Reviews for Enslaved by Kags21

Yukilunny598 "aka Susanne"- Mon 16 Jul 2007
Noo [i]-crys and reaches out-[/i] he can't be put in jail, it wasn't fair. Naraku deserved being killed.
Awh... come on the suspence is killing me. Please continoue?

Jasmine- Sun 15 Jul 2007
this making me cry please right more

Sami- Tue 15 May 2007
no!! is this the last chapter.. it ends with sesshoumaru getting arressted?!?!?!

sesshy's_boo- Tue 10 Apr 2007
FINALLY I THOUGHT THERE WASN'T GONNA BE ANOTHER CHAPTER BUT EVEN BETTER THERS A SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!

cassy- Fri 23 Feb 2007
fantastic fanfic, but terrible ending. if you're going to write a fanfic you might as well end it thoroughly. i don't think it's fair to those who take the time to read it to jip them like that. that's my personal opinion.

Dana- Tue 20 Feb 2007
THANK GOODNESS THEIR WILL BE A SEQUAL I JUST AHVE TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!

crystal- Sun 14 Jan 2007
please continue with the story where sesshmaru comes back out of jail

rainwolf- Fri 22 Dec 2006
i liked it a lot but i didnt like the ending one bit with sess going to jail and all. it was too sad in a way. i hope you write the sequal soon so i can see what happens

DeJanea M. Steward- Sat 04 Nov 2006
Yeah, Naraku is dead. But my cute fluffy is going to jail which sucks. Oh well, you better write another chapter soon.

demon13o- Sat 28 Oct 2006
poor sesshy chan he's gonna be arrested!! aw man i gotta know what happens next and i sorry for not sending reviews i kind of lost my internet and spending forever having a fight with it lol ^^ good work on the fic it's getting me hooked more and more!

Khristen- Tue 24 Oct 2006
OH wow...I ant express how good it is..I actually teared when Sesshomaru was being taken away, and when Kagome was being beat for the first time...Its simply amazing!! :D:D I love you man..woman..whatever YOUR AWESOME

Ren Taisho- Sat 21 Oct 2006
OMG whyh is sess going to jail those basterds!!! yay naraku is dead woow yeah!! hey is there a sequel cause the ending is screaming sequel well i loved this story it soo good!! well ttyl

Kambri_Jade- Wed 18 Oct 2006
I totally wasn't expecting that sort of ending!! Awsome fic!! i must say that I'm glad that Naraku is finally dead. ( three cheers for Sesshomaru!! YAH!!) It was really a funny ending also with them play'n and joke'n 'round with the gun. I laughed alot at that!! I'm kinda hoping that there would be a sequal, but hey this story was fricken huge and i saw taht you took it up as a challenge too! It's mind blowing and i loved it!! Keep up your great work on your ather stories as well, i'm looking forward to some updates!!
Later,
Kambri_Jade

Tricia- Wed 18 Oct 2006
Man i didn't see the sequil part I was like Noooooo don't leave us hanging there.....

rhonda34- Tue 17 Oct 2006
asome story thanks for writing it

Priah- Tue 17 Oct 2006
OMG!!! That was an awesome story. I have to read th sequel now. OMG!!!!!!

katie- Tue 17 Oct 2006
wow i like it please make the next story i would like to know what will happen

bluemoon_175- Mon 16 Oct 2006
This was a fantastic story, keep up the good work. I think you should write a sequel and let Sess get off free, and they don't press any charges. But do what you will. :^)

Ren Taisho- Tue 03 Oct 2006
WHOO YAY !!!! awsome! finally naraku is gonna get his ass kicked kags21 you have out done yourself with this chapter tho the next chapters will be greater cause this is tooo good well gtg tell me when next chappie is up oki

rhonda34- Tue 03 Oct 2006
please hurry update very soon

Kambri_Jade- Tue 03 Oct 2006
Q: i thought that Naraku moved out of the country? little confused. but anyway the chapter was as great as ever!! Keep it up and update Soon!!
Later,
Kambri_Jade

katie- Mon 02 Oct 2006
wow i like it please keep going

Ren Taisho- Fri 29 Sep 2006
hey kags sorry i havent replied in a while but you have really out done yourself this time i cant believe inuyasha whose side is he on i mean even i wouldnt do that its sick and the worse part that makes your story better even thought it is twisted but the story is getting really good but the really creepy part is that INUYASHA IS TURNING INTO A HOMO!?! WAT THE FUCK IS HAPPENING!?! well kags i got a new e-mail address so i will talk to you soon mk see ya

