bloodwitch- Mon 28 May 2007
hey i like your story. unlike the other people, i don't mind about the length of the chapter. i just hope that you will get another chapter out soon, i can be a little impatient when it comes to any story that i like. i hope you can come up with the next chapter soon. bye

Lady Asuna- Tue 31 Oct 2006
SHORT! that was only like, 50 word! Me is not happy! >:(.

I'm better, you should make your chapters longer. I hope you update soon.


Lady Asuna

Lady Asuna- Mon 30 Oct 2006
murr...me likey. But instead of 'Tetsiga' it's'Tetsusaiga'. i know it's spelled weird, but thats the way it is, i like it by the way,so i'll read more! ^_^

SesshomaruCrazy- Fri 18 Aug 2006
This seems like it is gonna be an interesting story... I like it so far.. Cant wait for the next chapter.. I like your story idea..
Mari

Twilight Garden- Fri 18 Aug 2006
That last ch. was really short. It is a really good start. update soon

helikesitheymikey!- Thu 17 Aug 2006
WE NEED KAGOME YELLING THAT HER NAME ISN'T WENCH, WHORE, WOMAN, MIKO, GIRL, OR WITCH WITH A "B" IN FRONT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
{sorry for going overboard....I just like it when she does that....}
Hey, how about she makes a subduing collar/rosary for Fluffy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Words of subjection of choice Down {Sit's already taken}, Heel, Let Go! {okay I had thought the 1st power word up months ago, but I read about the 2nd and 3rd words.}

Make chapters longer and make sure that she and Fluffy-sama will have pup(s) sometime in the story!!!
{I love it when Fluffy and Kags have their own cute kids!!! Especially when the kids hug their tails like they're teddy bears!!}

babs- Sat 13 May 2006
Very good start write more so I can see how this story develops.

babs- Sat 13 May 2006
Very good start write more so I can see how this story develops.

katho-chan- Tue 09 May 2006
can you update soon

yusumi katsuki- Tue 09 May 2006
WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! VERY GOOD!

The Chaned Angel- Tue 09 May 2006
i loved the first chapter u should write more of the story

Kawaii_Neko_Youkai- Tue 09 May 2006
Spelling of Inuyasha's sword
Tetsusaiga or Tetsaiga (cuz of 'Tsu')

hey what happens next, will Sesshoumaru do what i think he would do? keep on writing
*cheering in the background

Daphnj- Mon 08 May 2006
a little to short for me, but a good start to a great story!

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