Excellent storytelling. There were some parts I didn't quite understand, but I was only a passing fan of Inuyasha years ago... despite that, a great read. Plz finish!

I don't know much of the store to rate it, but that one part made it so worth while. That one part in the story that had me fallen out of my chair (Literally) Laughing my head off. "Really? He was twitching?" "Yes, yes he was."
OMG! I can't stop laughing!