Kambri_Jade- Tue 26 Sep 2006
Poor Kagome!! i seriuosly thought that Inuyasha was under Naraku's cotrol agian. Can't wait till next chapter. please update ASAP!
Later,
Kambri_Jade

iteria- Mon 25 Sep 2006
i love it so much

rhonda34- Sat 23 Sep 2006
please keep going .i love this storty

katie- Thu 21 Sep 2006
wow i like it please keep going

Kambri_Jade- Wed 20 Sep 2006
Great Chapter. Very intense! Keep up the good work and updat ASAP! Later,
Kambri_Jade

tian- Fri 08 Sep 2006
if the lie detector didn't prove it, they could always take a paternity test

rhonda34- Fri 08 Sep 2006
please hurry and finish this story want to see what happen next

rhonda34- Fri 08 Sep 2006
please hurry and finish this story want to see what happen next

tanii13- Fri 08 Sep 2006
Gah! No You Must write more!
It is such an awesome story, please update soon!
Good luck and keep up the aweome work.
Your writing rocks to no end!
~b ^_^v

swtdrm01- Fri 08 Sep 2006
The story is getting better and better. Please don't wait too long to update.

katie- Fri 08 Sep 2006
wow i like it please keep going

Kambri_Jade- Thu 07 Sep 2006
WOW!! This chapter was so great!! I totally want more, so please update ASAP!! Later,
kambri_Jade

katie- Thu 07 Sep 2006
wow i mean wow i love this story this is so good u are doing a great job i would like to know whats going to happen to them and i hope kagome and the. others get there merres back. and are u going to have kag and sess get marred? i hope so.

Sakura and miles- Tue 05 Sep 2006
Sakura: Why did you leav it there no fair!!

MIles:comon!!! it was gettin good!!

Sakura:no miles its got good in chp.1 2end paregraf

Miles:tell me somthin I dont know

Skura:ok um....I was ranked more evil than you yesterday!

miles:...O-o have I gotten that soft??

Sakura and miles:update soon!! ^_^ ^_^

DeJanea M. Steward- Sun 03 Sep 2006
I would appreciate it if you used grammar correctly but besides that I love the fanfic and happy u got back to writing.

rhonda34- Sun 03 Sep 2006
is it ever going to end

kambri_Jade- Sat 02 Sep 2006
CLIFF!! I totally loved this chapter, good as always! UPDATE ASAP!!
Later,
Kambri_Jade

kambri_Jade- Sat 02 Sep 2006
God, I love like all of your fics. But I think this one is most deffinately my favorite! So please Update ASAP!
Later,
Kambri_Jade

demon13o- Sat 02 Sep 2006
OO u did it again i should really find a lawyer man u always leave it off on such a cliff hanger!!!

rhonda34- Fri 01 Sep 2006
please update soon. keep up good work

Fox_Fairy_Maiden- Mon 07 Aug 2006
Naraku is a freak.......
Update soon.....
~FFM~

moon- Fri 04 Aug 2006
WILL THE PAIN EVER STOP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY IS GOOD BUT VERY SICK ALL I WANT TO NO IS WILL THE PAIN, AND THE EVIL STOP

rhonda34- Fri 04 Aug 2006
please keep up the good work

mitch- Fri 04 Aug 2006
wow,this is one dark fanfiction...but it's really a great story,it makes you want to keep reading,to see what happends next!so keep writing,i can't wait till the next chapter!!^-^

sesshsmate101- Fri 04 Aug 2006
OMFG!! I hate Naraku in this one! he's such a f*ck*ng bastard! GRR!! But you do awesome detai, and I don't know where you're getting your ideas but this tory is really good! can't wait till you update!

moon- Thu 03 Aug 2006
I Love this story update soon.

