I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

heyy.......

omg CLIFF HANGER!!

can you please tell me when you'll be putting up your next chapter...
i'm so into it...!!!!! haha.......

it's really REALLY good!

keep it up!!


xxxxx jaderinx0x

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some chapters?

OH MY GOSH! I STOPPED ON THE FRICKEN 12th CHAPTER AND KNOW I JUST READ THIS AND IT IS AWSOME!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE I LOVE IT!!! AHHHH!!!!

WHOLY FRICKEN CRAP! THIS IS THE BEST FF I HAVE EVER READ!!! OMG!!!! YOU HAVE HAVE HAVE TO WRITE MORE!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!!!!!!!!! A cliffy?!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The Lemon wasn't that bad for a first timer. I'm loving the story and can't wait for you to update!

I really really really really really really reeeeeaaaaaallllllllyyyy like this story. Could you put me on your list when you update or whatever? I want to know what happens next. I beg you. *cute eyes* Pwetty Pwease with a cherry on top? *blink blink*

I really really really really really really reeeeeaaaaaallllllllyyyy like this story. Could you put me on your list when you update or whatever? I want to know what happens next. I beg you. *cute eyes* Pwetty Pwease with a cherry on top? *blink blink*

Okay....Love story, when is the next chapter coming out...HURRY, HURRY, HURRY.... PLEASSSSEEEE!!!!
Rhonda

If I haven't reviewed already, then here it is! I loved it, it was pretty good for a first try.

I just hope that there is more to come soon, I can't wait to see what happens between fluffy and Inu Koro!

Till then, Ja!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Love it. Want to know what happen's please contiune.

Hiyas!!!!
I liek this story so very so very very much!! ^_^
The characters thoughts and developments... and actions most of all xD wu wu!!!![don't mind me, I know I'm wired lol ;j] Nice lemon by the way, it didn't look to be your first, congrats congrats lots of congrats to you!!! ^.^
I'm very intrigued about Naraku's actions, and even though I'm making my own (kinda wired) ideas I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU HAVE PLANED!!!! xD
And things are getting very soup(opera-drama-whatever) with Inuyasha's suden apperanace... [insert long-unnesesray-bothersome-evil laugh] xD [cough cough] **grinns**
Anyway... it's 3 a.m. , and my brain cells are overdone, I've been reading (and worshipping) this magnificent story, along side your amazing writting skills, and if I don't leave soon, I'm like going to be in big troubles, ther's already an electric storm aoutside o.O
So, hope see you soon with another chapter for this fantastic story ;D
Ja Ne

well, if that really is your first lemon, then you seem to have a knack for it. very sensual, and not too trashy, just the right combination. (don't ask me how i know, just trust me ^_^)

I loved it so much!!!!!! I have been reading this for 3 days in a row!!! ( I bet my family thinks I am weird for sitting in front of a lap top giggling and lmao all the time haha) Your in nursing school right? My sister just graduated 2 weeks ago! =)

great story. put me on the update list. But please no more cliffhangers!!!
i didn't expect you to turn Kagome into a typical virgin, not after the way you made her demon act. it clashed in my mind. But it was a really good story. bye bye.

*blushes* that was REALLY good...there better be another one...i also liked ur fight scene between kags and sess...god i cant wait to see what inu-ass has to say about them...anyway...i cant wait for your next update!!!!!!!!!!!

wow! i luv it please please update sooon thanx luv it cant wait for the next chapter

I loved it! Please update soon because I want to know what happens next. Also I'm curiuos as to what the story was that Gramps told her and about how she knew his future? What did that mean? That Sess was the one that used his fang on the sword with his mate? So that would mean that Kagome's fang was also used, but that would mean she dies. Oh, please don't do that. I want them to live happily ever after.

wow! *swoons* that was really good...and first time too!! i love your story so far and can't wait to read more. ahh!!...cliff hanger!!

'Fans self' Whew!! Wow!! That was awesome!! First Lemon you say... And Naraku with the 'Sweet & Innocent' act. I can't wait, Plz continue

now I really wasn't expecting you to pai up Kohaku & Kagura. out of all of the weird pairings I've seen, this is one of the weirdest one I've ever seen. but overall this story is pretty cool :D

Hmm. I really liked this story in the beginning, but now it has become a bit too clichee. I mean, many of your plot twist are the ones that have been used a way too many times. Though the part you made Kagome dress Sesshoumaru as Sephiroth, I must admit that I truly cracked. It was kinda funny. You have a wonderful way of telling stories, and I even like your OC characters, but your canon characters are quite much out of character. I don't mean this is a bad way, but you haven't quite catched their personas. Now that I have already critiziced this much, I can very well continue. In the few last chapters you have made an own "dialogue" at the end of chapter. I find it quite childish, though many use it.

