| this story was very good and very original. I really liked all of the scientific explinations on pheromones and animal behavior and I liked how sesshmaru reacted to kagome and her expiraments.
Ayuri- Thu 01 May 2008
| Um...I'm going to have to give that a 5.5. I didn't see anything that I would deem fluff in there. Sorry, but it was just rather fluffless.
| science and fanfiction.. my favorite!
katie- Thu 14 Feb 2008
| 2
| This was an incredible story, I read it from start to finish without stopping! It's truly amazing and I can't wait to read and enjoy more of your work!
Ahh.... Second time I read this one.
I must admit that I liked the first chapters the most, because they had me laughing so hard that I had tears in my eyes. The final battle was a tad long, but in my opinion, much would have been lost if you had shortened it.
The thing I love most about this story, must be how well you portray Kagome. It must be because of the first-person perspective, but I think you did very well!
I'm re-reading some old favorite fanfics of mine, with the intention of making a site where I can recommend good fanfics to others. It's still a work in progress, but in a few months, I will publish it on my new site called InuyashAddiction. I will be recommending this one, and probably a few more of your stories. You have a great style in your writing, and can write both comedy, drama, action, romance and lemons. If you ever decide to write your own stories, I wouldn't be surprised if you get published one day. :)
| This story was incredible!
Kiori- Thu 19 Jul 2007
| 2
| "3. Well it certainly was fluffy, but then everything you have written so far has been rather over the top and I love it! Keep up the good work!"
Kailah- Sun 10 Jun 2007
| OMG!!! I LOVED your story!! It was the best one EVER!! I hope you have written more!! I'm thinking about adding a story of my own, if I can even get into this place!! It's like it's security guarded, or something!! Well, I'll review some more!! Bye!!
Kailah- Sat 09 Jun 2007
| 2
| Oh my sides are starting to ache!! That was a hilarious chapter 12! Green goop all ove Sesshomaru eeeek. I am surprised he did not try to kill something and that Kagome did not try to kill Sota. Keep it up!
Hello,I have to say, in all honesty no flattering intended, this is one of the best fics i have read on this site so far.
Also, I know of a site for independent writers where they can submit there short stories in a contest. A sort of 'battle of the fics' to say. I am going to have the admin of the site come read 'My Experiment'.
If she likes it, and if your interested; maybe you'd like to re-post this story there for a contest. Winner gets a $500 check mailed to them if they win....motivation maybe?
I'm not a very good writer, but have been told I'm a good critic(hence how I know the admin of the site, I work for her).
I think you really do have a shot at winning with some grammer, and spelling corections(dont take this as a flamming please, my spelling, and grammer SUCK), and a betta.
Congrads on such a wonderful piece, it was an amazing story
Lena- Wed 14 Mar 2007
| I VERY much enjoyed your fic, it was funny witty and i loved the rapport between Kagome and Sesshomaru. It held my attention very much. Now , don't take this badly i very much enjoyed your fic, but at sometimes i found Kagome's rambling to go on beyond rambling that i just skipped, rambling is good, but when it goes one for TOO long (you only did this a few times) it takes away from the fic, and i had think 'what was she talking about again?' Also your lemons...not the worlds best, but how you build it up with all the URST is VERY GOOD! one is lead to think this is going to be an amazing lemon.....but it turns out really tame. If you pulled your lemons up a few notches I bet your fics would be more amazing. Regardless, i had a ball reading this fic! One of the better ones i have read so far on this site! Full points for originality and character portrayal
michelle- Sun 04 Mar 2007
HI!!!!!i just realized something. does kagome has the same lifespan as sesshomaru?since they joined their power, soul and everything? i kept re-reading the ending of the 2nd last chapter and i wasn't sure of what to think. heh.
anyway! i had so much fun reading this fic again!i'm so happpy now!!!!!^^
Mikara- Sat 03 Mar 2007
yeah.. me again.. currently in Chap 30..
And I say...
What fluff?
No, really... what fluff? where?