DeJanea M. Steward- Wed 02 Aug 2006
I luv ur stories and how you write ur chaps but I would appreciate it if u would write a little faster. I always go on this website and search 2 c if u wrote a new chapter. Thanx and good luck with ur new chapter and hurry it up will ya

demon13o- Sun 30 Jul 2006
wow it's really good u have a few spelling grammers but who cares that fic f**king rocks!! can't wait till u update i hope it's soon to!!

Eternityoftears- Sat 29 Jul 2006
Great chapter...ohh...i can't wait for the update.

mitch- Fri 28 Jul 2006
i lov this story!!please write more chapters!*gives puppy-dog eyes*

Lady Angel Of Sleep- Thu 27 Jul 2006
i love it, i would like to see more of the story, please update it soon, and plz dont let Naraku rape InuYasha

Kambri_Jade- Thu 27 Jul 2006
Another great chapter ! Update asap.
Later,
Kambri_Jade

Ren Taisho- Thu 27 Jul 2006
whoa this is just turning out wrong i cant believe that naraku is going to rape inuyasha again i fell soo sorry for him and naraku is still a gay homosexual man whore rapist !! yup a good discripion for him. well tell me when teh next chapter is up ok kags21 bye

Kami no Shukaku- Thu 27 Jul 2006
Nicee. Pleae update soon this was a great chapter!

mooniceblue- Thu 27 Jul 2006
when will narku be cayght because this is a great story and all but the pain has gown on way to long. But I do like the story

rhonda34- Thu 27 Jul 2006
great job keep up the good work

christten- Sat 22 Jul 2006
rly good chapters i feel so sry 4 inuyasha naraku iz ly nasty but plz dont let n more bad thingz happen 2 kagome cuz i feel rly bad everytime it does plz finish writtin yur story

Kambri_Jade- Thu 20 Jul 2006
Wow, what a thriller! This story had me on the edge the whole time! Please Udate soon!

Eternityoftears- Thu 20 Jul 2006
wow. Poor Inu....update soon, please?

OokamiMistress- Thu 20 Jul 2006
Wow this story is amazing! Please update soon!!!!!

Kuma- Wed 19 Jul 2006
very good....update soon

Aki-kawa- Wed 19 Jul 2006
Wow. This is a good drama. It's really good. I hope you post the next chapter soon.

rhonda34- Wed 19 Jul 2006
please update soon. l like the story so far. please keep it up

Menna- Wed 19 Jul 2006
This was a great chapter. Did you get hte discription for Botan out of
Yu Yu Hakusho?? It's very similar to the Botan there. ^^

sesshsmate101- Wed 19 Jul 2006
omg thats so horrible! Naraku is a such bastard! well most of the time! lol

ren- Mon 10 Jul 2006
oh hi just saying that you are not a person with a twisted mind and is a genius but i can believe shippo and nazuna sure nazuna cause she didnt eat in days but shippo could of atleast said sorry and try to ingore the pain...well anyways finish as fast as you can ok

ren- Sun 09 Jul 2006
kag21 you story is great thought i can believe what naraku is doing so at first i kinda thought that you had a twisted mind but now i think that u are a pure genius in a creepy good story teller way well update as fast as you can ok and please dont take what i said personally it was my old opinion ok luv ya bye

rhonda34- Sun 09 Jul 2006
please update soon. this is getting to good not to read

Blank- Sun 09 Jul 2006
Not really into your story, very sorry i find that is very crude, juvenile(which is odd because it has a "lemon") and rushed. Very confusing and well that's all i got to say, just doesn't capture my interest. This hardly deserves a 9, maybe a 7.

kathy- Sun 09 Jul 2006
wow. naraku is a big pedophile!!! those girls need to at least fight. ugh! ppl are so weak. and kagome is also.. maybe its cuz of the pregnacy. o well. i really love this story. please update soon!!

eternityoftears- Sat 08 Jul 2006
hahhaa, loved the fall out boy thing. very amusing.
great chapter!

Menna- Sat 08 Jul 2006
Pleas update soon! Thisis getting really angsty. ^^ i heart angst.

