Reviews for Through the Lens by Destiny

itachiiyoubastard- Mon 22 Jan 2007
O_O

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Just update..

You've got me totally and completely speechless and happy that I can't seem to form words.. Except in writing this paragraph.

^_^/O_O

Kara- Sun 21 Jan 2007
OMG!! I absolutely loved it. I must know whats going to happen. What about his wife and child? Update soon please. ^-^

clavira- Sun 21 Jan 2007
I'm not sure if I... approve of the way he handles the situation. I mean, he has a child. and betrayal is, in my opinion, the worst betrayal. and satine hasn't done anything wrong, Kagome has. and now Sesshoumaru has as well.

SesshomaruCrazy- Mon 15 Jan 2007
Wow.. I like it so far.. Really good chapter..
I like that they both are cheating with each other,, but what is going to happen to the girlfriend once they marry.. He can't be a cheater all the time,, thats what she ran from...
Can't wait to see what you do next.. Maybe they can be friends,,
But i think i will have to wait for the rest of the story HUH..
Well hurry and update and make it soon plz..
Take Care
Mari

Chaos-and-Serenity- Sun 14 Jan 2007
This is different, but in a good way - like Arby's, or is that change? Beats me. I'm loving the drama and I absolutely love the way you wrote the lemons. Very tasteful and not too drawn out. I'm really looking foward to more memories of Kagome and Sesshoumaru and I'm very intrigued to see where everything will go from here.

On a concrit note, the past tense of lead is led. The other lead (pronounced 'led') is a metal. Also, it's better to use 'himself' instead of 'his self'. Other than those minor errors, your grammar is great. As I said before, I very much enjoy the simplicity of your style and the overall cleanness of your writing. I'm captivated by this tale so far.

I hope to see an update soon. Until then...

clavira- Sat 11 Nov 2006
... I'm not sure if I like Kagome in this story. Is she going to try and break up Sess with -what's her name?- Satine? And what about Rin?
*shakes head* Drama. Major drama.

Fluffy-kins- Sat 11 Nov 2006
ouch? Rip out my heart why don't you? lol Wow, Great chapter. I can't even begin to express how great that was. Can't wait for the update. :D

Jen- Thu 14 Sep 2006
i like the sound the inuyasha breaking down in tears. he deserves it. i want him to also leave Ayame and go after Kagome, but its your call. update soon. i love your story.

Bri- Mon 11 Sep 2006
Haha.. Funny part is.. I read the first few paragraphs and decided it sounded a lot like Wicker Park.. I know it's a bit late, but yeah.. I just watched the movie for the first time.

sesshsmate101- Sun 10 Sep 2006
i thought inu crying was sad until i read your A/N! i started laughing cuz it does sound funny! LOL anyways awesome story update soon!

malice_babe- Sun 10 Sep 2006
I love where this is going, but am confused..

At the last chapter, Inuyasha gets sad when he has to leave Ayame, but when Kagome finally leaves him, he's hurt that she "ripped his heart out." Isn't Inuyasha cheating on her? And why is Kagome letting him when she has such a better brother?

Update soon.

Ja ne.

valire18- Fri 30 Jun 2006
This is different kind of story than i'm used to. Both parties are cheating instesting. I like it so far. I just hope Sesshomaru doens't get married before they get back together. Cause then that's moral issues and junk. I'm joking. I like it i can't wait until you write more.

Wonderingspirit- Fri 30 Jun 2006
Update soon

kook- Fri 30 Jun 2006
HOLY FREAKIN HELL! IM SO HAPPY THAT YOU DIDN'T MAKE KAGOME SOME SOBBING IDIOT!GUH, I READ TO MANY OF THOSE AND ITS STUPID!!! MAKE KAGOME HAVE SOME BACKBONE!!! anyway, cool chapter. post the next one soon!

Cochrann- Wed 28 Jun 2006
I love this! It starts out very original though the time line was a little hard to follow at first. Update asap!

rioyku- Wed 28 Jun 2006
i could have sworn i already read this chapter... anyway, AWESOME fanfic, post the next chapter soon! and for the love of all that is fanfiction, don't make kagome a sobbing, broken-hearted idiot. if anything, sesshomaru should be the one to suffer from pain and jealousy, now THAT would be originality.

Jessica- Sun 18 Jun 2006
I really like your story so far, are you going to continue it? If you do, please email me with an update notice. I'd really like to see where this story goes. Good work!

Vanessa- Wed 17 May 2006
this has to continue! You must update soon! until the next chapter... Ja ne!

summer- Tue 16 May 2006
hey, great story I look forward to the next chapter

Elli Mac- Mon 15 May 2006
Wow this story is very interesting . I thought it was pretty funny to make sesshoumaru living like a bum at frist. But any way please continue. I be waiting and you have my full supported on the story.

the Dah- Mon 15 May 2006
wow.. that was just captivating. I wanna read some more. :P

augiegvc- Mon 15 May 2006
Nice! Just a wild guess here but, this is not based on the movie Wicker Park, is it?
Anyways, update soon, k? I like it.

Princess. TigerMomo- Mon 15 May 2006
oooo, I like, I like very much =D This is frickin awesome! in the first chapter...now questions have started popping up. The girlfriend..is it Kagome? or someone else?? is that why Kagome left him?? I want to know mooorrree, hehehe =P I'm so desparate for more XD Huurrrryyyy up Destiny, I've missed you!! ^^

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