Beautifully done!!!!! I love how you intermixed mythology of the different Gods and such into this. It gives it a more mysterious and magical quality. So please update soon I can't wait to read more.

plz plz plz plz update soon! its lyk a legend a reall legend that historians found from an ancient scroll or something! its sookewl!! i luv it!! plz plz plz update soon thanx!

it's really interesting so far, but there are a lot of really obvious grammar and spelling mistakes