| no!! is this the last chapter.. it ends with sesshoumaru getting arressted?!?!?!
sesshy's_boo- Tue 10 Apr 2007
| FINALLY I THOUGHT THERE WASN'T GONNA BE ANOTHER CHAPTER BUT EVEN BETTER THERS A SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!
cassy- Fri 23 Feb 2007
| fantastic fanfic, but terrible ending. if you're going to write a fanfic you might as well end it thoroughly. i don't think it's fair to those who take the time to read it to jip them like that. that's my personal opinion.
Dana- Tue 20 Feb 2007
| THANK GOODNESS THEIR WILL BE A SEQUAL I JUST AHVE TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!
crystal- Sun 14 Jan 2007
| please continue with the story where sesshmaru comes back out of jail
rainwolf- Fri 22 Dec 2006
| i liked it a lot but i didnt like the ending one bit with sess going to jail and all. it was too sad in a way. i hope you write the sequal soon so i can see what happens
DeJanea M. Steward- Sat 04 Nov 2006
| Yeah, Naraku is dead. But my cute fluffy is going to jail which sucks. Oh well, you better write another chapter soon.
| poor sesshy chan he's gonna be arrested!! aw man i gotta know what happens next and i sorry for not sending reviews i kind of lost my internet and spending forever having a fight with it lol ^^ good work on the fic it's getting me hooked more and more!
Khristen- Tue 24 Oct 2006
| OH wow...I ant express how good it is..I actually teared when Sesshomaru was being taken away, and when Kagome was being beat for the first time...Its simply amazing!! :D:D I love you man..woman..whatever YOUR AWESOME
Ren Taisho- Sat 21 Oct 2006
| OMG whyh is sess going to jail those basterds!!! yay naraku is dead woow yeah!! hey is there a sequel cause the ending is screaming sequel well i loved this story it soo good!! well ttyl
I totally wasn't expecting that sort of ending!! Awsome fic!! i must say that I'm glad that Naraku is finally dead. ( three cheers for Sesshomaru!! YAH!!) It was really a funny ending also with them play'n and joke'n 'round with the gun. I laughed alot at that!! I'm kinda hoping that there would be a sequal, but hey this story was fricken huge and i saw taht you took it up as a challenge too! It's mind blowing and i loved it!! Keep up your great work on your ather stories as well, i'm looking forward to some updates!!
Later,
Kambri_Jade
Tricia- Wed 18 Oct 2006
| Man i didn't see the sequil part I was like Noooooo don't leave us hanging there.....
rhonda34- Tue 17 Oct 2006
| asome story thanks for writing it
Priah- Tue 17 Oct 2006
| OMG!!! That was an awesome story. I have to read th sequel now. OMG!!!!!!
katie- Tue 17 Oct 2006
| wow i like it please make the next story i would like to know what will happen
bluemoon_175- Mon 16 Oct 2006
| This was a fantastic story, keep up the good work. I think you should write a sequel and let Sess get off free, and they don't press any charges. But do what you will. :^)
Ren Taisho- Tue 03 Oct 2006
| WHOO YAY !!!! awsome! finally naraku is gonna get his ass kicked kags21 you have out done yourself with this chapter tho the next chapters will be greater cause this is tooo good well gtg tell me when next chappie is up oki
rhonda34- Tue 03 Oct 2006
| please hurry update very soon
Kambri_Jade- Tue 03 Oct 2006
Q: i thought that Naraku moved out of the country? little confused. but anyway the chapter was as great as ever!! Keep it up and update Soon!!
Later,
Kambri_Jade
katie- Mon 02 Oct 2006
| wow i like it please keep going
Ren Taisho- Fri 29 Sep 2006
| hey kags sorry i havent replied in a while but you have really out done yourself this time i cant believe inuyasha whose side is he on i mean even i wouldnt do that its sick and the worse part that makes your story better even thought it is twisted but the story is getting really good but the really creepy part is that INUYASHA IS TURNING INTO A HOMO!?! WAT THE FUCK IS HAPPENING!?! well kags i got a new e-mail address so i will talk to you soon mk see ya
Kambri_Jade- Tue 26 Sep 2006
Poor Kagome!! i seriuosly thought that Inuyasha was under Naraku's cotrol agian. Can't wait till next chapter. please update ASAP!
