Amanda- Mon 19 Mar 2007
I LOVED IT! AS ALWAYS CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

Killing Perfection- Thu 04 Jan 2007
That was really good!!! I like it alot
^_^ Update soon please!!!

J rida- Sat 09 Dec 2006
this was rwally good i cant wait for the next chapter

Jamie- Fri 27 Oct 2006
Please update soon!!!!!! I love the story so far.

daydreamer extream- Tue 29 Aug 2006
oh wow can't wait!!! Hurry pleeeeaseeeeee update!!

HotAngelFromHell- Sun 25 Jun 2006
i love this story so far! it is a wondeeful storyline...a little refreshing if you ask me! i just have one thing that is bothering me..i knoe its a simple thing but it just makes me twitch. in the first chapter when you are in sesshomaru's POV, and he is talking about his companions.......you say

~his ward Jaken behind to look after his young retainer Rin in a deserted clearing not far from where ~

that is an exact exurpt from you story..shouldn't it be.......

~his retainer Jaken behind to look after his young ward Rin in a deserted clearing not far from where ~

glad to help!

~HotAngelfromhell

MorningMoonlight- Fri 23 Jun 2006
This story has an intriging plot.I have one suggestion though,could you break up the paragraphs a little bit?It would make it easier to read.Otherwise,I really like the plot so far.I wonder what Sesshoumaru is going to go through.Can't wait to find out!

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