sometimes, i just want to hit kagome for her complete ingorance in all things malicious in content. But i'm not insulting you, just the charater mindset... I like the fic

~zen

ya ya, last review. promise. until you make more chappies. xD haha, hilarious. i, for the friggen first time in all the months, or years, ive read stories, cried for once o.o really sad. usually they live and the entire story completely leaves out tenseiga and all that. either that or sessh doesnt do anything bout it. o well. its how it goes by fate of the author :O seriously awesome story -b 6/5

suugggooiii... I finally remembered Takara was a name i used for one of my pets on some game!! O: Or was it my username... hmm.. Or was it something else? Err... nvm [reads o.o lol]

im confuzzled with, da 08 hundred hours... AND 400 $ WORTH SHOES?! Seriously the most my shoes ever cost was only 64... but then again i hate shopping.. nvm o.o [continues to read] xD

AHHHHHHHH!!! Update soon!! God I love this story, Kagome is fantastic, and this chapter had me laughing m butt off!! Keep up the great work. How is Sesshoumaru going to get her to accept him? How will kagome explain the ring? What happens next?? Please tell me!!! Update!!!

Okay so I just read the latest chapter and though I really like the story I dont' get that chapter, you started it in the middle of a
seen it makes no sense there are no character thoughts to guide you as to what's going on. I had to go back and read three chapters previous just to sort of make sense of it, and i also still had to read chapter 19 six times. it was a blerb just to get it out it seemed there was no though actually put in to it. Sorry if i'm being more honest than you like but there it is I think the story it self is awsome but ch 19 ... well there is much I could say about it, but i'm going to leave this review at that.

Penelope

LMAOOO!! OMGGG >

This is absolutely hilarious.
The singing, the fanfiction addiction, the slip ups.... Wow.

=D I'm hooked.

When you brought up the fanfiction... I imagined Kagome getting deep into a Yaoi story... And Sesshoumaru peering over her shoulder... During a very lemony chapter of it. THE LOOK ON KAGOME's FACEE... Priceless =]

Hehe.. I love your story. =DD

*lol* I love this story and the last chapter...sublime! I laughed a lot! *grin*
I can't wait for your next chapter and the 'teaching of romance' AH!
It will drive me mad to wait! please please update really really soon!!!!

What a pickle.... Update soon :D

LOL I am so glad you updated

wow, DWX. You Have come a long way with your writing. The style, the formatting..I mean it's so easy to read and to follow each paragraph and know where it going. You've gotten Hakudoushi down perfect. He sounds like Naraku but colder and more threatening. Well, Kagome is now married and mated to Sesshoumaru. Can't be all that bad now can it??? Can't wait to see where it goes from here. To think, it was just girls wanting to have fun and now look what thry've gotten themselves into. Be talking to ya soon DMX. Love and hugs...Hope you and the family had a great Christmas and I praying for the most best New Year ever for everyone. God bless and hugs ,kisses and much love,Jen

Your story is something I have never seen before. It was great. I was laughing through most of it. I am just wondering what you are going to do with Kagura and what trouble is she going to stir up. I can't wait for your next update. I hope it will be soon. I also can't wait to see how Kagome is going to get out of this one.

This story is hilarious! Keep up the great work!

man that is such a twist please hurry up and do the next one please

hey i like this story of yours at first when i read it i was mad that you would do that to kagome but then i remember that this is your story not mine and that you can do what ever you want to it and now i like this story espeacily the part when kagome and sesshoumaru have that fight over the shoe i hope the next chapter i even awesomer not like your story isn't i just wanna read more of it

I just started reading you story and I really am enjoying it! I can't wait for the next chapter; keep up the great work! ^_^

Hey Girl, you're back! woohoo! It's been quite a while,ne? Told you before...No Worries...your dedicated readers will always come back. Just don't forget to finish "Dejavu". So, how's the family and all. I know how life can get complicated. You're a survivor though. I'm just so tickled pink to have your fics back in the Fanfic World. Hugs and I'll be looking for more. JEN

Your story is fantastic. Sesshoumaru is portrayed very well. Please update soon.
- Ice

Wow... guess this is one of those stories I read and forgot to review. That so sucked of me. Well here's one for you.

Love your story and I do hope and will appreciate it very very very much if you update like real soon.