*blink*
Mikara- Sat 03 Mar 2007
Heh. Another review! XD
I already noticed awhile back but once I read it again, I decided to dorp a review just for the sake of it...
You know, the one where Sess recites a "poem" and Kag replies in kind?
Haiku!!!! If you yourself made it, I must say.. nice work!
xD
*glomp*
Mikara- Sat 03 Mar 2007
.. I know I could be wrong but...
Why do I have a feeling that English isn't your mother tongue? I mean... interchanging the words "pray" and "prey" quite a rare occurence if you use english quite a lot.
sorry if I'm wrong in my assumptions.....................
and the fact that you said so yourself in your AN didn't help one bit..
/swt
and you really should get this beta'ed
But considering how you went from this to "Tears of the Fallen", the improvement was impressive.
I mean, when I read the first chapters of this story, it was sort of, kinda hard to believe that this and TotF was written by the same person..
And on that note, I hope you'll make a Toga/Kag fic. XD
And by that I mean T/K being the main pairing.
/heh XDD
Rei- Fri 02 Mar 2007
I'm only in chap 2 and yet...
So many spelling errors!
like.... "redily" should be "readily" and "plesant" should be "pleasant" and "finnally" should be "finally"...
And I'm no where near halfway through.. In fact.. I'm barely past the second part. *sigh*
You might want to reread this fic to fix any errors..
or you could just let MS Word do it for you... with discretion of course since MS Word isn't really that smart and whose grammar correction whatever is totally non-existent. =3
Oh.. and in "ll I had left to do to complete my little experiment...."; "had" is supposed to be "have".
x3
ItsNotMe- Mon 22 Jan 2007
haha. This story makes me want to be a scientist. :D Great job. You have created a story that entraps the reader with every emotion possible. I have read it once before, and I re-read all of it in one day. I am a big fan of all your work! Thanks for making such a great story! :]
-ItsNotMe
michelle- Thu 14 Dec 2006
hi yet again^^
iy's now 4.20am in the morning and i'm reading your fic on the sly...haha. my parents would kill me to know i'm up so late still readin...honestly, this is the first time i stayed up so late just to read...
anyway, fabulous story weaving yet again!!!!you have my endless admiration yet once more!
have you ever considered writing as a job if you're not already one officially? because i think you would amount to much in the writing industry...
i eagerly await the next day now so i can read more but now, i have to retire for the night...it's times like these that i wish i needn't have to sleep...
P.S.: I was wondering...could you provide a more informative summary for "the story"? nonetheless, whether you do so or not, i'll start reading it as soon as i can get to the computer the following day^^ you'll be hearing from me really soon again...
Allison- Wed 06 Dec 2006
| Once again, I have been blown away. I started this story thinking it was going to be completely funny, no deep plot or powerful emotions, but man, was I wrong. I loved how you combined hilarious(and I do mean hilarious haha) scenes with loving ones. You twisted Sesshoumaru's personality, but you did it so to fit if he were to have a mate. You also made Kagome (Inuyasha too)mature enough to be believable...And then ending of Naraku was absolutely mind blowing. So, over all, what I am saying is that you, and your stories kick major ass. Be looking forward to more comments from me :P Wonderful, wonderful fic.
Isis- Sat 02 Dec 2006
| After reading your current work..Tears of the Fallen. I knew I had to read this one. Although I was not sure about reading a fic told in the first person from Kagome's perspective...I am so glad that I did! You did an amazing job with this story. It was so wonderfully thought out and creative. And seeing things solely from her perspective was a refreshing twist. You really got into character. And the depths you exposed were fantastic! You are an incredibly good writer....I truly look forward to reading more of your work!