KhristenJMGraham- Sat 08 Jul 2006
WOW! Awesome story!! I love it..So good! i cant stop readin it and i can't wait for the next update!!!

rhonda34- Sat 08 Jul 2006
please update soon. the story is getting good

Anonymous- Sat 08 Jul 2006
Where is Kagura in all this?

Does she know what's going on? What happened to Hojo?

Will Hojo try to get back into Naraku's good graces?

Why would Muso care what happens to Shippo?

Inuyasha will never forgive himself if anything happens to Kagome, especially when he finds out that it's Naraku.

Please update ASAP.

Eternityoftears- Thu 06 Jul 2006
...Oh-no!!! she can't go back with Naraku!!!!
>_
update soon, please?

Menna- Thu 06 Jul 2006
Great chappie! ^^

rhonda34- Thu 06 Jul 2006
please update soon. i cant wait tell next chapter

Anonymous- Wed 05 Jul 2006
Will Naraku blame Sakura for Kagome being with Sesshomaru?

How furious will Naraku be when the news get around about Hojo killing someone.

How happy is Naraku about the baby, especially now that he knows it's a boy?

Naraku could always invite Inuyasha to dinner and have him bring Kagome. Although, knowing Inuayasha he would probably invite his "girlfriend".

By any chance wa Kikyo, Sakura's child or wre they related?

What will happen to Hojo and Muso?
If Naraku takes his furry on him, will Muro blame Sakura, since it was clear as day that Sakura made Kagome feel unwelcome.

Please update real soon.

Eternityoftears- Mon 03 Jul 2006
wow.
o.o
good chapter...update soon!

rhonda34- Mon 03 Jul 2006
please update soon

rhonda34- Mon 03 Jul 2006
please update soon. i am glad kagome with angel.i hope she stay with him

rhonda34- Mon 03 Jul 2006
please update soon. i am glad kagome with angel.i hope she stay with him

kathy- Mon 03 Jul 2006
omg.. poor shippou.. and kagome must feel really guilty.. i mean it is her fault after all.. lol but really poor shippou. please update soon!!!

Menna- Sat 01 Jul 2006
Sweet! Please update again!

kathy- Fri 30 Jun 2006
im sure naraku isnt done with kagome yet. please update soon i love your story

Gothic Lust- Fri 30 Jun 2006
nice.. i love it. finally kagome and sesshomaru meet. update soon.

Eternityoftears- Fri 30 Jun 2006
uh-oh...I wonder what's going to happen now... Please update soon! [ great chapter!]

mizunosora- Fri 30 Jun 2006
This story is good!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon

rhonda34- Fri 30 Jun 2006
please update soon. i love this story

rhonda34- Fri 30 Jun 2006
please update soon. i love this story

Ashley Wilson- Tue 27 Jun 2006
I loved it! Update soon!

localsamurai- Tue 27 Jun 2006
I love this. E-mail me when you update if you can.

Anonymous- Tue 27 Jun 2006
Since Kagome is over the age, she doesn't have to go with her mother.

WIll Kagome be staying at her moms, or will she choice to stay else where?

Does anyone other then Sesshomaru know that her mother was basically glad that her daughter was gone?

Kagome could stay at Inuyasha's as the kids nanny.

Will Kagome have the feeling that she can't trust her mother?

Will their be a attempt on her life, while she's at the hospital, maybe by the mother, trying to make everyone believe it was "master" who was trying to do it.

Maybe Sesshomaru will ask Kagome or she could ask them if she could stay anywhere other then with her mother.

Sorry don't care for her mother in this story.

Please update ASAP.
Great job.

Eternityoftears- Tue 27 Jun 2006
I forgot to hit the review button on the last chapter..so i'm combining both! ^_^
You've done a wonderful job so far!
^_^..ohh...i hope they all make it out alive!!!
Great job and like always please update soon!

rhonda34- Tue 27 Jun 2006
please update this story soon

rhonda34- Tue 27 Jun 2006
please update this story soon

rhonda34- Tue 27 Jun 2006
i knew this would good story. keep it up. you are doing good job. please update soon

kathy- Tue 27 Jun 2006
omg i cant belive she escaped. yea!! its bout time. please update soon!!

rhonda33- Mon 26 Jun 2006
please update soon.i would love to read more

Menna- Mon 26 Jun 2006
Nooooo! Don't stop now!! This is too gooooood! Please update soon.

