| Ahh poor Sesshy leaving him in the hands of a hormonal teen and a crazy Kagome... I love it! But work on your spelling, and read over your chapter before posting! XD E-mail me when you update! I'll keep reading! (Smart_girl46360@yahoo.com)
Scruffy Wolf- Mon 24 Jul 2006
| LOL!!! I love how you're writing this! You're very good, and I look forward to more.
Victoria- Sun 23 Jul 2006
| this story is going to be great i cant wait for more
hey, it's good, really good. But, could you add...er...commas? I kinda get lost...hehe ^^U no offense, really.
Keep it up!
-Kanz
| yay!! i totally luv this storie!! it was great!! plz update soon!it was greta!!
althea- Sun 23 Jul 2006
| i want more more more more more! it was so aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwweeeeeeedsome so please update. one question is rin going to end up with the general whose older than Sesshoumaru!?! !
Cynthia- Sun 23 Jul 2006
| Just some constructive critizime. Use (, ) these things in the right places to make it eaisier to read. ^_^ I don't know what they're called. Love the story nonetheless.
Saphire Miko- Sat 22 Jul 2006
| very interesting...update soon
Kuma- Sat 22 Jul 2006
| this story brings back memories...lol...update soon
| Good fanfic ^-^ Update soon I can't wait too see how Kagome comforts Rin!!
Nique- Sat 22 Jul 2006
| Its really great and original keep it comin!!!
Unseen Watcher- Sat 22 Jul 2006
| I kind of like Miroku this way. Now instead of the others just sitting by the wayside and sighing at his antics, they threaten him! Hah! Way to go! .... Hmmm, does Kagome have a lot of chocolate with her.
Kohana- Sat 22 Jul 2006
| I really like it!! I can't wait to read more!!
SilverPhoenix21- Sat 22 Jul 2006
| Great start so far! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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