Please continue! I really love this story line! PLEEZE CONTINUE!!!!!

i cant wait for the story to continue!!! please inform me when its done. ^_^

i cant wait for the story to continue!!! please inform me when its done. ^_^

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stupid computer.
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Hmm. Well, there's the connecting of Sess and Kag. I wish she would toss aside her notions of 'too different' and 'unnatural' and just enjoy the life given to her. I'm also wondering about their son's POV. He's at least ten, right? I actually am not interested in more than a brief hint as to his view of the world, but I wold like to know his view of the situation. Is he even aware that she is his mother? Is he upset because he doesn't feel secure and his fear has turned to anger? *shrugs* I'm sure you'll do fine with whatever plot you decide on. In the end it will be uniquely your style.

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This one really liked this story
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It takes a completely different approach to the whole relationship.
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As your other reviewers pointed out, there are many questions left unanswered.
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This one would like to know also, Jarakuheart-sama.
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Especially what happened so that she couldn't go home. .>
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As for ideas for more chapters...
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You could..
~rehash past events (flashbacks or comtemplation or even heated debates over what happened and what should have been done could work)
~delve deeper into current problems (the child's issues or their *ahem* issues)
~introduce more characters (some we know from the past or some creations of your own, it's all up to you)
~have a major crisis occur that they have to deal with along with their issues and feelings (A fire, a war, it doesn't really matter. Get creative!)
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Well, this is undoubtably the longest review this one has written.
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Ever.
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This one wishes you luck.
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And will be waiting for the next update.
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This one really liked this story
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It takes a completely different approach to the whole relationship.
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As your other reviewers pointed out, there are many questions left unanswered.
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This one would like to know also, Jarakuheart-sama.
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Especially what happened so that she couldn't go home. .>
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As for ideas for more chapters...
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You could..
~rehash past events (flashbacks or comtemplation or even heated debates over what happened and what should have been done could work)
~delve deeper into current problems (the child's issues or their *ahem* issues)
~introduce more characters (some we know from the past or some creations of your own, it's all up to you)
~have a major crisis occur that they have to deal with along with their issues and feelings (A fire, a war, it doesn't really matter. Get creative!)
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Well, this is undoubtably the longest review this one has written.
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Ever.
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This one wishes you luck.
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And will be waiting for the next update.
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hmmm to continue this fic u just need a couple of filler chapters....like why their son is mad at her....a flash back will do.....why kags isn't aging.....why she wont become his mate....why the child has no clue that kags is his mother that sort of thing and then u can get o with the big picture

Hey Jarakuheart! I really loved this supposed one-shot. It's an idea I've never heard nor read of before. It's most definitely intriguing and interesting.

The only thing that's left me bewildered though, is that I didn't even realize this was a one-shot until I read some of your reviews. It did not sound like it was just a one-shot. And to be quite honest, I'd love to see this story be continued.

Give a flashback of how they got together and why the kid's mad. sorry I forgot his name. Update soon.

Very nice. I'd like to point out a spelling error to you if I may. I've seen it in alot of fan fics. Lose only has one 'o' in it. The word you typed in, "loose", is another word entirely. For example: "Foot loose and fancy free..." or "He was afraid to lose her." I hope this shows the difference between the two words.

I really enjoyed your story. It was well written and cute!

So you're saying that the Inu-Tachi are all deceased?

so why was the pup upset? what was sessho doing that kagome didn't approve of? why would bad things happen if sessho picked up the kid? and why didn't kagome want to become sessho's mate? could you answer these questions with either another one-shot or another chappy? please!! *puppy dog pout*

I like...
but...
why will bad things happen
if Sess picks up his son??
Henno_Hao

thank you Jarakuheart-sama for this wonderful fic....i love it...the idea has never been tried b4 and thats what makes me love it even more...update soon

I like this fic already. If I wasn't so lazy I'd sign in & save it to my favs... *sigh* Oh well, I'll do it later. Hmmm... Angry sex, huh? What's the rating on this fic? *LOL* Great job!

First for the Chiggers..double ew. Second, SHE HAD A FULL YOUKAI PUP!! YEEEHAAAA!!!! Very nice. Short and fun. I wonder what exactly the pup was upset about, but I can guess. Love the name you gave him by the way....chapter 2? *puppy eyes* Just to see how they turn out. (Hope their children make up half of the Inuyoukai population.)^_~

You know, I think that's probably the most canonical description of their relationship ever written.

Waaiiii, so cute at the end. I, of course, will take it one step further and assume that they have nice, non-angry, "I'm apologizing" sex, proceed to mate and have lots more little babies.

Really good story...but... why was the kid mad at Kagome?
I think you should do some more one-shots about this story.

err.. what are triggers?
I like the oneshot, it looks like a oneshot should and it doesn't need sequeling. Ikirumaru sounds so Cute!
Ari

Oh my God! So far, this is really good!!!!!!!!!! I never read rated G fan fics... But I already love this. lol. Keep up the great work! Update soon.