Lovely story. Could you let me know when you update?
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Tai
Avid Reader of Fan Fiction- Sun 29 Oct 2006
I was also able to identify the book you based this story off of, and I have to say, I'm not too thrilled about it. When I read the first couple chapters of your story, it's basically re-reading "Once A Princess" all over again (I'm not saying I don't like the book; actually, I love it, but that's not the point here). What I'm trying to say is, you have the talent to write a great story, but that talent has been moved off-track because you're basically re-writing a story I already know. I'm sorry if my review's harsh, but I really think you should write a story that's a little more creative; I don't know about others that have read Lindsey's book, but when I read your story, it's as if I know everything that's going to happen. It draws away from your writing.
Sorry for the harsh review, but I feel like I should tell you what I thought when I read your first chapter.
Mrs.x3Mustang(NLI)- Sun 29 Oct 2006
| i loved the "Once a Princess" by Johanna! =D i was actually thinking about writing a sess/kag story based on one of her newer books... =] but this is great! please update soon and continue the good work!
orchid- Fri 06 Oct 2006
| please update update update
Rita J- Sun 30 Jul 2006
| Interesting. I wonder do you take requests?
Christina- Sat 22 Jul 2006
This is one of the best stories I have read in a while. Keep those chapters coming your public demands it! Just kidding but don't keep us waiting to long! ^ ^
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swasdiva- Thu 20 Jul 2006
| This story is so cute, Hello Kitty is going to sue. I loves it!! The banter!! The scathing wit!! It's fabulous, so do please continue!
wynter89- Thu 20 Jul 2006
never read something like that before... how come she is still ugly? is she still wearing the makeup, what will happen if she clean it off? would she look totally different.. if she does why doesnt she just whip off the make up and run away...
good luck
i hope you update soon
jade- Thu 20 Jul 2006
| lol...really funny, can u plz email me when u update
Tsuki Doriimaa- Sat 15 Jul 2006
| lol Very good! Love Kagome and Sesshomaru! ^___^ Excellent beginning hun! Please keep writing on it, I can't wait (though I know I'll have to, I guess... lol) to read more of it! Blessed be in your writings! JA!
lala- Wed 12 Jul 2006
great part post again soon
gina- Tue 11 Jul 2006
| omg!!!! awsome!!!!! i love it!!! =)
brittany- Tue 11 Jul 2006
| great story and i sentt he other email before i read the 2nd chapter! sorry! i should have read all the chapters before i wrote that email!
Kanela- Tue 11 Jul 2006
Wow, this sounds good! I'm dying to read next chapter, update soon please!
cherry- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| this story is getting very interesting. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
moonstar31548- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| Great chapter.!! You're doing a great job with this story. Reading this reminds me why I love that book by her in the first place. Update soon.
swasdiva- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| Didn't know it was based on an existing story, but I love it just the same!!! I must say, I've had my overload of cliffies tonight (just got back from the 'Pirates of the Caribbean' premiere), but this one is delicious devilry!! Please update soon!
Valire18- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| I really enjoy both your stories i read this one today and had to see what you had for the other. Its great I can't wait to see what you have next.
bluemoon_175- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| It's really good, can't wait to read more. I just have one thing to say which is UPDATE ASAP PLEASE...
jadeprincess- Thu 06 Jul 2006
| Great story, keep up the good work!
swasdiva- Thu 06 Jul 2006
| I think it's a great beginning. I liked that you gave Inuyasha some years with his father, and how you've managed all the hot men into acquaintance! ~_^ It's very engaging thus far, please continue soon!
moonstar31548- Thu 06 Jul 2006
| Great story. I'm going to take a guess and say this story is based off the book Once a Princess by Johanna Lindsey. If that is the case this should be a great story. I've read the book and it is awesome. I can see Sess and Kagome playing the title characters of that book. I hope my guess is right. Keep up the good work. Update soon.
Avari Phoeix Sebrof- Thu 06 Jul 2006
(Don't mind spelling errors!)
You absolutely have to contimue. I wanna know how she's been trained to be a princess in a tavern and plus this is really creative and is coming along great. So please please please continue it?!!!!!!!
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