Ayame S.- Mon 19 May 2008
OMG you so have to finish this story it is so awesome I love it so much.

*Pagan~Youkai*- Fri 09 Nov 2007
Also, one of the groups could do "My Paper Heart" by All- American Rejects

~*Pagan~Youkai*~- Fri 09 Nov 2007
You know, you should todaly do "Alive'n Out of control" by Papa Roach as a song that Sesshoumaru could sing. That would be Awsome!!!!!!! ^_^

mizu- Wed 26 Sep 2007
DID U DIE OR SOMETHING???? WHERE ARE YOU???? HAVE YOU GIVEN UP ON THIS STORY???? HELLOOOOOO?

LOL, just hurry and update, oh and check out my Harry potter story on media miner it is, at http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/142874/ it is good, even though i do not like the first three chapters. My friend Sondra wrote them, and I have been writing most of it as of late. So check it out if you can, and update soon. Oh and if you are dead I command you come back to life immediately. LOL

Mizu

Kagome-Chan- Sun 23 Sep 2007
That Was a Gr8 Chapter!!!! PLEASE Updage Soon!!

Love,

Kagome-Chan ♪

keiki- Mon 27 Aug 2007
Wow i loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.

PunkrockerX- Thu 23 Aug 2007
lolz!! The little kid Zack was funny....Kapome!!! *laughs hysterically* Their date was soo cute!! Awww....although while I was reading I kept thinking about Zeppoli's....damn I want some! lolz! Update really soon!!

Toodles!!

Much Love, PunkrockerX

Hime17- Sun 19 Aug 2007
This stories great plz continue,Love the characters.♥ ~_^

Hime17- Sun 19 Aug 2007
This stories great plz continue,Love the characters.♥ ~_^

sakura- Mon 13 Aug 2007
YAAYY!!!!!! Finally a new chapter! I want to know how many times Sango can slap Miroku during one Date!

I really like this story.

Nya- Mon 13 Aug 2007
Woohoo you finally updated! So glad you're back can't wait to read the next chap, luv'd it keep it up.

Mizu- Mon 13 Aug 2007
Oh when i was looking through your reviews i noticed that i had made some wrong couple errors in mine, lol once i reread it i was like. "Well don't i feel dumb." In my defense, It is late, and i haven't read the story in a while, which i am going to do. lol so let me see, how about after Inuyasha and Zerlina, Sango and Miroku have a date chapter. you do one with Eve and Riku and Takara and Bankostu in one chapter. then you can do me and Shinzo, with haru and shadow. than Aki and Muso, with Ayame and Kouga. lol like random date chapter, they do not have to follow each other. but it is an idea lol Though i do not want to sound selfish, but i would like to see me and Shinzo together soon or at least a little fluff. lol so yeah forgive me for that. lol can you tell i am really bored tonight. .You are the only good fanfic that has been updated, so i am a tad bit bored, but hey rereading your story is fine by me. lol hope to read more from you soon.

Your most faithful Reviwer, Beta reader, and biggest fan,

~Mizu Setsuna~
*AKA Brittany*

sessysbaby666- Mon 13 Aug 2007
don't take this the worng way but i love u.

Mizu- Mon 13 Aug 2007
Hey just so you know it has been a while but remember that i am your beta reader. lol just thought i'd remind ya.

Mizu Setsuna
AKA Brittany

Mizu- Mon 13 Aug 2007
YAAAAAY! You finally updated. lol Kagome got dizzy on the carnival rides, lol i do that too. I am glad you are not dead lol, we all missed you of course. I hope you like your new computer. New computer's are nice I just got a laptop. So yeah I loved their date, that little kid was toooo cute. so yeah i enjoyed this chapter a helluva lot. it was one of the best one's yet. Now the next chapter should be fun, Inuyasha on a date. I hope he does not blow it or make a fool of himself, or do it? Hmmm? jk. So anyway hope you update soon, and i wanna read about Riku and Eve getting together on a date as well. lol the tension between them is high. It is kinda nice to read though. Oh and i hope that we meet haru's fiancee soon. lol it'll be nice. So yeah. I also hope that Shinzo and I get together as well, along with shadow and Bankotsu too, lol and just everyone else. Hope to read another update sooner than this last on took. lol I'm jk. enjoy your new computer and update soon. Have a good day, or night depending on when you read it.

~Mizu Setsuna~
*AKA Brittany*

the westren land heiress lady Ky- Tue 31 Jul 2007
Hey I don't know if you want to use it but I thought the song broken by seether ft.Amy lee would be a great song for Kagome and Sesshomaru to sing together it's your choice, good fic though very funny. here are the lyrics for
"Broken (feat. Amy Lee)"

I wanted you to know I love the way you laugh
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain away
I keep your photograph and I know it serves me well
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain

'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away

You've gone away, you don't feel me, anymore

The worst is over now and we can breathe again
I wanna hold you high, you steal my pain away
There's so much left to learn, and no one left to fight
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain

[x2]
'Cause I'm broken when I'm open
And I don't feel like I am strong enough
'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away

'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away

You've gone away
You don't feel me here anymore

Mizu- Mon 30 Jul 2007
lol, well i guess i can forgive you, cuz i know how it happens, and thus how you feel. it is not your fault just make it extra good okay!!!!!! Lol i cannot wait to read sess and kag's first date. lol yay. hope to read more soon.

mizu

Kagome-Chan- Sun 29 Jul 2007
AMG!!!! SHE LIIIIIIVVVVEEEEESSSS!!!!!!!! lol I Thought U Had Gone and Died or Something!! lol I'm So0o0 Glad Your Back! I Look 4ward 2 the Next Chapter. And If U Need a Beta, Call On Me Any Time!!!! ^_^

Ciao Darling!!

