This? ROCKS!!!
sweetiefoxy- Sun 07 Jan 2007
This story is one of my favorite story. Why did you not continue writing this story? I love this story so much and I have been waiting for a update on this story. Whose Child is This? ROCKS!!!
sweetiefoxy- Sun 07 Jan 2007
This story is one of my favorite story. Why did you not continue writing this story? I love this story so much and I have been waiting for a update on this story. Whose Child is This? ROCKS!!!
nekokotori- Sat 30 Dec 2006
*tear tear*
omgosh this story is kick ass!!
i LUV IT
good job :D
update soon pwease!!!
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j- Tue 26 Dec 2006
great just like befor but what happened you have not updated in a long time. did you just stop if you did that's to bad b/c this is a great story it has my interest. i hope you update soon.
j- Tue 26 Dec 2006
great!!!! flowing story but why so young.
Renee- Sun 10 Dec 2006
Heeeeey this story is goooood. Update PLEEEEASE. Wow I'm tired.
Kambri_Jade- Tue 05 Dec 2006
Oh, this fic is so cute! I totally fell in love with it and cant wait till the next chapter. Keep it up! And please update ASAP!!!!
Later,
Kambri_Jade
mszbrownangel- Sat 25 Nov 2006
i i like the story
but im not sure about why the title is whose child is this
do you care to explain.. pleaseeee
Jess- Sat 25 Nov 2006
You've done an amazing job so far! I like your writing style, and you've chosen an intruiging story line. I look forward to reading more when it is available.
kuma- Thu 23 Nov 2006
totally awesome i love the plot so orig. update soon
THE ETERNAL MOON- Thu 16 Nov 2006
Update. I beg of you. This is awsome.
It's a great story and I can't wait till the next chapter comes out!! Hope you get a chance to update again soon!!
kagsesskyo- Mon 13 Nov 2006
I love your fanfic!!! I can't wait for you to update the next chapter soon!!!!!!!!!
Rhonda- Wed 20 Sep 2006
I really like this story also, are you planning to complete it or give it a conclusion?
Rhonda
ohiowriter- Tue 12 Sep 2006
This is great, too! Could you e-mail me the updates for both stories?!
Chibes- Wed 06 Sep 2006
She was melancholy for almost a week afterward and had shied away from people until a young mother with a kitsune pup had showed up. The little boy had gotten lost like she had when she first came here and she had helped him find her. The hug she had gotten for the thankful mother seemed to restore her trust in people and she finally went back to normal. For which I was thankful and immediately gave the young woman’s husband a raise and a personal thank you from my secretary.
That is what you wrote in chapter 3! and in chapter four it was:
“It seems my sister has survived well for her first day with you.†Kikyo said amusedly.
I'm sorry if it seemed like I skimmed the chapters but I didn't and its not anything bad to forget what you write I do this often but I never forget what I read so clarify for me!
Chibes- Wed 06 Sep 2006
Hey is this not going in a chronological order? Because in chapter 3 at least a week has passed since she moved in with sesshie and chapter 4 it was only a day that passed when she went to visit her sister...
"Music of almost all kinds I enjoy. Reading I love as well as cooking.â€Â
I LOLed a lot here: she sounds like Yoda!
I really enjoy this fic (Yoda spell alikes and all XD) Please update soon
Ari
jeanie- Mon 04 Sep 2006
i like this fanfic but why is she so young. other then that i can't wait to read the rest. e-mail me the update. you rock ^_^!!!!!!
This is funny and romantic. It's also reall cute.
kagsesskyo- Mon 04 Sep 2006
update soon!!! It's a great fanfic!!!! Please????? T.T
swtdrm01- Mon 04 Sep 2006
How sweeeeet! Will Kagura be mean or not? Will we later see Miroku and Sango and how about Shippo. I know I'm probably getting ahead of the story. I just love it.
helikesitheymikey!- Mon 04 Sep 2006
LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But this isn't going to be one of those 50+ chapter stories...right?
I mean after the teachers are decided and everyone is settled it should skip to 10-20 years in the future!!!!!!!!!