Later,
Kambri_Jade
iteria- Mon 25 Sep 2006
| i love it so much
rhonda34- Sat 23 Sep 2006
| please keep going .i love this storty
katie- Thu 21 Sep 2006
| wow i like it please keep going
Kambri_Jade- Wed 20 Sep 2006
Great Chapter. Very intense! Keep up the good work and updat ASAP! Later,
Kambri_Jade
tian- Fri 08 Sep 2006
if the lie detector didn't prove it, they could always take a paternity test
rhonda34- Fri 08 Sep 2006
| please hurry and finish this story want to see what happen next
rhonda34- Fri 08 Sep 2006
| please hurry and finish this story want to see what happen next
tanii13- Fri 08 Sep 2006
Gah! No You Must write more!
It is such an awesome story, please update soon!
Good luck and keep up the aweome work.
Your writing rocks to no end!
~b ^_^v
swtdrm01- Fri 08 Sep 2006
| The story is getting better and better. Please don't wait too long to update.
katie- Fri 08 Sep 2006
| wow i like it please keep going
WOW!! This chapter was so great!! I totally want more, so please update ASAP!! Later,
kambri_Jade
katie- Thu 07 Sep 2006
| wow i mean wow i love this story this is so good u are doing a great job i would like to know whats going to happen to them and i hope kagome and the. others get there merres back. and are u going to have kag and sess get marred? i hope so.
Sakura and miles- Tue 05 Sep 2006
Sakura: Why did you leav it there no fair!!
MIles:comon!!! it was gettin good!!
Sakura:no miles its got good in chp.1 2end paregraf
Miles:tell me somthin I dont know
Skura:ok um....I was ranked more evil than you yesterday!
miles:...O-o have I gotten that soft??
Sakura and miles:update soon!! ^_^ ^_^
DeJanea M. Steward- Sun 03 Sep 2006
| I would appreciate it if you used grammar correctly but besides that I love the fanfic and happy u got back to writing.
rhonda34- Sun 03 Sep 2006
| is it ever going to end
kambri_Jade- Sat 02 Sep 2006
CLIFF!! I totally loved this chapter, good as always! UPDATE ASAP!!
Later,
Kambri_Jade
kambri_Jade- Sat 02 Sep 2006
God, I love like all of your fics. But I think this one is most deffinately my favorite! So please Update ASAP!
Later,
Kambri_Jade
| OO u did it again i should really find a lawyer man u always leave it off on such a cliff hanger!!!
rhonda34- Fri 01 Sep 2006
| please update soon. keep up good work
Fox_Fairy_Maiden- Mon 07 Aug 2006
Naraku is a freak.......
Update soon.....
~FFM~
moon- Fri 04 Aug 2006
| WILL THE PAIN EVER STOP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY IS GOOD BUT VERY SICK ALL I WANT TO NO IS WILL THE PAIN, AND THE EVIL STOP
rhonda34- Fri 04 Aug 2006
| please keep up the good work
mitch- Fri 04 Aug 2006
| wow,this is one dark fanfiction...but it's really a great story,it makes you want to keep reading,to see what happends next!so keep writing,i can't wait till the next chapter!!^-^
| OMFG!! I hate Naraku in this one! he's such a f*ck*ng bastard! GRR!! But you do awesome detai, and I don't know where you're getting your ideas but this tory is really good! can't wait till you update!
moon- Thu 03 Aug 2006
| I Love this story update soon.