Kagome-Chan ♥

Mizu- Tue 24 Jul 2007
hey, r u still interested in this story at all, or are u like me and end up giving up for a bit, i really want to read the date and that would make me and all your other readers happy so please update soon, or at least give us an authors not saying you are taking a break plz. thanx. Mizu

Jasmine- Sat 09 Jun 2007
Please write more it's inresting.It's cool story

Betterthankikyo466- Mon 04 Jun 2007
hey update NOW . . . I didn't mean it please update

blacketernal- Mon 28 May 2007
I WANT TO SEE SOMEONE SING Numb by Linkin Park or Pain by Three Days Grace!!!!! I can't wait to see who will sing what next!!!

peach-chan- Tue 22 May 2007
come oon finish already, i can'it wait any longer

subtle sarcasm- Tue 08 May 2007
You are doing a great job herding all these characters around. The plot's still flowing despite everybody crushing on each other and playing shows. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hopefully it'll include a bit of "suck face" between Sess and Kagome???

PunkrockerX- Thu 03 May 2007
wow.... what a bunch of rowdy animals!!! Now that i see what they do on their down time, i'm scared to see what will happen if they all go on vacation together.......lolz! Update soon please!!!

SarahhhBoo- Fri 20 Apr 2007
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG....OMG!!!! lol i FREAKIN' LOVE THIS story!!!!!!!! its really good! cnat wait for the next chappie

Never-Here-4-Me- Sun 15 Apr 2007
Please hurrry and post the next chapter!!! Can't wait till then!!

Kira- Sat 14 Apr 2007
I LOVE your story so far! You HAVE TO update soon! It's just to funny!

Snow White Queen- Fri 13 Apr 2007
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! Where did you learn to write so good....all my longie fanfictions end up drappy...I never have any more good plots....Love the story!!

Iro-chan

sesshous_girl- Fri 13 Apr 2007
hey this story rocks, lol. Can't wait for another chapter.

Duchesscarml- Fri 13 Apr 2007
OH this is adorable!! Theres a few typos and grammar mistakes, but who doesn't have those! lol It's carefree and funny! I'm skeptical of Kikyou.. And I LOVE your OC Eve! Great job!

swtdrm01- Fri 13 Apr 2007
I can't wait for the next chapter. This one was hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing. Great job.

Twilight Garden- Thu 12 Apr 2007
I really enjoyed this chapter and the last one though I didn't review it. I like how Sesshoumaru and Kagome are finally having that date and the fluff was great. I like that my character Zerlina gets a kiss from Inuyasha. I hope that Kikyou dies a fiery death if she tries anything. Update soon

LunarGaze- Thu 12 Apr 2007
Great fic! I really like it. Update soon!

DarkAngel495- Thu 12 Apr 2007

PleaSe UpdaTe!!! I waNt tO KnoW

WhAt iS goIng TO HAppEn to The

DaTe, !!!!!!!!!!!!!! ThAnK YOu !!!!!!!!!!!

^^

angel_of_darkness- Thu 12 Apr 2007
hey i emailed you awhile back about the fanfic its still great by the way but you never got back to me about being in it i would love it if you did im not being pushing or anything just coruios k?if you did put me in it could my name be niko? please get back to me as soon as possible k? oh and when you e-mail me put as the subject "you rock my world" ill recognize it better k? thanks bye

Kagome-Chan- Wed 11 Apr 2007
AMG Im IN LOVE WITH YOUR FIC!!!! I LOVE all the couples, and the songs are like classic!! I luv every 1 of them! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!! ^^ Thanks!!

-Kagome-Chan

Never-Here-4-Me- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Please,Please,Please update soon! I love the story so far!

DarkAngel495- Wed 28 Mar 2007
UpdaTe pLeAse!!!!! ThanK YoU!!!!!!

swtdrm01- Tue 27 Mar 2007
Thank you for updating. That was funny. Great job. I hope to see the next chapter soon.

Shyla Marie Tobiassen- Mon 19 Mar 2007
Hi I LOVE YOUR story but I was wondering if you could possibly in the next chapter put the songs
Missing or Everybody's Fool by Evanescence? Just wondering.

T- Sat 03 Mar 2007
I'm beginning to get the idea that you're completely insane.

Aubrie- Fri 23 Feb 2007
What were the songs used in Concert Day Part 2? I know the one from Evanescence, but that's it.

Aubrie- Fri 23 Feb 2007
I don't know, Chapter 5 was cute. I had to wait a while before my laughing subsided enough to review for you. Excellent! You have talent.

Saeko- Sun 07 Jan 2007
Interesting idea. You keep spelling guitar wrong, and if by Ayamae you mean the fox demon in love with Kouga in the anime, which its pretty obvious you mean her, its Ayame. There were other things that bugged me about this fic, but I'm too tired to remember them, so I'll tell you some other time.