Please :-]

Update soon please i'm begging!!

luv ur stories ....please update soon
luv
evilchild

oooo your mean leave us on a clif hanger will you? ha I'll show you I'll come back and I'll read the next chapter... ha... ok that's not really revenge but I'll do it anyway
~nikita

I love it so much I could not stop laughing at some places

lol. Was it just me, or did that chapter have a lot more humor in it than usual :P
very good chapter! i loved it! ^^

Hey, it's been awhile. I've been into alot of fics lately and have just gottten around to re reading this one. The ending of Kikyou was very emotional. I felt sorry for InuYasha having to be left out of her pregnancy because Kikyou feared the family. The lemon was good too but don't take offense, it was a little off in where you introduced it. The flow was interruped when Sesshoumaru was angry at the thought of his brother going against family/youkai laws and Kagome was grieving and angry that he had no sympathy or understanding for K/I's love and loss then he turns quickly to wanting to bed her. Irreguardless, I still like this and when are you going to update "Dejavu"? I think I'll drop you a few notes here and there to get you back to that one. It was such a great fic that cries to be finished. Well I'm off to check my email now and finally go to sleep. Take care my friend and I'm glad your back.TTFN Jen

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uPdATe SoON!! pLEaSE?? tHAnkS!!

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I thought that Sango explained about Takara? Was the situation she explained to Sesshoumaru about Inuyasha instead?

Lol I love this fanfic so much! I hope you are able to update as soon as possible! ^_^

-River

AWWW!!!

Is this a edit? I was getting excited!!! **pouts** UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! **throwing a tantrum**

Irihi-chan

Hey! I loved your story and it is great. I liked how you played with emotions in Kikyo's demise. The only thing that threw me off was the lemon part I think it was too soon, or out of place in this chapter, even though I like it. But oh,well what done is done. So please don't get discouraged and continue writing and updating soon. Bye!

Wow. I haven't read a story in a long time that brought so many emotions to the service, you've almost had me at tears in some parts. Great writing, and please update soon!

OH my GOD!! That was awsome!!!! Please please please!!!! Update soon!!! I have to know what is going to happen next! This is such a great fic. I love how well you have portrayed the charaters! It is soooo GOOD! Keep up the fantastic work!

well that's one way to grieve! I like it! 8D

Aww...how sweet. But he forgot about Takara! I wonder what's going to happen when he remembers. :D Update!

Wow, what about his engagement? What will this mean for their future? What is Kagome to him? a fling? a mistress?
Poor Inu, to lose Kikyo at the happiest moment of his life.
What a great story. Keep up the good work

just giving my opinion on this, but the lemon kinda seemed like it plopped right in there. it just seemed that ok kikyo died and left her son with shippo and kagome dealt with sesshoumaru without really resolving anything about kikyo and inuyasha then it goes to the lemon scene, it's not like I didn't appreciate the lemon, it's just seemed to be just put.
and are kagome and sesshoumaru gonna resolve their issues about his "relationship" with takara and kagura? maybe it'll be explained later, I only want to give you my opinion on this, I hope you don't think this a flame or anything just some constructive critisism

wow...AMAZING chapter! It's sad hotw Kikyo died, but I think you did a great job with it.
=)

Please update soon!

That was great, but now what? What will happen between them? What about Takara?

That was so sad! And poor Kikyou. Can never catch a break. Can't wait until next week's chapter!

hey thats good that you update right after i starte to read.!!

Aww this is a really good story!
please update soon!!!!!!

SNIFF!!!! Gosh, such a sad chapter. I love the story though. Will Kagome stick to his promise to Kikyo and push Sesshomaru aside now that he has decided to go for her? How will Sesshomaru react? And Sir Antenna of the Green Hair? And Jaken? (ha ha, him thinking Kagome is attracted to him, ha ha)

WAHHH!!!!!

I cried so much reading this for Kikyo is one of my favorites charater in Inuyasha. I love the way you did not portray her as a whore. Although she did died in this FF, she still had her wish, to be with Inuyasha, even if it was for the shortest moment.

GREAT CHPT!!! UPDATE!!! What happens when Sesshoumaru finds out? PLEASE UPDATE!!!

Irihi-chan

wow thats an amazingly morbid chapter for a humor/parody fanfic.