DeJanea M. Steward- Wed 02 Aug 2006
I luv ur stories and how you write ur chaps but I would appreciate it if u would write a little faster. I always go on this website and search 2 c if u wrote a new chapter. Thanx and good luck with ur new chapter and hurry it up will ya
| wow it's really good u have a few spelling grammers but who cares that fic f**king rocks!! can't wait till u update i hope it's soon to!!
Eternityoftears- Sat 29 Jul 2006
| Great chapter...ohh...i can't wait for the update.
mitch- Fri 28 Jul 2006
| i lov this story!!please write more chapters!*gives puppy-dog eyes*
Lady Angel Of Sleep- Thu 27 Jul 2006
| i love it, i would like to see more of the story, please update it soon, and plz dont let Naraku rape InuYasha
Kambri_Jade- Thu 27 Jul 2006
Another great chapter ! Update asap.
Later,
Kambri_Jade
Ren Taisho- Thu 27 Jul 2006
| whoa this is just turning out wrong i cant believe that naraku is going to rape inuyasha again i fell soo sorry for him and naraku is still a gay homosexual man whore rapist !! yup a good discripion for him. well tell me when teh next chapter is up ok kags21 bye
Kami no Shukaku- Thu 27 Jul 2006
| Nicee. Pleae update soon this was a great chapter!
mooniceblue- Thu 27 Jul 2006
| when will narku be cayght because this is a great story and all but the pain has gown on way to long. But I do like the story
rhonda34- Thu 27 Jul 2006
| great job keep up the good work
christten- Sat 22 Jul 2006
| rly good chapters i feel so sry 4 inuyasha naraku iz ly nasty but plz dont let n more bad thingz happen 2 kagome cuz i feel rly bad everytime it does plz finish writtin yur story
Kambri_Jade- Thu 20 Jul 2006
| Wow, what a thriller! This story had me on the edge the whole time! Please Udate soon!
Eternityoftears- Thu 20 Jul 2006
| wow. Poor Inu....update soon, please?
OokamiMistress- Thu 20 Jul 2006
| Wow this story is amazing! Please update soon!!!!!
Kuma- Wed 19 Jul 2006
| very good....update soon
Aki-kawa- Wed 19 Jul 2006
| Wow. This is a good drama. It's really good. I hope you post the next chapter soon.
rhonda34- Wed 19 Jul 2006
| please update soon. l like the story so far. please keep it up
Menna- Wed 19 Jul 2006
This was a great chapter. Did you get hte discription for Botan out of
Yu Yu Hakusho?? It's very similar to the Botan there. ^^
| omg thats so horrible! Naraku is a such bastard! well most of the time! lol
ren- Mon 10 Jul 2006
| oh hi just saying that you are not a person with a twisted mind and is a genius but i can believe shippo and nazuna sure nazuna cause she didnt eat in days but shippo could of atleast said sorry and try to ingore the pain...well anyways finish as fast as you can ok
ren- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| kag21 you story is great thought i can believe what naraku is doing so at first i kinda thought that you had a twisted mind but now i think that u are a pure genius in a creepy good story teller way well update as fast as you can ok and please dont take what i said personally it was my old opinion ok luv ya bye
rhonda34- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| please update soon. this is getting to good not to read
Blank- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| Not really into your story, very sorry i find that is very crude, juvenile(which is odd because it has a "lemon") and rushed. Very confusing and well that's all i got to say, just doesn't capture my interest. This hardly deserves a 9, maybe a 7.
kathy- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| wow. naraku is a big pedophile!!! those girls need to at least fight. ugh! ppl are so weak. and kagome is also.. maybe its cuz of the pregnacy. o well. i really love this story. please update soon!!
eternityoftears- Sat 08 Jul 2006
hahhaa, loved the fall out boy thing. very amusing.
great chapter!
Menna- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| Pleas update soon! Thisis getting really angsty. ^^ i heart angst.
KhristenJMGraham- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| WOW! Awesome story!! I love it..So good! i cant stop readin it and i can't wait for the next update!!!
rhonda34- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| please update soon. the story is getting good
Anonymous- Sat 08 Jul 2006
Where is Kagura in all this?