KagomeHime- Mon 01 Jan 2007
post ur fanfics on fanfiction.net so that readers may know when there is an update

sesshomaru_lover- Wed 27 Dec 2006
srry about not rating sooner but i wait till the last chapter that the peson wrote to rate and review.
anyway i loved it sooo much (not wanting to be pushey) but i would love you forever if you put me in the storie ^_^ im 5,5 waist long black hair ice like blue eyes (once again not wanting to be pushey!) hope you finish it soon!!!! if you dont *glares eviley* just kidding but hope you finish it!!!!!!

Lady Of 09- Sat 23 Dec 2006
Great Chappie Cant See Wut Happens Next!

Never-Here-4-Me- Sat 23 Dec 2006
Love the story so far! Please try and update as soon as you can!!!

Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

Brandie- Sat 02 Dec 2006
I read the newest chapter and can't wait to read the next

Iris_Sesshomarusmate- Fri 01 Dec 2006
*lick* i love this story,and i am 'odd' as well,but i'm not all that friendly.well i say i'm not but my friends say i am.oh um i hope yea don't mind but i knda used the beganing of this story to start mine out,its called Dating Modles,its on my fanfic site thingy on here,so if you wanna see if its ok for me to use that part just click my name and look at Dating Modles on my site,k?? good. ^-^ hope to see another chapter soon.
*lick*
Iris

Ren Taisho- Tue 28 Nov 2006
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII LLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT (- I LOVE IT)

Little Sheriff- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Ok, so I didn't see anything about youy having a girl for Musuo, and so I figured I would submit one. If you have one, sorry for not looking hard enough, if you don't, your welcome to use this one, and even if you don't want her for something like that, you can use for anything, including dead bodies if need be. I'm not really picky. Ok, here goes(I'm making it up as I go):
Name: Liana Rays (likes to go by "Li")
Age: 21 (just legal)
Height: 5'8" and a half
Appearance
Hair color: Black w/ dark blue highlights
Hair length: Mid-back
Eye color: Dark blue with silver specks
Build: lean, pretty athletic
Skin: White, no freckles
History
Ummm, her parents are dead, and all she has is a way over protective big brother who doesn't like to leave her alone. Part of what she's doing right now is getting away from him so she can have some alone time. Parents were murdered when her brother was 19, leaving him to take care of her, since she was about 11 at the time. Has extensive martial arts and wepon training. She's taking a year break from collage right now.
Personality
She's kinda shy in the way that she doesn't like to talk to people. Very quiet, but still an over all happy person. She has a short temper though, and it always seems to surprise people. She stays quiet as long as possible, then ends up exploding at whoever is angering her. Fidgets a lot, whether that fidgeting includes excersing, training, or just fidgeting with something on herself depends on the mood. Like to play with hair, but not in an obcessing "Yura of the Hair" way, more like, "I'm bored, and I'm gonna put multiple small braids in your hair" type of way. Always wears a small silver cross on a silver chain that her brother gave her for her highschool graduation gift. It used to be her mothers. Loves to sing, read, and write. She's very loyal to those she considers her friends, and sems to be very responsible.

Ok, so there's my character. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me. And just so you know for future reference, gitar is not a word hun, it's guitar. I'm not trying to be mean (I seem to end up sounding that way), I just do so much editing of my own stories (months after I write them of course) that it's kinda habit to edit as I read. So, please don't take it wrong. Anywho, hope you update soon.

magnolia- Sat 25 Nov 2006
I love the story, but I feel like you're trying to make the chapters seem longer by adding lyrics. Personally, I rather that the song lyrics were a minimum, unless they have a part to play in the chapter--like the song that Kags sung and Sess was trying to figure out who wrote it.

Can't wait for the next chapter, and good luck writing:)))

PunkrockerX- Sat 25 Nov 2006
haha!! finally some romance!! yay!! oh and you don't have to worry about your candy....i have my own now....*clutches large bag of jolly ranchers* great chapter (or two since i just read both right now :)) well please update soon!!!

Much Love, PunkrockerX

kagsesskyo- Sat 25 Nov 2006
I love this chapter!!!!! I can't wait for you to update the next chpater!!!!!! That one is going to have Kagome and Sesshomaru in it!!!! Yay!!!

demon13o- Sat 25 Nov 2006
cute chapter okay hurry and type more i'm off to write myself a new fic or update an old one lol

BlackFangedInu- Sat 25 Nov 2006
You rock! the title Rocks! The story Rocks!! Everything So Far ROCKS!!!!!! I luv U! Linkin Park's "crawling" song would be fantastic for Sesshy-kun to sing or any other LP song!! Make more very soooon!! Ican't wait for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fae_Eyes1229- Thu 23 Nov 2006
Review ch7:
Awwww Sesshoumaru-sama is intrigued! It's how it always starts Buwhahahaha...
Dragons! Yus! no! Now I want to stay up more! Why must you torture me so?!
Lol good luck and keep up the excellent work

Fae_Eyes1229- Thu 23 Nov 2006
Goodness would youstop with the cliffies!
I must read on... but I can... But I must... but I can't... Grrr why did you have to make it so darn good and addicting?!
:-p
Lol well.... maybe one more... just one more for tonight.... ha, I'll prall be dreaming about what happens next though
Keep up the fatastic work and good luck

Fae_Eyes1229- Thu 23 Nov 2006
Hahaha! Mobs of fans thats soo funny! Gah! look what you have done, your story is tooooo good! I can't just leave it >. But I have to make the dinner tomarrow... Hmmm Awesome Fanfic vs turkey.... well one more chapter couldn't hurt eh?
^_^v Good luck and have fun! Happy Thanksgiving!