Angie- Sun 26 Nov 2006
1. OOOoooOOOooo Fluffy, fluffy, fluffy! I love the fluffiness! More, more, more!
Gimme More Fluffy!!!!! ^.^
Please don't e-mail me though, cause I just started cleaning out my box, and I don't want to accidentily delete it, lolz, You story rocks so far!
| OMFG IM CRYING yea I know this fanfic is old and shit like that but I'm crying and i usully dont review but i do when i CRY.......... Thank you for letting Inu be compassinate for once
| You probably don't need to hear this again because you must have heard it hundreds of times before but this story was excellent. A real 'page turner'. My eyes were glued to the screen. The lemon was tastefully gone too. I am off to read another one of your stories.
Chibes- Sun 12 Nov 2006
| This is an awesome story and it ended hilariously...now I have a project worth 50% of grade to finish so ja!
MAMI- Sat 11 Nov 2006
| THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!I LUV IT!!!WOOOO!!
Philadelphia's Worst Nightmare- Wed 01 Nov 2006
I raise my eyebrow all the time! Some of its most common translations are:
"You are an idiot(moron, imbecile, etc.)."
"What the hell are you talking about?!"
"That's an incredibly stupid idea."
"Whatever."
"I don't care."
"Make up your freakin' mind!"
"You actually expect me to tell you that?"
"The only reason you are not already dead is because you amuse me as much as you piss me off."
"Prepare to die!"
And so on and so forth. Yeah, I'm not the nicest or most polite of creatures. But what can I say? It's fun to insult people!
-Philadelphia's Worst Nightmare
Philadelphia's Worst Nightmare- Wed 01 Nov 2006
Something funny and off-topic? I read this whole story twice before watching the third movie, borrowed the movie from Chelsea, now I'm reading this again. I FINALLY know what that line's from! Yipee!
Oh, by the way, awesome story! Of course, I'm rereading it, so of course it is! Sesshoumaru's so awesome.
-Philadelphia's Worst Nightmare
| I loved repeat LOVED this story. so cute and great!
Leanna Hill- Mon 16 Oct 2006
I just want to say that reading your fic is an experience I will never forget. It was...wow!! I think I have become a serious fan of your work, just for that fic alone!!! It was amazing!! Words belittle the impact such a play on words has effected me because they are so simplely put, but have such an over all effect. I love the way you betrayed each character. The way you plot twist and turns so you can never predict your next chapter. You had me on the edge of my seat in the battle scene. It was so mature and adept that there will never be anyone (at least to me) that will be betray the final battle with such a well aptitude. I'm humbled beyond ajacent babble to say that i have partaken in reading such work. I thank you for taking the time out your hectic schedule to write it and I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I did reading it.
This is just in case you didn't get the message I sent!!
Pinkit-chan- Sat 14 Oct 2006
Hi there from Panama City, yes the country!
I just was reading my email for the IYFG nominations and i saw that one of the nominations is for your fic, so here goes me reading your fic in a day and a half, yes 32 hours!
So i must say that i believe your experiment went well, and i do think there is trails there for a continuation maybe? Something maybe post-mirokus-hentai add-in? kags mood during pregnancy towards or dear beloved sessho?
Great work ShadowWeaver1, you get a whole box of chocolate-covered Oreos for this one!
(Do you have any other stories i could look into?
Mary- Sat 07 Oct 2006
OMG I FREAKING LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! Your story was so awesome. I love that you use science to tie in with your story. It is a totally new way to write a story and I loved it. Thank you sooo much
Mary
Kandi- Mon 02 Oct 2006
| Nice story! Wholey entertaining and often made me laugh out loud! Excellent job!
Jenny- Mon 02 Oct 2006
Man, this was a great fanfic! It's very rare nowadays to find such unique fanfics when it comes to the Sess/Kag pairing. I really liked the experiments in the beginning, and they sure gave me a few good laughs! XD
I like stories written in Kagomes POV, for some reason. It could be because she's such a cool character, and also because that way we have no idea what goes on in Sesshoumaru's head. Most fanfics have a part where Sesshoumaru is debating with his inner voices about if he likes Kagome or not, but thankfully your story is free from that cliché (or however that's spelled).
Once I finished my Inuyasha-site I'm working on, I hope you won't mind if I recommend this story, because it was definitely worth the hours spent reading it!