Does she know what's going on? What happened to Hojo?
Will Hojo try to get back into Naraku's good graces?
Why would Muso care what happens to Shippo?
Inuyasha will never forgive himself if anything happens to Kagome, especially when he finds out that it's Naraku.
Please update ASAP.
Eternityoftears- Thu 06 Jul 2006
...Oh-no!!! she can't go back with Naraku!!!!
>_
update soon, please?
Menna- Thu 06 Jul 2006
| Great chappie! ^^
rhonda34- Thu 06 Jul 2006
| please update soon. i cant wait tell next chapter
Anonymous- Wed 05 Jul 2006
Will Naraku blame Sakura for Kagome being with Sesshomaru?
How furious will Naraku be when the news get around about Hojo killing someone.
How happy is Naraku about the baby, especially now that he knows it's a boy?
Naraku could always invite Inuyasha to dinner and have him bring Kagome. Although, knowing Inuayasha he would probably invite his "girlfriend".
By any chance wa Kikyo, Sakura's child or wre they related?
What will happen to Hojo and Muso?
If Naraku takes his furry on him, will Muro blame Sakura, since it was clear as day that Sakura made Kagome feel unwelcome.
Please update real soon.
Eternityoftears- Mon 03 Jul 2006
wow.
o.o
good chapter...update soon!
rhonda34- Mon 03 Jul 2006
| please update soon
rhonda34- Mon 03 Jul 2006
| please update soon. i am glad kagome with angel.i hope she stay with him
rhonda34- Mon 03 Jul 2006
| please update soon. i am glad kagome with angel.i hope she stay with him
kathy- Mon 03 Jul 2006
| omg.. poor shippou.. and kagome must feel really guilty.. i mean it is her fault after all.. lol but really poor shippou. please update soon!!!
Menna- Sat 01 Jul 2006
| Sweet! Please update again!
kathy- Fri 30 Jun 2006
| im sure naraku isnt done with kagome yet. please update soon i love your story
| nice.. i love it. finally kagome and sesshomaru meet. update soon.
Eternityoftears- Fri 30 Jun 2006
| uh-oh...I wonder what's going to happen now... Please update soon! [ great chapter!]
mizunosora- Fri 30 Jun 2006
This story is good!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon
rhonda34- Fri 30 Jun 2006
| please update soon. i love this story
rhonda34- Fri 30 Jun 2006
| please update soon. i love this story
Ashley Wilson- Tue 27 Jun 2006
| I loved it! Update soon!
localsamurai- Tue 27 Jun 2006
| I love this. E-mail me when you update if you can.
Anonymous- Tue 27 Jun 2006
Since Kagome is over the age, she doesn't have to go with her mother.
WIll Kagome be staying at her moms, or will she choice to stay else where?
Does anyone other then Sesshomaru know that her mother was basically glad that her daughter was gone?
Kagome could stay at Inuyasha's as the kids nanny.
Will Kagome have the feeling that she can't trust her mother?
Will their be a attempt on her life, while she's at the hospital, maybe by the mother, trying to make everyone believe it was "master" who was trying to do it.
Maybe Sesshomaru will ask Kagome or she could ask them if she could stay anywhere other then with her mother.
Sorry don't care for her mother in this story.
Please update ASAP.
Great job.
Eternityoftears- Tue 27 Jun 2006
I forgot to hit the review button on the last chapter..so i'm combining both! ^_^
You've done a wonderful job so far!
^_^..ohh...i hope they all make it out alive!!!
Great job and like always please update soon!
rhonda34- Tue 27 Jun 2006
| please update this story soon
rhonda34- Tue 27 Jun 2006
| please update this story soon
rhonda34- Tue 27 Jun 2006
| i knew this would good story. keep it up. you are doing good job. please update soon
kathy- Tue 27 Jun 2006
| omg i cant belive she escaped. yea!! its bout time. please update soon!!
rhonda33- Mon 26 Jun 2006
| please update soon.i would love to read more
Menna- Mon 26 Jun 2006
| Nooooo! Don't stop now!! This is too gooooood! Please update soon.