Fae_Eyes1229- Thu 23 Nov 2006
Review ch4:
Gah! Cliffy! ^_^ Awesome Chappie! Hehe totaly funny!
Good luck and keep up the fantastic work!

Fae_Eyes1229- Thu 23 Nov 2006
Review ch3:
It did sooooo not suck!
It was hilarious!!
^_^ kehe ice age.. that was a good one I have to admit.
^_^ good luck!
Keep up the great work!

Fae_Eyes1229- Thu 23 Nov 2006
Review for ch2:
Hahaha Niiiice Sesshoumaru looks like a chick *snickers*
Oo yea and I realised a second too late on my last review... I spelt Ayamae waaaay wrong >. Sorry for that. No clue where it came from.
Anywhoo awesome chapter even better than the last! ^_^ It makes laugh! Buwhahahahahaha
hehe keep up the awesome work and good luck

Fae_Eyes1229- Thu 23 Nov 2006
Review for ch1:
LMAO!!
It seems I'm not the only one who makes Aayme into a sex pedo
^_^ I love this story so far, it's just the first chapter.
Soooo I figured, I would comment on every chapter that I love. Which by the looks of it is going to be every chapter. ^_^ Hope you don't get too annoyed of me by the time I'm done.
Well Good luck and keep up the great work!

brit- Sat 18 Nov 2006
PWEASE make me a list of all the songs you used in this fanfic. I love them!! Keep writing, I hang on your every word!! Keep it comin' with the Kag/Sess!!!

mszbrownangel- Sat 18 Nov 2006
hello again....
i really like the storyyy
please be quick about updating
will just get to the Sesshomaru and Kagome stuff alreadyy... we already know that Rin and Shippou are okay with her...
soo please please hurry uppp and update LOL i know you updated yesturday soooo can u doo it again=) or do i ask to much=) ne wayz im gone bye bye GREAT STORY

demon13o- Fri 17 Nov 2006
OO > Q Q how could u!!!

Twilight Garden- Fri 17 Nov 2006
Loved that you updated so very happy that you and I can't wait until you do so again.

kagsesskyo- Fri 17 Nov 2006
It's okay! I can wait for you to update the next chapter! That's how much I love your fanfic!!! I'm willing to wait for you to update the next chapter!!! And when you update the next chapter, I'm looking forward to reading about Kagy and Sessy romance!!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD

mszbrownangel- Tue 14 Nov 2006
heyyy i really like this storyyyy!!!
Damn it!! I wanna be paired up with one of them.... *goes in corner in cries* LOL ne ways please updateee.... can i gettt some milk n cookiesss=)

kagsesskyo- Wed 01 Nov 2006
I love your fanfic!!! It's soooo funny I can't wait for you to update the next chapter! ^-^

Maru-kunkun- Thu 26 Oct 2006
woot, that was really awesome XD !! i laughed soo much !! XD update sooooon !!
Ja-ne.
Bye-byez.

Serene Aurora- Sun 22 Oct 2006
That was a funny chapter! Keep on writing!

Twilight Garden- Mon 09 Oct 2006
LIked the revisons update soon.

Yuki Asao- Mon 09 Oct 2006
GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT PHENOMENAL STORY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

cherry- Sun 08 Oct 2006
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT ! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!!!! UPDATE SOON!

Yuki Asao- Sun 08 Oct 2006
This is a GREAT idea!!! Except Ayame's name doesn't end with ae, it ends with e. Ayame.

Kanela- Sun 08 Oct 2006
Hey!! I love it!! Can't wait for the Sess/Kag stuff, just can't!!
I love how your story is going on...update soon!!

-Kanz

Iris_Sesshomarusmate- Thu 31 Aug 2006
i love eve and riku there so cute together^.^please update i love this story it kiss naraku ass,trust me thats a lotta ass^.^,so update 'caz i love this story and the people in it^.^

Shadow- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Dude so totelly awesome!!! I'm finally in a story!!! I've wanted to do one of those self-insert things so long but I didn't think anyone would like me if I wrote it (Isuck at writing). I have cat ears!!!!!! you rock!!!!! I'm using a lot of exclimation(sp?) points.....right thank you so much for pairing me with Haru!!!! again totel awesomeness! ^_^
Ja Ne!!!!!

PunkrockerX- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Hahaha!! Silly string and feathers!!! *snickers* That chapter was defenitely funny as hell! And you say something's going to happen to Kagome? NOOO! IT better be good or ima hunt you down and steal all of sugary candy and treats!!!

Toodles!!

Much Love, PunkrockerX

sesshsmate101- Fri 04 Aug 2006
hey guess what? you didn't say wich ones you were going to update so ya know what? update em all! lol jk but really I hope you update this one and Untitled, cuz they both rock! I love 'em both!