That was such a sad ending, but I have a feeling that Inuyasha will be fine and very happy in the end.

Made me cry, I'm in tears!!!!!

OMG!!! LOVE THIS CHAPTER!! MADE ME CRY!!!! A+!!!!!!! PLEASE P{LEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!

Kikyou meant that Kagome should help Shippo and Inuyasha after she was gone. NOt replace her right? And how will Kagome deal with Sesshoumaru? Update soon.

omg...tears...tears for inu yasha n kikyo...that was soooo unexpected.. never saw it coming..can't believe it..anyway great chapter as usual...poor inuyasha..yay for kagome since sesshoumaru have a clue now about kagome...the jaken thing was funny...can't wait for the next chapter...hopefully its kag n sess action...wonder what is going to happen... one can not predict how this fic is going to be like...
thankz for the update n hopefully update soon again...out of curiousity is this fic going to end anytime soon or not and if you have a definite outlined for the story...
amazing fanfic and one of my favourite...very entertaining and enjoyable...it never fails to make me smile or laugh about certain things...

Angel

LUV IT!!!
email me when you update please?

Update soon.!!! Or now!!!!

I'm laughing so hard that I think my ribs are gonna explode. And my mind is in such suspense that I think I'm gonna die!

Yay Rin! So I wonder what they are at Kagome's for... Update soonish. ^_^

I really liked the chapter! Can't wait to read more!

I am enthralled!

Update soon pleases. ^_^

thiz waz rly good i hope yu update soon ppppppplllllllllllllllllzzzzzzz dont let sesshoumaru touch kagura on there vacation

ack! why'd u leave it there? Please update!

Good chapter! I enjoyed it..poor Kaogme though...i can't wait till everything gets worked out with them! ^_^

Oh! thanks for meilaing me.

i look forward to the next update!

I must say your fanfic is awesome! I cant wait to read more!

Excellent story. Keep up the writing!

NOOOOOOO! *sniffs* More?

Really good chapter. Poor Kagome, I hope Sesshoumaru's beast kicks his ass.

Very funny chapters.........thank you for updateing

make kagome break it up n make kagome resign n disappear..... make seshh suffer!!!!

Gasps! Sesshoumaru you f-ing bastard! Grr... You just want to bit him don't you? What a bad puppy...

Kagome should totally 'tell Takara' and make her break off the engagement.

Sesshoumaru always seems to push people away. What a baka, ne?

Great job on the chapter. I totally LOVE this story! It's in my favourites!

Please update as soon as you can!

Ja Mata Ne!

-[Ashley x3]

Well as his go between. Kagome would have surely notified Takera that he left for a business trip with Kagura on his arm. He did tell kagura he would not sleep with her but what is he up to. Surely Takera can reject his suit since they have not been intimate. It didn't sound like he thought of that. Next chapter should be interesting. Takera can technically disappear from the picture after rejecting him. Freeing Kagome from being two people. But still poor Kagome. But I have a feeling Menoumaru will keep showing up and I'm not sure who he will drive up the wall more.lol

wow..can't believed it...this fic is getting good everytime...wow..i luv ithis fic...one of my fav fic ever...wow..at first when u did not update i was like nooooo its happening the no show not ending the fic thing is happening again. .. i am glad you decided to continue this fic even after its copied by someone...thanks for the update and keep them coming...lol..this fic is soooo funny and it always makes me smile....moth taiyoukai is the evil dude soo far and as usual kagura the bitch...i think i said too much..
loooooooove this fic
can't wait for the next one to be up!!!
n i will be doing the happy dance!!

Engel

Love this chapter!!! please hurry up and right another one!!! i think it would be so funny if Kagome turned into Takar and appeared at the airport when Kaguar and Sesshomaru came back...lol Keep up the AMAZING work!

Dude, Kagome, as Takara, should reject Sesshoumaru for that stunt with Kagura. For real.

Nicy written chpt!! UPDATE SOON!!!!

Well, as usually, I loved it. Although...(raises fist in front of her face) that fucking Sesshomaru MUST pay dearly for beign such a jackass. I hope Kagome makes him pay through Takara and I hope she becomes as cold as ice towards him and dates the moth yukai (I don't remember his name).

Is Kagura going on the trip with him?

Poor Kaogme just keeps digging herself in deeper and deeper! LOL!

