Hey !! I really like this story. Its got potential. However, as an avid fan fic reader and writer i must complain. When are you going to update this piece?? Is it discontinoued? If so, you should mention it. Plus your 5th chapter is a repeat of the 4th.
Well looking forward to the next chapter. *Hopefully*
Emily M- Mon 28 May 2007
| I really like your story but i have stoped myself from reading your chapter 3 because I believe that you have chapter 4 in chapter 3's place and chapter 4 is the same as chapter 3 aka you have chapter 4 on there twice and no chapter 3. I want to know what kagome tells her mom and im going to guess that that was the start of chapter 3. Please fix it, im dieing to know what was in chapter 3!
| this was very nice cant wait for an update
Satsuki Taisho- Tue 02 Jan 2007
Really nice fic...I almost passed over it when looking, but when I decided to read it...I LOVED it!
will you please e-mail me with reviews? Thx!!
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