Trapped_Butterfly- Fri 04 Aug 2006
this is a great story and its hallarious!!!!!!!!

demon13o- Thu 03 Aug 2006
another awesome 3 chapters!! oh and to answer what u said in chapter 13 ^^ i am kind of funny, i like to act out and try to remain hidden, my friends say i act like a little puppy when it comes to people and that i'm pure evil when it comes to tricks and evil deeds lol i actually believe them

I was watching an anime called host club and i act like the three evil characters lol. I almosted did another evil deed today but forgot it was orientation for school so i had to hold off the evilness lol hurry and update soon! i hope to read more soon!!!11oneone
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my kitty friend says hi lol

Eternal Serenity ~ Raging Maden- Thu 03 Aug 2006
this is an awsome fic. PLZ UPDATE ASAP.

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Thu 03 Aug 2006
so happy so very happy that you updated. this was a fun chapter. i really liked it alot. Update soon

McSpiff_The_Chikin- Sat 29 Jul 2006
Dude, your story like rocks outloud! I've been checking every day to see if you've updated, and before anyone thinks it, I am not a stalker! I've just had alot of time on my hands since school ended for the summer, so yeah. But anyway, keep up the good work!

Oh yeah, and I saw in chapter 15 that you needed someone for either Maru or Musou, and if you haven't found anyone, I'd be happy to pair up with either one. ^.^

Name: Harmony Kanaye
Age: 22
Hair Color: Onyx Black
Eye Color: Dark Blue, sorta like the ocean.
Body Type: Athletic
Personality: Very outgoing, kind to everyone, and I get to know people before I judge them. I try and get along with everyone, and I make alot of friends that way. Not to mention, I'm a large animal lover, and I have a pet Siberian Huskey that goes everywhere with me named Sephiroth, if you wanted to add him.

He's really, really friendly and loves kids and is kind towards all my female friends. He doesn't hate males, but dislikes them with a passion. Except a few that are like really nice to him...like boyfriends of whatever. He kinda knows if someone's trying to hurt me, and can tell the difference between hugs and punches. ^.^ He's a smart pooch.

Seriously, I do have a Husky named Sephy that does that, I just thought it might make my character more complete. ^.^ Whatever works for you.

I hope you update soon!

-Harmony

Kuma- Thu 27 Jul 2006
decent decent i liked it....it wasn't a full ten i give it a 9.8 cuz sesshy was sleeping

rhonda34- Thu 27 Jul 2006
please keep updating this story

angel wolf- Thu 27 Jul 2006
Very nice! Love the story keep going.

gothic_xXx_moon- Thu 27 Jul 2006
hey i hope you dont mind im sort of a gothic type buti do believe in god and i keep my self open for other types of religion and im quiet and sort of like sesshomaru but ill be with who ever ok and for your grampa to get well soon and my best wished to him and you

sesshsmate101- Thu 27 Jul 2006
I have to say Shizo is my favorite!! ha ha he acts just like me...lol

sesshsmate101- Thu 27 Jul 2006
YAY! I loved Riku and Eve's song!!

sesshsmate101- Thu 27 Jul 2006
YAY! that was awesome! And thanks for the thanks in th beginning.. i think that sounds right... naywyas loved lal the songs, specially saving me

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Thu 27 Jul 2006
I am so that I am in the story. The last chappie was just hiliarious. I loved it and the last chapter as well. If you need help with revising let me know and i will help to the best of my ability. This story just kicks ass.

Midnight Walker- Thu 27 Jul 2006
don't you just love filler chapters??? lolz. Yes, even though it was boring, it was informative. Hey; when are Sesshomaru and Kagome gonna show some signs of romantic intrest????

Toodles!!

Much Love, Midnight Walker

sesshou's gurl- Wed 26 Jul 2006
I like it. Up date really soon.

DarkMagic1018 (Sam)- Wed 26 Jul 2006
Hello! ^^ I just wanted to say that I love your story so far, and was really surprised (and happy) to see that I like every song that the bands played. Also I would just like to note that if you ever need help with spelling/grammar/editing just let me know and I'd be happy to. Hope to see more writing from you.
-Sam

gothic_xXx_moon- Wed 26 Jul 2006
thanks for the cookie and if need be take your time on the spellings

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
i just found ou tsome bad news m ygrandpa is in the hospital right now and i may not be able to read any fanfics while i go visit him, he os going through surgery right now my mom just called me on my cell. she knew i'd be up since i had to close the resturant tonight at work. On my honor i swear he is in the hospital so if you could pray for him if you are not into that its ok, i just hope that he gets better that is all. Um so if you update or email me and i don't replay that will be why. Well i shall talk to you later, oh and i for got to tell you that i am the very Mizu who appeared in The Player's Club. You can even ask the autour that i am the very one, but i kinda would like a change from Inuyasha so either Haru or Shinzo would work best, well i am rambling now that i am sad and tired so i am going to bed, Good night, or should i say good morning, or good afternoon, or good evening, (referring to whenever you read this review.) i have rated all of your chapters so fate even the author notes, those do count towards your story, and high numbers never hurt anyone. So please pray for my grandfather if you want to and if not well then its okay i will NOT hold it against you. Thank you for spending all of this time reading all of my reviews. I really do appreicitate it. Thanks again.