I doubt that I'm the only one that wants to have them have pups soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A scene keeps playing in my mind. It has to do with Kagome being "ready" for her full "responsibilities" of being Sesshomaru's mate and her telling him that when he least expects it. Then he promptly falls off his bed.
*cackles evilly*
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Eternityoftears- Mon 04 Sep 2006
Wow.
This is super awesome!!!!
You've written this so well, the age factor dpoesn't seem "disgusting" or anything like that. Very sweet and appropriate.
I'd like to continue reading this, so if it isn't a bother, please email me at
sakura_flower15@yahoo.com
when you update.
I'd appreciate it! ^_^
Once again, great job!
gina- Sun 03 Sep 2006
very cool.. liked it alot
AoiKitsune- Sat 26 Aug 2006
aww, okay well i do hope u write soon. Good luck w/ ur new job. i luv ur story hope 2 c an update soon. AoiKitsune
ShadowChick- Fri 25 Aug 2006
i love it please please please update soon
phxazkyote- Fri 25 Aug 2006
see I was wondering when this would happen. lol its still a cute story.
Phxazkyote- Fri 25 Aug 2006
Um what about a breeder's world? I am your loyal fan damnit. lol..Dang.. um.. sesshpmaru's not going to be considered a pedofile is he??? lol haa haa. I can't wait to read the rest.
hi blue ribbon-
I just love you're story...please update as soon as you can...
Keep up the good work-
-Silk_worm
orchid- Fri 25 Aug 2006
that's too bad... and i was getting into the fic. oh well.... hope things work out for ya....
orchid- Fri 25 Aug 2006
that was soo sweet... love chap 2
orchid- Fri 25 Aug 2006
awesome... different... i love it... keep up the good work...and this was just chap 1... wow...
sesshomaru20- Fri 25 Aug 2006
good story! please update soon!
jem89- Fri 25 Aug 2006
I love this story. It' s so fun to read. I understand what you mean about not being able to update as much. Anyways please update soon : )
Kurisutaru- Sun 06 Aug 2006
this is a great story update soon
REDWOLF- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Hi
im confused, is Kagome 4 yrs old or is she 12?? I would appreciate your help on this!
REDWOLF
helikesitheymikey!- Sun 06 Aug 2006
WOW! We see that Fluffy has a heart..and a conscience.
This is getting more and more interesting.
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
Kaila- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Very cute. This is a really neat twist on the Kagome/Sesshoumaru paring. I cant wait to see where this story will lead.
this story is awesome!!! it would so cool if you continued. i love the story. so please, please. continue the story, and update soon!!!!!!!!!
Laura- Fri 04 Aug 2006
that was sooo cute!!!! please finish the story!!! how cute!!! ok sorry about that.. ok well, i'm going now!!! bye bye!!!
kagome15- Fri 04 Aug 2006
WOW!!! it surpise me that kagome is sesshomaru mate at the age of 5!! please update ASAP!!!! its a very interesting story!!!
Xieyen- Fri 04 Aug 2006
Please continue i really like this
eiko- Fri 04 Aug 2006
very cute. please continue
ILuvsHiei- Fri 04 Aug 2006
awww... I love it!!! It's so cute that a four year old could do that to Sesshoumaru!! lol... I really hope you continue the story!!! ^__^
rena2sweet- Fri 04 Aug 2006
I do like how this fic is beginning :-) sounds like it's gonna be good! I have to ask though; I began reading your first fic A Breeder's World when you first started it and I loved it. Will you continue it or have you lost interest in the story?
mistykid- Fri 04 Aug 2006
Please continue!!! I want to know what happens next!!!!!!
it's good so far! keep up the good work!!!!!!:)
gina- Thu 03 Aug 2006
very interesting.. =) i do like it although it could be a little sticky w/ the age difference.. i do like it though.. =)
betrayed- Thu 03 Aug 2006
i LOVE it. you have to continue it. ill be mad if you dont.
This is an amazing story idea!! I look forward to the next chapters.
helikesitheymikey!- Thu 03 Aug 2006
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST INTERESTNG SESS/KAG STORIES I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was very good. I liked it alot.I would like to see more of it.
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