- Jenny
Reika- Sun 01 Oct 2006
| ohayo. thanks for this story. the plot kept me going so I basically had to read the story at one go. Keep writing...and creating different realities with your work. You do a good job a it. Ja ne.
karla- Fri 29 Sep 2006
| AH!!!!!! no i don't want it to be over!!!! man! it was wonderful while it lasted! i very much enjoyed this story from start to very amusing and arousing finish! please continue with your wonderful stories.. ah maybe another sessh and Kagome? hmm i will be looking for new installments! keep up the good work!
Lynne- Thu 28 Sep 2006
| I just wanted to let you know what a fantastic piece you have written. I read the whole thing at one time, and I was thrilled. As a biology major myself, I loved the way you mixed science into this story. Wonderful job and I look foward to seeing your next story.
Oooooh naughty naughty! And Sess with red hair now that would be funny!
So what are you going to do now that you are done? Or are you done? I mean really is Sess and Kags ever actually done baiting eachother? I have to say a definite not.
Well great job and can't wait to see what else you can come up with!
Such a fantastic fanfic! One of those that you can't stop reading. That grab you and hold your attention.
The plot is so very original, too! And I loved the humurous scenes that you created, they were timed at just the right moment to balance out the angsty ones.
And the characters! I loved how you portrayed them! Sesshoumaru (to me) seems to have just the right amount of coldness and Kagome has the pinch of cheerful take-everything-as-it-comes attitude.
Also a very inspiring fanfic. Reading your story made me want to write my own!
So thanks! Thanks for writing such a wonderful story and for helping me to write my own!
| I absolutely loved this story!!! I really wish it wasn't over but it was the perfect ending! Thank you for putting the twins in the story I thought it was adorable!. e to see many stories from you in the future so please consider writing some more wonderful stories such as this one.
Michelle- Mon 25 Sep 2006
Whaaa, I can't believe it’s over! :( it makes me wanna cry! I have nothing to look forward to anymore... MAKE A SEQUEL! PLEASE!!! I need something interesting to read! WHAAAA my experiment is over! ANYWAY... don’t worry about my oncoming depression... I just want to let you know that this is by far one of the best stories ever to be posted on A Single Spark and you are an awesome author... I will miss My Experiment but will forever love it...
Your bestest fan...,
Michelle!
autumngold- Mon 25 Sep 2006
| Excellent story!! I even enjoyed the lemon, shame on me!! I hope that you write another great Sesshoumaru/Kagome story soon!!
Ha ha ha! I love Miroku to death! He's so hilarious!! I wish he were my friend, we'd have so much fun together. You could come hang out with us, too, you and Sesshoumaru. Maybe we'd invite Kagome. Definitely Sango. Inuyasha has an appointment.
Great story.
Insomniak- Sun 24 Sep 2006
Fantastic! Absolutely fantastic!!
I adored it.
Sintar- Sun 24 Sep 2006
Great Story I read it the entire way through!!! So funny!!!!!! Great job!!! Can't wait to read more by you!!
~Sintar
LadyinRed- Sun 24 Sep 2006
| sigh> im keeping this one on my favorites list... very nicely done. 1st person lemon was tastefully done. the thought of miroku saying all that was hillarious...and a little disturbing... oh well you have an excellent writing style. im sure i will enjoy all of your future works *hint hint* if you need a beta let me know id be glad too.
Silver Drache- Sun 24 Sep 2006
| I have to say that you are one of the best writers that I have ever had the privledge to read from. You are amazing, and I love the feel you give to a story. Please keep it up.
wynter89- Sun 24 Sep 2006
...
Speechless... That was one of a kind. It brought tears of laughter and sympathy... man that was great!
Thank you very much for writing this.
good luck
AWWWWWWWWWWW...... A happy ending!!!!!!!!!
~FFM~
mrs sesshy- Sun 24 Sep 2006
| fantabulous!!! do i hear an epilogue? i'd love to meet their twins. anyways, i really enjoyed this story, funny and so full of adventures.