Mizu Setsuna

P.S. You have earned the full Pen Name signature which only my bestfriend gets to know that it is real me. So enjoy update soon and notify me on the beta testing i can still do it, and it may help me to get my grandfather's pain off my mind a little since i am a state away from him, but only temporarily of course. I will talk to you later then, Bye Bye

Mizu Setsuna

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
hey there, here is my discription if you want to add me


Name: Mizu

Hair color: Dark Blue

Eye Color: Silver

Skin Color: Very Fair Skinned

Height: 5'5"

Hobbies: Singing, dancing, playing the drums, reading books and taking relaxing walks when upset.

Attitude: Generally a nice person, loyal, kind, friendly towards new people, open to new ideas, but stubborn at time, carefree very loose, not too uptight, but can be if the time calls for it, and is an all around good person

Species: Whatever you want but i would prefer to be a Kitsune youkai, or a Ryuu youkai. (I think that means dragon, but i want to be a dragon just incase i am using the wrong word.)


Just so you know Inu or Shinzo is good, but i would like SHinzo the best, and i have reviewed every chapter, and i will be your beta reader in return for this honroable position. SO please pllase plase give me a chance and let me bne with SHinzo.

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
hey if you need a Beta reader i can do it for you. other than typing on AIM, and emails and reviews i am a a straight A student when it comes to english. so if you need any help let me know. I am here to help you in any way that i can. Have a nice day, and update soon, oh and don't forget i would really love to be paired up with SHinzo, give me an email if you want to add me so incase you need any help i can halp you, but only if you need and want my help.

Mizu

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
I did like kikyo'd band's songs and poor Shinzo got bonked on the head. lol poor guys he's crazy (In a good way) and funny and kool all at the same time. The perfect kinda guy, for me at least. I am amazed at teh kind of characters you came up with. i usuaslly don't approve of O.C.'s becuase they are usually under done and not very interesting and only there to be paired up with a main character, BUT yours are done excellents with well thought out backgrounds, interesting personalliities, and are all around likable people. I am very happy to say that these are my favorite O.C's in ANY of the Alternate Universe stories. I do have to say that Anubis is my favorite O.C. but then again he is an Egytption god portrayed into a Japanese Anime. WHich rocks, but then again dragons' totally kick ass too. SO if you can pair me up with Shinzo then please do. Thanks for reading this. I really appreciate it.

Mizu

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
hey there. i will gladly be paired up with either Shinzo or Inuyasha, i reallly do love your story and i really would love to be a part of it. I'd like to be pariede up with Shinzo more than Inuyasha, but with one works, Haru is okay too, but no tmuso, the banging his head on the limo was kinda wierd and plus he is in Kikyo's band, even though i have nothing against him, i don't really want to be paired up with someone that works with Kikyo the bitch tried to kill kagaome. Well please let me know if i can be paired up with SHinzo i really like the way he acts and he sounds really nice, he's a kool character and i really would like it if i could be with him. THough if someone was quicker and has already taken it then no hard feeelings.

Thank you for at least considering

Mizu

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
lol. "The Pickles are Coming!! The Pickles are Coming!!" Lmao that was hilarious. : D Keep up the hilarious and great work.

Mizu

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
that chapter was...lol... completely....lol...and totally...lol... truth or dare hilarious. I can't believe Ayamea had to ask Kouga out, and that Kagome had to kiss inuyasha. that was good. keep on doing a wonderful job Entity of Sorrows.

Mizu

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
ohh a 'fun' and 'harmless' game ot 'truth or dare' rock on. and the boys had left the room like 'cowards' as you put it. that was good i can't wait to see what you make all of the girls do and tell. Keep up the excellent work.

Mizu

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
wow the boys are dragons, rock on. that is soooo kool. i hope that kikyo gets what is comeing to her for torturing Kagome. I am guessing you are a Kikyo-hater by the way you are depicting her.

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
i wonder, are yo ua kikyo hater, or did you just need some one to hate? Oh well i am both kinda surprised she already tried to killl Kagome, and somewhat not surprised, she does seeem to be quite the evil bitch in this by her first appearance. oh well keep up the good work.

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
awwwww. those two are soooo kawaii. i hope that sesshomaru doesn't ground them too bad. he is so nice around them. i loved this chapter keep up the good work.

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
hey rock on this chapter was good. lol sesshoumaru gets to be a daddy in front of everyone i hope he doesn't send them all home. I wonder if he is both rin and shippo's dad or just rin's oh well i can't wait for the next installment. your story just gets better and better.

Mizu

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
those O.C.'s for the DC band sound kool. Mare Riku Haru and Shinzo are all really kool names. I think it is kool how you added a past relationship with eve and the others keep up the good work. i can't wait to read the next chapter.

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
lol funny chapter poor ayamae thinking sesshoumaru was a girl. that was good. i love the O.C.'s eve rocks. lol keep up the good work.

Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
hey there i really like the beginning to this story. I just got home from work so i decided to read some fanifics before inuyasha started again @ 4:00. THis is coming along great. I wonder who the other bands are.

angel wolf- Tue 25 Jul 2006
Hey, I would be super happy to be paired with either one! I don't really care which! Nor do I know how it would work, I'm having a moment! Oh well here's the description.
Name:Kara
Demon Type: Fire demon
Hair: Dark Brown, goes to shoulder's
Eyes: Blue
Personality:Calm, but has a fire and won't take crap.She's also rather charming and smart.
Anyway I'd be willing to make changes if you would like to have me be paired! Thanks!

demon13o- Tue 25 Jul 2006
aww how sad okay i'll wait *jumps the cookie and eats it all in one bite* COOKIE!! *jumps the cookie man next thinking he's a cookie and eats him* COOKIE!! ^^

SunsetAngel- Tue 25 Jul 2006
Gaaaahhh!!!!! I love it!!! More, onegai? :3

Kuma- Mon 24 Jul 2006
i loved the songs...great chappy...lol thanks for clearing of that definition 4 me...update soon

Debra_loves_sesshomaru- Mon 24 Jul 2006
OMG LOVE IT> MUST UPDATE MORE DAMIT MORE

Fluffy's girl- Mon 24 Jul 2006
yet another cool chapter, and i think the song that Eve and Riku sang together was sweet. anyway pleeaaase update soon again!!

rhonda24- Mon 24 Jul 2006
awsome story keep it up

demon13o- Mon 24 Jul 2006
i like shinzo he's funny and dragons r so awesome hey can i have a cookie ^^ oh yeah i forgot y i was writing another review........ oh yeah great chapter!! ^^ i wonder who'll be paired with those three in the end..... *looks around and spots no one then runs up and places a note on the authoress's desk requesting self as a nominee then runs away quietly* uh... *sits back down looking innocent* uh yeah um nice chapter and i can't wait to read chapter 13 i wanna no who the winner is ^^ *gives a thumbs up* '3

Midnight Walker- Mon 24 Jul 2006
Sweet songs...lolz. What do you mean calling for people to pair up with inu and the others??? Do you mean...like make up a character?? please update soon!!

Toodles!!

Much Love, PunkrockerX

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Mon 24 Jul 2006
what an awesome chappie i just loved it. keep up the good work and update soon

Shadow- Sun 23 Jul 2006
Dude I love this story and I would love to be paired up with Shinzo or Haru
Here's a description: name:Shadow hair: waist length black with purple and silver streaks clothing style: punk/goth personality: caring, nice, a bit overprotective towards my friends, cusses a lot, sarcastic, twisted sense of humor, can be cold and cruel to my enemies age:19
and if it's possible I would like to be a neko-hanyou (cat-half demon)
again wonderful story and I hope you'll update soon!! Ja Ne!! ^_^

Kanela- Sun 23 Jul 2006
Oh I like it sooo much! I hope the Kags/Sess part is coming along, pretty please? *puppy eyes*
Hugs!

-Kanz

Debra_loves_sesshomaru- Sun 23 Jul 2006
OMG I LOVE IT. If that ain't enough encoruagement I don't know hwat is. But you just gotta update reall long and hard on this one.

Chiera- Sun 23 Jul 2006
Oh wow. I love you now. Sesshoumaru AND Savin' me? Awwwwwwwwwwwh! 333


rhonda34- Sun 23 Jul 2006
please update very soon . i love this story i want to read more

CrimsonTears- Sun 23 Jul 2006
Did you know that a plane going to Honolulu from Tokyo takes only 8 hours? Just to let ya know!! ^_^

demon13o- Sun 23 Jul 2006
okay!

midnight_darkness7- Sat 22 Jul 2006
I love this story it rocks. I also live the songs that u put which each band.

demon13o- Sat 22 Jul 2006
awesome chapter ^^ can't wait for part 2 hope it's soon maybe u can use the song badboy by Cascada ^^ it's a good song i think u'll like it to can't wait for the next chapter yay!!

Fluffy's girl- Sat 22 Jul 2006
awsome chapter, and i just love shinzo, he seems so cute. oh, and, does musou start to hang out with the other bands instead of with kikyo and naraku? because it seems that way. anyway pleeaase update soon again, it's highly appreciated.

alissa- Sat 22 Jul 2006
i loved it so please write more!!

Gothic Lust- Sat 22 Jul 2006
i love it. update soon.

Kuma- Sat 22 Jul 2006
i loved it....good choice of songs...but what does epitome mean? for all the stupid ppl i mean *blush*

PunkrockerX- Sat 22 Jul 2006
NOOO!! Must have more!!! More, More, MORE!!! *pouts* pretty please? If you update fast as hell i'll send you a cyber cookie!!!

Toodles!!

Much Love, PunkrockerX

Fluffy's girl- Sat 22 Jul 2006
I am sooooo sorry that i haven't reviewed, i haven't been on the internet for a few days. but anyway i still LOVE your fanfic!!! and i have to say that Eve and Riku are THE CUTEST couple EVER!! honestly they're adorible. ok now pleeaase update soon (pretty please, with sugar on top?... maybe) ; p

demon13o- Thu 20 Jul 2006
sorry for not sending a review for the last two chapters i was away at a friends and got back last night so i've read them and they were awesome!! keep up the good work k!! ja ne >^-

mamgadreams- Thu 20 Jul 2006
last two chappie were great!!!

sesshsmate101- Wed 19 Jul 2006
LMAO!! That chapter was fricken FUNNY! Ha Ha it was hilarious! and Riku kssing her back... sigh so kawaii

sesshomaru_lover13- Wed 19 Jul 2006
hey plz update soon.