You have also made few mistakes. Not bad ones, but enough to make this story a tad bit AU.
a) Sesshoumaru is immune to all poisons, so that's why Kikyo's arrown couldn't really have killed him. Well.. it could also be that manga and anime both lies about the fact...
b)That fluffy boa.. Yeah yeah. Many say that it is a tail... but that isn't quite possible. I mean, you can see many times the BOTH ends of it at the same time..
c)About that Crescent moon on Kagome's brow. In the serie it is suggested to be a unique trait in Sesshoumaru's mother's bloodline. So, that it would suddenly appear on Kagome's brow would mean that Kagome is related to Sesshoumaru.

Well.. I'm sure that there are more but I just can't remember. Anyways. I don't say that you should change those things in your story. No, it's fine the way it is. I hope you will finish it. :P But I hope that in your next fanfics you put those little pointers behind your ear. :D

Good writing to you and merry christmas.

I had to skip through the teasing part, it was geting repetative.. Not too much, just aobut 3 or 4 paragraphs. .I skimmed them.. The making love scene was very nice! I love how you expressed thier deep emotional bindings to one another.

I feel so bad for Kira! You better make it up to her... Well it looks like you have that in the makings ina way. Anyways, type atcha later!

~Ruthie

This has got to be one of my favorite unfinished Kag/Sess fics so far. I hope you come out with the next chapter soon!

PS - You keep using the word 'to' in places where it should be 'too'. Like, its too hot. Try to find and change those. Also, where they looked at Kiras back, someone said 'this one does not bare the spider on her back' or something along those lines, and you used the wrong word. Bear, in that sentence, not bare. Bare is like bare skin, bear as in to bear weapons.

Please do answer me, cause I like talking to authors who happen to come up with GOOD fanfics.

Ooh, also, if you like to read Inu/YuYu/Yugi fics, you might want to look up Jaxxia7 on www.mediaminer.org She's really great and has written so much that it takes days to finish for someone who isnt as bookwormy as I am. Be forewarned, tho, as she writes lemons, plenty of them, and some are yaoi. ^-^ :--Saeko

great job.....

FINALLY!!!!! how many times did i read this in the beginning?????

but it's up and delicious!!!

not overdoen and naught not smutty.
good job!!!

Ok, just on the spur of the moment I decided to read your fic and see what it was like, and believe me, I'm damn glad I did! I'm loving the story, and how you've handled all the characters! I enjoy reading anything that has Sesshoumaru and Kagome hooking up, and almost all of those fics include the final downfall of Naraku, but the way you've handled everything is above and beyond what I've ever seen.

Kudos for a completely new and innovative idea on how to handle Naraku, and I can't wait to see more.

And since this is a Single Spark, I'm also loving how you've handled Kagome and Sesshoumaru's characterizations as well.

Hello I just read your first chapter and I like it and I am now on to reading your second chapter. Keep up the great work on this story.

The characters are so very much Out of Character, that I'm honestly surprised I've read it to the last updated chapter. ^_^ But that's not at all saying it's an unpleasing story. I've enjoyed reading it, even with the characters out of their original character - its just that normally I don't read a story completely through, if they're like that.
It's a well done story hun, I hope that you continue to write on it, I'm looking forward to seeing how things turn out. Especially since Kagome and Sesshoumaru have seemed to come to the apex of their stubborness and sucomed to their desires. ::chuckles grinning:: Take care now! Blessed Be in all your writing endevors! JA!

Bout time you updated.. Fighting scenes turned sex scenes are always hot. Anyways Write more! Its good!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

lurve the samurai champloo bit at the end! update soon!

You're a tease...
*bursts into tears*

Nice fic, look forward to reading more soon! (¬_¬; )

i love the new chappie! and the use of Samurai Champloo, AWESOME!!!! plz write more! and cutting off right before the lemon, genius, pure genius. oh and i was thinking, it would be cool if Jin and Sesshomaru had a conversation. u know about stuff. -_- well! keep the awesomeness coming! hopefully Sess gets some in the next chapter! lol! ^_^ laterz!

~DemonGirl14~

What's up Sariel! I lurve this story! Well written. Oh and you won't have to worry about getting demon Kagome cause I'll kick their asses!!! Buhahaha!!! Noone messes with my reviewers!!! NOBODY!!!!

Yes I am wierd. Very weird. BUT I still love this story! Update soon! Ja!

please write more soon you havent updated in awhile