Update really soon. Ja ne

HI! wow, i love your story. quite intriguing!
I am very interested in seeing how all of this goes down...i feel so bad for kagome! hahah! Well, if it isn't a bother, could you please email me when you update? it'd be greatly appreciated! ^_^

once again FANTASTIC chapter!

=D

WOOOT!!! I love this story!!! Its so great and I am really thrilled that you have updated!!! Pleaseeee DO so again soon!!! This story is too good and I really and hoenstly can not wait to see what is going to happen next!

I F'KIN love your story!!! lol keep up the good work

Wow!!! I love the story two tai youkai after one little ol' Kagome... How ironic is it that Kagome finds herself in such situations.
I wonder if Sesshoumaru knows about the Tama or the plot that his father has against him. I believe Kagome is torn between loving and knowing that she is wanted only for being an availible female. Well update soon I enjoyed the laughs.

Love your storys!

GAHHHHH! This story is great! please update soon i'm going crazy thinking of what will happen next.

Oh my gosh! You mean, mean person. I thought the chapter was really really long, just to see that you posted the story twice... Anyways great story and keep up the good work! ps. Update a.s.a.p. Arigato and Bye!

I luff this story!! Update ASAP please!!

Thank you for updating. I had really missed your story, but I waited patiently like any loyal reader would. Please update soon.

You evil naughty person!! I was excited to see that the chapter was sooooo long but as I saw it was just added twice... T.T anyway great chapter!! Hope to see an update soon!!

thank goodness you're back!!! I was in suspense. Now it's happened again. When Sesshoumaru finds out about who Takara really is he's not going to be happy and he'll say things that will probably make me cry!! Update again soon.

I realy loved this story it was excellent please im begging u pleeeeeeease continue the story dont stop n quit like other authors do please

Please update soon! =)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This is fabulous! Can't wait to see what more you come up with. =)

nooo clifffy hanger! Great plot twist, lookiing foreward to the next installment!

hahaha. Poor Kagome. She's in deep trouble now. ^_^ Keep writing.

Update soon please!......PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!!?

update this story is very good. I was all leaning into my computer screen as i read. I swear i am going blind.

Ohhhhh MAN I was hoping to read more. This is such an amazing story! Please update soon

I am so loving your stories. This last chapter had me in stitches. What is Kagome gonna do now. BIG trouble lies ahead. I can't wait for the next chapter. I am your loyal fan. Please keep writing. You're getting better with each new story. Can't wait for more of Dejavu. That one got me hooked on your talent in the first place! Oh yeah, InuYasha is just about at the end of it's series here in the US. We have all 4 movies too.

That was sooo good!!!! plz update soon!!!!

Man, this is getting so good! I'm hoping the spell wears off-hehe

I love it. Interesting realtionships goin on. Mor kagome ans sessh and less sessh and tak.

That had to be the coolest chapter, EVER! Kagome can be such a ditz huh? lol I can't wait to see how that works out for her and I can't wait for the next update! :D

wow, i love this story please update soon...

hahahaha. That was pretty funny. Yeah now Sesshoumaru has competition for Kagome.

Next chapter please! Loving the idea of it well wirtten and orginal plot line!

PUH-LEESE!

hurry and update!

love ya!

Another wonderful chapter. I love how you made him lose control & still stayed close to his character. It was great. Can't wait for the next chapter.

What a dance and kiss! Nice chapter! I'm looking forward for the next one. They were so close to mating! Can't wait.

hi-
Excellent fic. I like the way you portrayed Sesshomaru....it's so like him to say things like that...and Kagome as well.....Keep up the good work...

ja!

Silk_worm

Awesome chapter. I feel so sorry for Kagome. PLease update soon.

OMG i love this story, i can't wait tell you update. Please do it sson, that was such a cliffhanger. This a great story, i love fanfictions, just like Kagome. LOL. please update soon. i can;t wait
Ja Ne

hmmmmm a whole month plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luv your story

I love it! I was laughing my you know what off. My sides still hurt. Please update soon.