Unseen Watcher- Sun 24 Sep 2006
| *Clapping* Bravo! Wonderful! (hope they're full youkai) *unrepentant grin* Someday, if I ever get a plot together, I'm going to ask your permission to use some aspect of your 'instincts' theories. ^_^
Lady Nefiset- Sun 24 Sep 2006
| Again...ahem......AWESOME FIC.Thank you for all the educational advice, and an even more SPECIAL "thank you" for the LEMONY GOODNESS/COMEDY. Sorry for the pressure on the lemon though. The sexual frustration was getting to me. That's what happens when you put Kags and Sess in the same room together. I hope to read any future fanfics you may post and I'll be keeping you on my top 20 fan-authors list.
kat- Sat 23 Sep 2006
| why should i be ashamed, i've never felt ashamed in my whole... arlight so just this past month but still! it's too much fun to encourage such behavior... and that was a very good first lemon
Dani Lyn- Sat 23 Sep 2006
| im not that far along into the story yet but i HAD to review i love this story! its one of my Faves keep on writin' your doin Great
Cochrann- Sat 23 Sep 2006
| Waaaaaa...It's over!! I'm soooo sad...I absolutely loved this story and wish it would never end!!
wonderful fanfic- you did a great job...
ja!
Silk_worm
LuaHaunted- Sat 23 Sep 2006
I loved this chapter!
The lemon was very tasteful, in my opinion..... And I laughed sooooooo hard, on the part of Miroku, and on the part of the bushes too...
Great sense of humour!
So, this is the end, right?
Plan on writing anything else?
Hope so! I would read it!
So....
Yeah! DO it!
Bye!
inuyoukai8- Sat 23 Sep 2006
| WOOHOOOO! Awesome story! Great job on it, I was completely enthralled
karla- Sat 23 Sep 2006
| hehehe *bear hugs authoress* Wonderful chappy!!!!!!!! short and sweet and just awe inspiring!!!! *gives you a cookie* :) i cannot wait for the next installment!!!!
Metis- Fri 22 Sep 2006
| Ah, nothing like death threats to show you really care. ;)
Hi-
I haven't reviewed your fic at all...being that I've been busy with university work and writing my own fics...but I just started reading your fic and I'm very impressed...It's excellent, keep up the good work!!!
ja!!
Silk_worm
Maggie- Thu 21 Sep 2006
| That was an AWESOME STORY!!! I loved it from beginning to end. Thx for sharing it.
Insomniak- Thu 21 Sep 2006
Truly one of the best pieces of work I have ever read. I anxiously awaited every chapter. Everything seemed to fit into place like a puzzle piece. This fanfiction was a fantastic piece of literature that I truly wish could be animated because its realism and detail should be shown.
Congradulations on such a wonderful story. I look forward to anything else you may choose to write.
45cats- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| You write like Sueric. Are you sure you have a degree in science? The hi tech terms seemed rather pedestrian. Perhaps I misunderstood? Some of this may very well have been over my head. I kept waiting for a plot; with little result. Great topic sentences though. I like the way you made Kagome all-knowing. And powerful. That hardly ever happens.
Renoumaru- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| Ahhh! it's DONE! -Dies.- Well.... that was a... interesting ending. xD Does this mean kagome will live longer? or will she still live the normal life of a human? T_T She could always be reborn again.... now that theier souls are tied, he'd be able to find her again, right? -Blink blink.-
ohiowriter- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| This is great. You've explained some things that other authors normaly leave unexplained. I can't remember the list I mentaly made earlier today now, but if I could this would be the best review I've ever left for a story. If I remember it I'll write it down. Sorry.
| Yay! Thank you soo much for that last one. You really had me going there...I thought Kagome was really going to leave Sesshou. So thank you for proving me wrong. ^_^
Cochrann- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| awesome chapter!! and I tottaly agree with you - a story needs horrible cliffies and heart-wrenching scenes in order to make the nice lovy-dovy resolution more enjoyable to read. I look forward to the epilogue whenever you feel like posting it.
