| Why don't you ever update
Something-or-other- Mon 03 Jul 2006
| Wow. What a great story. There was only one thing that I didn't enjoy. THE DANG CLIFFIE! Come on now, you just can't do that! Well, you can, but... Yeah, it was a great first chapter, please get the next one up soon.
Silveromance- Sun 02 Jul 2006
| fabulas, i love it ,keep it coming
feathergriffin- Sun 02 Jul 2006
| Gack! You're mean! Such a great build up and wham! No more! Sniff. This has a great beginning! I can barely wait to find out what happens next!
Philomina- Sun 02 Jul 2006
| WOw, what was evil, how can you cut us poor readers off like that??? Your story is very good, quite original. So please update soon^_^
Yukino- Sun 02 Jul 2006
It's a good fic but it could get better if you have an exceptional beta reader for this. I noticed that you are still confusing your 'their' and 'there'. What you could do is to read your fic again before posting it so that you'll get to see the spellings or grammars that you might have missed.
Ja ne.
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