Ja ne

Another fun chapter! Hope the next one comes out really soon. I'll be waiting for a spectalur job as always! Forever a My Humps Fan...Fan (again)

wow love at first sight........ sort of..........anyways it was cute.

this story is totally awsome its got a really cool twist

ohhhh! Fluffy-sama is getting closer to our human Kags. I like the twist. ^.^
But how will she play both herself and Takara in this little game of hers?
Update soon^^

please update sooon or just email me hen u update, i luv ur story


wuv pooh

Hilarious, seemed a little pushed, but love it. Want to read another chapter soon!

i swear that was the funniest thing i've ever read in my entire life!!! Jakotsu and sango were the funniest!! lolz. I can't wait till you update!!

Toodles!!

Much Love, PunkrockerX

LOL!! This is way to funny!!! you have to updatesoon!!

omg.. wow this story is so good. and so many stuff are happening i really love it and want you to update ASAP!!!!! wow im really curious in knowing where this story is going to end up.

halarious you should really updaste soon!

I love your story!!! I really hope you update soon! When you update, could you email me? Thanks~

this chapter was halarious. I have a friend named Takara but her name is spelled with a C instead of an K

Hahahaha this chapter is good. Can't wait for the next one to come out! Thanks for mentioning me the top...I appreciate it. ^-^ BYE!

o..m..f..g... THIS IS EFFING FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i was laughing so hard my turtles stared at me...wooo.....welllllllllllll......good job. lol

OMFG this is hilarious i was laughing my head off especially the last chapter. Very original i luv it hope there's another chappie up soon!

i really like your story your useing my real name in it. YEA!!! could you write more please i really like it a lot

update soon it was great

LOL I can stop laughing! I love this story you must update as soon as you have time I hope you get over the flu thingy!
Goddess

That was just *rofl* illicitly funny!!
I just LOVE Jakotsu!
'It's raining men' huh? XDDDD

Schöne Grüße^^

I think this story has a really good idea and plot so far! Its really creative and interesting. I check for updates everyday cuz I can't wait for the next chapter! My only request is that you write longer chapters...and faster! ^.^ Your Fan

LOL This story is quite entertaining. I laugh to myself while I am reading it and get the weirdest stares from my family. Lol. Hmm, I wonder how Kagome is going to get herself out of this mess. I just can't wait to see how this works out. I like the way you incorporated the Shikon no Tama in this fanfic. It was a very unique idea and a good one to boot. Keep up the good work and I cannot wait to read more.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow! I've got to say that this is one of the most interesting fics that i've read so far on this site. I love how U incorporate the shikon jewel into it in such a unique way. can't wait to read what happens next and keep up the good work:P

Go, Go, Go!
The story is developing so..so...intense! OMG, can't wait to see how is Kagome pulling out of this mess!!
Update!!!!

you!! takara is my name so i am very happy that someone decided to finally use that name well anyways contiue with the friggin' story it is just getting good or better well whatever that isnt the point so finish teh story it is soo funny too

SQUEAL!!!! OMG this is great. I wanna see Kagome getting the revenge she soooo desires. One question, is Kagome gonna be as a youkai permanently later on???

i love it its really great need more chapters

comming along extreanky well ^_^ keep it up. i can wait to read the next chappi. till next time, mika luffs ya ^_~

sesshysbabydoll@yahoo.com

I really like this you must update soon. I like the fact that Kagome is no shrinking violet and that she says whats on her mind.

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kagome is a demon, a demon! Cool. ^_^

ooh boy...Kagome sees the real Sesshoumaru, and if I were her, I would already be doubting the plan...But this is amazing! Please update soon!

cool beans.... good fanfic... man Sesshomaru is going to be so pissed when he finds out that Takara is Kagome, right? Anyway I like this story so until next time

This is really good! Update!

This is really good! Update!

This is really good! Update!

i like it alot update soon

OoOoOoO....please write more chapters!

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hmph...I hope Sesshoumaru will feel some real emotional pain....stupid honor...GO KAGOME! I just love her little comebacks =^.^= very amusing, lol. Hope the pregnancy works out well...when is Kagome going to use the "Shikon No Tama" sphere thingy??/ some action and fluff soon please!

Oh, here comes Johnny, I mean of course the plot thickens XDDD
Nice chappie, wouldn't have minded, were it to be longer ^.^

Schöne Grüße

Oooooh, this is sooo funny!
Me likes ^O^ ! How about you guys? ***looks in the audience***
**the mob agrees**: "We want more! We want more! We want more!

'til next time,
Ja ne

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?