autumngold- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| I have enjoyed reading this story so much!! You are an extremely gifted author!! Please forgive me for not reviewing before, but I just had to let you know now how much I appreciate this story!! Can't wait for the final chapter!!
kat- Wed 20 Sep 2006
how bout ending the torment of your interrupted lemons, cause those are just mean!
can tell i live my love life through fanfiction? love life i have no love life... shutting up now, update soon please
miharu- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| I'm just telling you how much I love your story, but after 43 chapters and still no lemon even though it's NC-17 I'm just a bit disappointed. Just a bit so no worries. But I was hoping if I could request that you don't just end the story there. You could still do SO much with it I'm sure! So please don't stop there. It's not that it's a bad ending it's just it's soo open ended and bland. I know you have one more chapter but come on write more of the story like have Kagome do more experiments or something and more light and funny and happy chapters because ever since the battle everything has been so heavy and depressing and even though there was a few light chapters after it just wasn't the same. Anyways just a few suggestions and i honestly do love your story.
Michelle- Wed 20 Sep 2006
Oh... how sweet... :)
GAH! Whaaa.... the story is almost over.... WHAAAAA!!!! :(
Not good... but what can I say...
I cant say anything, but I can cry, right? lol
ANyway... cant wait for the LAST chapter...
Later,
Michelle, (your bestest fan)
Lily- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| Very well written, good battle scene those are hard, thank you for this enjoyable experience in reading your fine literary work. Keep the good work, I will look forward to more stories and perhaps one more chapter. :)
Tori- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| So My question is this are you going to make up for putting us through hell By adding a good long sex scene? I mean really nice. I mean hot smoldering sex. hmmmm I mean good story* Cough* Yes but I would like to see more of it please. I'm tired of being teased.
fluffy-kins- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| You're my hero... ::gaze with stars in eyes:: If not for you this lonely soul would have died of boredum. You saved her from a most dredful end! Thank you! ... (now if you'll excuse me there are a couple of ants that need to be delt with...) Since there's another chapter coming up update soon. (I had a feeling the well wasn't going to work...)
Wow sappy, but good. Boy them threats must of put you into writing mode, you kicked this one out quick.
Sess all lovey dovey is sooooo cute, hes such a softie! Deserves a giant biscuit for his tlc. but kags WILL be punished for trying to run away.(yes?) A good spanking for being such a bad girl.
And now your so close to being done. I say go out with a big bang(ing) I'm so dirty minded. Anyways great job on the chappy, and good luck with the ending.
Metis- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| Silly little girl. :)
| AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
| AHH!!!. Don't stop there! First you tease us with a near lemon, then you give us a tear-jerker cliffy!!!! Enough teasing, please! CONTINUE!
I wonder if i have ever commented you on your wonderful skills on leaving a cliffhanger. do you know how much i love those...
Was it a good idea to listen in on their conversation, it kind of forced her to rashily make her dicision.
Great chapter as always, even the cliffhanger was brilliant.
good luck
i hope you update soon
Isina17- Tue 19 Sep 2006
OH....MY....GOD....
I just can't beleve it.
ok....please update soon...please...please....please.....i'm begging here.... *crawls* please...please... *Throws money* please..please...please... Well, i beleve I have disgraced my person long enough, so I hope you got the point!
And you are a WONDERFULL writer.
Besitos Z.Z.
(I'm Italian, so please -again- forgive my spelling)
Michelle- Tue 19 Sep 2006
GAH! How could you cut if off there... sooooo EVIL!!! And so sad, oh... poor Kagome... poor Sesshoumaru... hehehhe... poor me for having to WAIT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!
LOL
I have a couple of hunches about whats gunna happen... lets see if you can surprise me *crosses fingers*... ^_^
Later,
Michelle (your bestest FAN!!!!)