InuSusu- Mon 26 Jun 2006
I hope she finds Sesshou before Naraku wakes up, this is gettin really good, i wanna see whats gonna happen soo bad. Can't wait, Keep it up and Update Soon
InuSusu-Sama
bluemoon_175- Mon 26 Jun 2006
| PLEASE update soon, can't wait to read more. So update soon PLEASE....
brandy- Sun 25 Jun 2006
| that was very nice to let them go but will kagome be found
InuSusu- Sun 25 Jun 2006
Dang i thought she was gonna escape, She needs to escape soon.
I heard this story yesterday, and i was like its kinda similer to the fanfiction Enslaved, The story happened for real, This rich man, had these 3 girls locked in his bassment for 15 years, and he been raping them and stuff like that, and then recently the police found them, its creepy , to think something like that would happen for real. When i heard it, right away i thought of this story, Freaky, I hope nothing like that ever happen to me, ha, thats why just incase i have a pocket knife with me, and its sharp, so anybody just dare to touch me, yeap, they'll be killed or injured.
So ya anyways, got carried away with my story, I love the story soo far, Each chapter leaves me wanna read more, Please Update Soon
Keep it Up
InuSusu-Sama
and when is ownership gonna be updated?
InuSusu- Sun 25 Jun 2006
Dang i thought she was gonna escape, She needs to escape soon.
I heard this story yesterday, and i was like its kinda similer to the fanfiction Enslaved, The story happened for real, This rich man, had these 3 girls locked in his bassment for 15 years, and he been raping them and stuff like that, and then recently the police found them, its creepy , to think something like that would happen for real. When i heard it, right away i thought of this story, Freaky, I hope nothing like that ever happen to me, ha, thats why just incase i have a pocket knife with me, and its sharp, so anybody just dare to touch me, yeap, they'll be killed or injured.
So ya anyways, got carried away with my story, I love the story soo far, Each chapter leaves me wanna read more, Please Update Soon
Keep it Up
InuSusu-Sama
and when is ownership gonna be updated?
Menna- Sat 24 Jun 2006
| Ouch. *wince* Will she escape next time????? Please update!!!! Can you e-mail me when u do? Please? This is a really good fic.
Eternityoftears- Sat 24 Jun 2006
...hmm...
Great chapter!!
^_^
One tiny question though...about mow many more chapters do we have until Kagome gets out somehow?
just wondering! ^_^
Please update soon!
kathy- Sat 24 Jun 2006
| ugh!!! she didnt escape thats sucks. o well its part of your ingenius plan lol. please update soon
Dianna- Fri 23 Jun 2006
| this is weird i just got a kitten & i named him Max lol awsome chapter i can't wait until the next one =)
rhonda34- Fri 23 Jun 2006
| please update soon. is kagome ever going to get way from naraku.
rhonda34- Fri 23 Jun 2006
| please update soon. is kagome ever going to get way from naraku.
rhonda34- Thu 22 Jun 2006
| please update soon. i love this story
rhonda34- Thu 22 Jun 2006
| please update soon. i love this story
kathy- Wed 21 Jun 2006
| i love your story please update soon!!!
Menna- Wed 21 Jun 2006
| AcK! Up date sooooon please!!!!
| i love it please update soon. poor kagome
Kuma- Wed 21 Jun 2006
| they better remember....or else -_-
eternityoftears- Wed 21 Jun 2006
| great chapter. please update soon!
Anonymous- Wed 21 Jun 2006
It seems like the unborn child is Naraku's only hold on Kagome.
WIll he somehow cause her to miscarry?
Does Kagome's mother know where Kagome is and if so, what will happen when Sesshomaru and the law finds out.
Since Naraku knows that Inuyasha is Sesshomaru's brother, will he keep an close eye on him?
Please update ASAP
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