InuSusu- Mon 26 Jun 2006
I hope she finds Sesshou before Naraku wakes up, this is gettin really good, i wanna see whats gonna happen soo bad. Can't wait, Keep it up and Update Soon

InuSusu-Sama

bluemoon_175- Mon 26 Jun 2006
PLEASE update soon, can't wait to read more. So update soon PLEASE....

brandy- Sun 25 Jun 2006
that was very nice to let them go but will kagome be found

InuSusu- Sun 25 Jun 2006
Dang i thought she was gonna escape, She needs to escape soon.
I heard this story yesterday, and i was like its kinda similer to the fanfiction Enslaved, The story happened for real, This rich man, had these 3 girls locked in his bassment for 15 years, and he been raping them and stuff like that, and then recently the police found them, its creepy , to think something like that would happen for real. When i heard it, right away i thought of this story, Freaky, I hope nothing like that ever happen to me, ha, thats why just incase i have a pocket knife with me, and its sharp, so anybody just dare to touch me, yeap, they'll be killed or injured.
So ya anyways, got carried away with my story, I love the story soo far, Each chapter leaves me wanna read more, Please Update Soon
Keep it Up
InuSusu-Sama

and when is ownership gonna be updated?

InuSusu- Sun 25 Jun 2006
Dang i thought she was gonna escape, She needs to escape soon.
I heard this story yesterday, and i was like its kinda similer to the fanfiction Enslaved, The story happened for real, This rich man, had these 3 girls locked in his bassment for 15 years, and he been raping them and stuff like that, and then recently the police found them, its creepy , to think something like that would happen for real. When i heard it, right away i thought of this story, Freaky, I hope nothing like that ever happen to me, ha, thats why just incase i have a pocket knife with me, and its sharp, so anybody just dare to touch me, yeap, they'll be killed or injured.
So ya anyways, got carried away with my story, I love the story soo far, Each chapter leaves me wanna read more, Please Update Soon
Keep it Up
InuSusu-Sama

and when is ownership gonna be updated?

Menna- Sat 24 Jun 2006
Ouch. *wince* Will she escape next time????? Please update!!!! Can you e-mail me when u do? Please? This is a really good fic.

Eternityoftears- Sat 24 Jun 2006
...hmm...
Great chapter!!
^_^
One tiny question though...about mow many more chapters do we have until Kagome gets out somehow?
just wondering! ^_^
Please update soon!

kathy- Sat 24 Jun 2006
ugh!!! she didnt escape thats sucks. o well its part of your ingenius plan lol. please update soon

Dianna- Fri 23 Jun 2006
this is weird i just got a kitten & i named him Max lol awsome chapter i can't wait until the next one =)

rhonda34- Fri 23 Jun 2006
please update soon. is kagome ever going to get way from naraku.

rhonda34- Fri 23 Jun 2006
please update soon. is kagome ever going to get way from naraku.

rhonda34- Thu 22 Jun 2006
please update soon. i love this story

rhonda34- Thu 22 Jun 2006
please update soon. i love this story

kathy- Wed 21 Jun 2006
i love your story please update soon!!!

Menna- Wed 21 Jun 2006
AcK! Up date sooooon please!!!!

Gothic Lust- Wed 21 Jun 2006
i love it please update soon. poor kagome

Kuma- Wed 21 Jun 2006
they better remember....or else -_-

eternityoftears- Wed 21 Jun 2006
great chapter. please update soon!

Anonymous- Wed 21 Jun 2006
It seems like the unborn child is Naraku's only hold on Kagome.

WIll he somehow cause her to miscarry?

Does Kagome's mother know where Kagome is and if so, what will happen when Sesshomaru and the law finds out.

Since Naraku knows that Inuyasha is Sesshomaru's brother, will he keep an close eye on him?