Faye- Tue 19 Sep 2006
| No!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It can't just stop like that! I. Must. Know. What. Happens. *falls to the ground and begs author to update soon*
Faye- Tue 19 Sep 2006
| No!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It can't just stop like that! I. Must. Know. What. Happens. *falls to the ground and begs author to update soon*
Tori- Tue 19 Sep 2006
| Evil, pure evil!!!!!! Gah You had me going. update as soon as you can. I'm dying to see what happens.
Pats- Tue 19 Sep 2006
| no man, you are EVIL worst than evil, HOW.COULD.YOU.DO.THAT, how do you sleep at night, ah? i want to know, really don't you have like a conscience, that is wrong, you better update SOON, and make them stay together like forever, please!!!!!!!!!
karla- Tue 19 Sep 2006
| GAH!!!!!!!!!! *yells, rants, then calms down* sigh... pweese hurry witht he next chappy!!! I just bhave to know what happens!!!!!!!! *bats eyes and begs* :)
kat- Mon 18 Sep 2006
your computer better be in that pillow fort cause i'm laying seige until you update!!! you can't hide forever!
mean cliffie very very mean cliffie update soon and fix it!!!
Silver Drache- Mon 18 Sep 2006
| *glare*
localsamurai- Mon 18 Sep 2006
| NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I can't believe you did that. Why?!?! OMGosh, update soon or else. *glares*
Insomniak- Mon 18 Sep 2006
| I love the wording...take me home....hmmmm. Home is where the heart is perhaps? lol. Awaiting anxiously.
Insomniak- Mon 18 Sep 2006
| I love the wording...take me home....hmmmm. Home is where the heart is perhaps? lol. Awaiting anxiously.
Insomniak- Mon 18 Sep 2006
| I love the wording...take me home....hmmmm. Home is where the heart is perhaps? lol. Awaiting anxiously.
Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Mon 18 Sep 2006
hey this story is great!!
aww...that last chapter was soo sad!!
poor kagome...
poor sesshoumaru!!....
i love ur story...please update really soon!!
ooo....quick question...when u write "kukukukuku" is that like laughing or something??.... heeheehee..... i've never really understood that...Ganbatte ne!
^-~
Oh sure, tell me about my cliffy when you are no better! Bad...Bad...BAD!
But still, I will let it slide since you worked so hard to get over your writers block. Ahh so proud :)
AccidentalGoddess- Mon 18 Sep 2006
| AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sesshomaru_rocks25- Mon 18 Sep 2006
| awesome!
Rae- Mon 18 Sep 2006
| I love it and I can't wait for more - please update asap
Renoumaru- Sun 17 Sep 2006
| Gah! Noooo! Finish! -Whiiiiiine.- I wanna read what happens... So close, SO CLOSE to teh SMEX!
Metis- Sat 16 Sep 2006
| I'm with you. Stupid Yasha. He'll probably give a clueless 'you're not worthy of her' or 'If you ever hurt her I'll..' blah blah blah speech. (rolls eyes). Interrupting baka!
Paris- Sat 16 Sep 2006
| You are my hero.. Seriously.. hahaha. Brilliant Chapter. Need more. Your story is like oxegyn to my body.. Must get more before I die! Dramatic? Yes--but necessary.
Seli- Fri 15 Sep 2006
| Two words simply describe that chapter.."cold shower" ...dear god Inuyasha needs to be punished severely. Oh well, insert gush about the hilariousness of this story>insert motivational insperation>insert naked Sesshoumaru> And that's my review.
Michelle- Fri 15 Sep 2006
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTY... Very nice... lol... I'm wierd...
BYE BYE
Michelle(Ur bestest fan!)