Tanya131- Wed 19 Jul 2006
keep up the great work. please oh please write more chs

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Wed 19 Jul 2006
This was very funny. It made me laugh and I got funny looks from the voices in my head. Update soon

sesshomaru_lover13- Tue 18 Jul 2006
i'll send an e-mail.

sesshsmate101- Mon 17 Jul 2006
eww... images!! my plaything made love with the bitch!! EWWW.. lol anywauys hope u update soon

sesshsmate101- Mon 17 Jul 2006
GRRR!!! BITCH MUST DIE! MUST KILL KINKY-HOE!! GRRRRRR.... okay now, i'm glad the guys are dragon's i haven't read a lot of stories with dragons in it...

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Mon 17 Jul 2006
This story rocks. I just love it. Update soon

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Mon 17 Jul 2006
Oooh that was so wrong to leave it like that. Good chappie. It was really good.

Techno- Mon 17 Jul 2006
I hate you!! put me on a cliffy like that!! I CAN'T STAND THAT!! It was a great chapter...it made me laugh

Peace out

Techno- Mon 17 Jul 2006
I hate you!! put me on a cliffy like that!! I CAN'T STAND THAT!! It was a great chapter...it made me laugh

Peace out

katara- Sun 16 Jul 2006
i like this story a lot. can you write more please?

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Sat 15 Jul 2006
This was very good. I hope that you update soon

Fluffy's girl- Sat 15 Jul 2006
cool chappie and YAY , kikyo's a bad girl (i don't like her anyway, so i'm happy). ok i have some questions, does kagome know who Eve is/what she really looks like? and is naraku bad in this fic, or is it just kikyo? just one more question i promise, does kagome get along with shippo and rin when she meets them? anyway awesome fic, pleeeaaase update soon!!

demon13o- Fri 14 Jul 2006
awesome chapter!!!

mangadreams- Fri 14 Jul 2006
luv your story really enjoyed the first 7 chappies. your oc's are a nice addition particuallarly like eve. kags and sess are great and ogm is kikyou scarier than usual. note on the kids and hotel leaving kids that age alone bad but fancy hotels usually have babysitting services if that helps :)

sesshsmate101- Fri 14 Jul 2006
HOLY SHIT!! Kiyo tried killing Kagome...and then she goes and says it! wow that woman either has big balls or no brains.... i think it's the latter...oh and I added your story to my fav list!!

sesshsmate101- Fri 14 Jul 2006
lol!!! and awwww.....I love sesshoumaru being their dad!!

sesshsmate101- Fri 14 Jul 2006
AWWWW!! and bet i know who his kids are!!

sesshsmate101- Fri 14 Jul 2006
WOW!! I love all the new characters! I love when people bring in OC's

sesshsmate101- Fri 14 Jul 2006
lol!! that was hilarious!! That's a lot like in my freinds and my fic... I call him a buff chick and htne he says.. "I'm male." lol....

but really i like the story a lot!

sesshsmate101- Fri 14 Jul 2006
lol..i feel bad for kagome and the girls....wait...I wish I was them!! three boy bands, with one having sesshoumaru..HA Illl take their place any day!

Kuma- Thu 13 Jul 2006
kill???? wat happened...did he leave the kids alone?

Gothic Lust- Thu 13 Jul 2006
and the plot thickens. i love it. update soon.

Fluffy's girl- Thu 13 Jul 2006
i really like your fanfic 'You Rock My World', it's funny. i love your original characters(spelling?) their really cute in my opinion( that might just be me though). nice cliffy too, pleeaaase update soon(ish)!!

demon13o- Thu 13 Jul 2006
I got to the end of the chapter and I just out said 'D@mn you' you left it on such a little cliffhanger it made me cry, hurry and update it's got me so hooked!!

andria- Thu 13 Jul 2006
i loved it

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Thu 13 Jul 2006
I so love this story and can't until you update. Thanks for answering my questions. The Cure is awesome

angelica- Thu 13 Jul 2006
this chapter was great. i can't wait to see what happens to kikyo next. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

demon13o- Wed 12 Jul 2006
great fic i defintely love it ^^

PunkrockerX- Wed 12 Jul 2006
*whines* But i want more!!!! More chappies!!! lolz. Great chapter...funny too...lolz. Well update soon!!

Toodles!!

Much Love, Midnight Walker

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Wed 12 Jul 2006
i just loved it made me laugh. I can't believe he has kids and whyd didn't they put up concealment spells if they knew they were going to out. Please update soon.

sesshomaru_lover13- Wed 12 Jul 2006
hey this is rally good i hope u hurry and finich the next chapter.

Fox_Fairy_Maiden- Tue 11 Jul 2006
Sesshoumaru has CHILDREN?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!! SHippou and Rin right???????? Update soon..
~FFM~

Eternityoftears- Wed 05 Jul 2006
Sweet chapter girl!
^_^
Loved it.!!
and thanks for letting me be in the story!

Gothic Lust- Wed 05 Jul 2006
not bad. update soon

mortefille- Thu 29 Jun 2006
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanela- Thu 29 Jun 2006
*thumbs up* Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuud
*nods*

update!! ^^ I'm lovin' it!

Kuma- Thu 29 Jun 2006
i like it...update soon

Eternityoftears- Thu 29 Jun 2006
Hey, thank for the shout out!!
^_^ rock on!
Awesome, like i said before..^_^ I Can't wait until hte next chapter!

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