Please update ASAP

kathy- Tue 20 Jun 2006
wow the story is really good. im thinking that the baby will play some role in the story. or why else you would have gotten kagome pregnant. i love your story please update soon

crazygirlforlife- Tue 20 Jun 2006
WOW!! that was unexpected...i feel sorry for kagome. the poor thing has to carry naraku's baby

Gothic Lust- Tue 20 Jun 2006
omg... kagome is so selfless.. i love it. update soon

Kuma- Mon 19 Jun 2006
poor rin and haku...how sad...they need a happy ending....update soon love it so far

eternityoftears- Mon 19 Jun 2006
Awesome story so far!
I love the plot you've begun...i haven't read a story quite like this so good job.
:)

oh! and if it wouldn't be a bother...could you email me at
sakura_flower15@yahoo.com
when you update. i would really like to keep up with this story.
^_^





Anonymous- Mon 19 Jun 2006
Since Naraku let one of the two kids free, will she keep her word?

Will Naraku want an award from her for letting one of two kids free?

What will be the reward when he let the other one free?

Wonder if favor or request like that she has to give Naraku huge reward for his "kindness"?

Wonder what Naraku wants of her, if she request for Kagura to be freed?

Doubt he will let Hojo go, but if he comes on to Kagome, he might get himself killed.

Did Kagome's mother meant what she said to Sesshomaru?

What will happen when Kagome's been rescued?

Since Inuyasha works for Naraku, will the clues be right in front of him? If so, how long will it take him to figure out.

At the moment it seems like he want to impress his boss.

Please update ASAP
please send an e-mail to let me know when your fanfics has been update, if it's not to much trouble.

swtdrm01- Mon 19 Jun 2006
I'm excited. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Kuroi Kumori- Mon 19 Jun 2006
Can u please e-mail me when u update???

living_dead_girl- Sun 18 Jun 2006
Ur story is commin around nicley its awesome
i hope they find kagome
Update soon

kathy- Sat 17 Jun 2006
i really like the story please update soon.

wynter89- Sat 17 Jun 2006
Naraku must have huge influence in order for no one to find out he has her. Disgusting what people do to others eh? i hope she isnt broken, and i wonder what will happen when sesshomaru finds her, how they fall in love (if they do?) .

good luck
i hope you update soon

Kuma- Sat 17 Jun 2006
awesome chapter i like it...it explains alot about the characters...its like i can kinda see who this sara girl is by what this chapter is about...keep up the slammin work...

palii- Sat 17 Jun 2006
do you need a beta not to say this is bad but your spelling could use some looking over if you want send me you stuff and i could get it back to you in about a day or so my e-mail is palii26@yahoo.com

Kuma- Fri 16 Jun 2006
i like that how u ended that and made 3 years pass

Kuma- Wed 14 Jun 2006
i like it update soon...its dark and different....sad but what persons life aint

aka. Angel- Sun 28 May 2006
please hurry and make more chapters please, cause i can't wait to hear my fluffy in this fiction .

Megan Consoer- Sun 21 May 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Sailor-Saturn-415- Sun 14 May 2006
Not bad! Keep up the good work.

kathy- Sat 13 May 2006
this is such a good story.. but kagome has to be a bit more tougher. poresita. i feel so bad for her i hope she doesnt get raped. thats horrible thats worse than death. sesshoumaru has to be her first one. not some perverted maniac. i thought naraku was a girl. he looked like one on the anime

rhonda- Sat 13 May 2006
i like the storty

rhonda- Sat 13 May 2006
i like the storty

wynter89- Fri 12 May 2006
i like the way it is turning out. i really enjoy reading it even though it is starting off dark...
good luck
i hope you update soon

kagome15- Fri 12 May 2006
WOW!!!! please update ASAP!!! GREAT STORY but could u make the nxt chapter longer?

KikyoHater101- Fri 12 May 2006
plz don't let him rape her plz don't that would be horrible people like her couldn't just go back to normal after that kinda tramatic torture man come on plz don't plz plzplzplzplzplz
..oh and read my fic if you can babe thanks!!!

KikyoHater101- Fri 12 May 2006
...oh ...my .... oh god don't you dare let Naraku rape her!!
i'll hate you forever thats horrible !!!that will make me cry please just let Sesshy or some one help her or let her protect her self with her powers don't make him rape plz i beg you plz i really i'm pleading on my knees plz* sob * Oh and plz check out my fic plz *smile*
ps:plz don't do it!!!

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