P.S. sry my review was short... lol
Licentia poetica- Fri 15 Sep 2006
I'm having fun reading the work of a fellow biologist. It's refreshing that you use the scent marking instead of the bite (that's most definitely NOT a canine behavior: cats bite!) and I enjoy your sense of humor. I also liked your use of pheromones and the accuracy of the biological data (though, as I'm sure you know, the wasps would have been a bit less direct in following the scent). I know, from my own reseach and story, that it takes time to create a fiction with the correct data underlying the story, so I appreciate all your work!
iPoe
K.M.- Fri 15 Sep 2006
| I should have known that the name of the chapter wasa clue! Great chapter as always. Please hurry with the next one I want to know what Inuyasha has to say!! :)
kat- Fri 15 Sep 2006
screw waiting for inu to be unconcious i'd just start going at it and wait til he became so embaressed he left... heck i wouldn't even wait for him to leave... naked demon lord= happy kat!!!
are you doing these cliffies to torment us? update soon and cease the torment... please?
Dana Daidouji- Fri 15 Sep 2006
| Hello there! See what I mean? I wouldn't have minded a longer chapter. I read this at the University Library while waiting for my next class... I had the notion that you had updated and so brought baby VAIO with me. It was really hard to remain from laughing as I'm in a "please be quiet" space. Please update soon!
autumngold- Fri 15 Sep 2006
| This is just the best story ever!! I love the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, and the fact that hopefully they are coming to a wonderful resolution!! Please post more soon!! I love this story!!
Yue- Fri 15 Sep 2006
| LOL. I love this chapter. It is embarrising and highly entertainning. Great job. I hope to read more soon.
Gina Bristow- Fri 15 Sep 2006
| I had to stop reading in the middle of the chapter to say... PYTHON!!! Ha! That is all.
| your right i would have to but insted of sitting inuyasha i would have miroku freeze him before the hotspring thing but i totaly agree
localsamurai- Thu 14 Sep 2006
| I love. Update soon.
wynter89- Thu 14 Sep 2006
Ok i am thinking of something different to write.
I love IT! ok so that isnt different.
I laughted to hard when Kagome told Kouga she would forgive him if ... I loved it when he got a kick in the nuts. I even loved it when Sesshomaru started to take off his clothes.... i must ask. Did you have to leave it there...
Great fic.. i love it!
Good luck
I hope you update soon
LuaHaunted- Thu 14 Sep 2006
I have one word to describe this whole story:
Intelligent!
No, better yet:
Brilliant!!!
It was so great!! I can almost say perfect.... (And I don't like to usa that word)
Honestly, I believe you must be a really intelligent person to write this story.
You managed to have it all:
I laughed, I cried, I felt antecipation, surprise, and I definitely loved it!
What impressed me the most was the plot! It started as a very good humer story (I laughed a lot), and then you went and put the best plot ever (And I mean it literally). You could have your own manga!
Tha last battle was great!
All your characters were very intelligent, and very well portrayed (Well, I actually don't believe Kagome is so smart, and so into science, but honestly, I like her better in your story - who wants a stupid heroine?)
I loved Naraku being in Kohaku's body (so creepy), and how he manipulated everyone - could have been in the manga.
Please, continue, and make me laugh more!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks for the great story with perfect plot!
Byeè!
Kat- Thu 14 Sep 2006
| i am tempted to throw something at you... however i will refrain as it might impair your ability to update... which i hope you will do soon cause that was just mean...
zephyr- Thu 14 Sep 2006
With each chapter i love this story more and more.
i can't wait for the next one...
please update soon!!!
Rinseternalsoul- Thu 14 Sep 2006
| I hate to admit it but I'm a sucker for the fluff. I find these hentai chapters so much more captivating than fighting. Big surprise, huh? I look forward to seeing just how hot Sesshomaru can make that hot-spring for Kagome! It's time to grow up Kagome! Take your man - er - demon!
| lol *giggles like a mad lunatic* the two new chapters were absolutely fantastic. update soon!
Metis- Thu 14 Sep 2006
| Ooo. What an open sentence she blurted out....Good for her. :)
Nyx- Thu 14 Sep 2006
| A CLIFFY!! NOOOO!!! "bangs head on keyboard" LOL! I hope you update soon! Keep up the good work!
karla- Thu 14 Sep 2006
| bahahahahahaha!!!!!! omg please hurry with the next chapter!!!! i am very much looking forward to see what is going to happen!!! *wink, wink*
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