| Amazing i just keep reading it over and over again waiting for the new chapter to pop up everytime i read it keeps getting better Great storyline can't wait for the new chapter ^_^
Yummyness- Tue 02 Oct 2007
| update plz and soon
Yummyness- Tue 11 Sep 2007
| Plz update soon
Yummyness- Tue 11 Sep 2007
| Plz update soon
indi_t- Thu 29 Mar 2007
| pppppppllllzzzzzzzzzz update....i come back here HOPING for one.. i'm begging u!
| that was awesome , iv read some really good fanfic but that was was great i cannt wait to read the next part^_^
I really like this chapter.. I hope that Sesshomaru gets the chance to kick some ass..
I really enjoy this story it is very well written and has a good storyline too it..
Keep up the good work and hurry and update plz..
Your leaving me hanging here.. LOL..
Take Care
Mari
clover_babe- Sat 03 Feb 2007
love it!
update soon please!
| Yay so happy that you updated. I want to see Naraku suffer for his crimes. I like what happened to Kikyo she deserved it. Please update soon.
kat- Thu 14 Dec 2006
| loved it cant wait for the next chapters
Brandie- Thu 14 Dec 2006
| I read the newest chapter and I really liked it and can't wait to read the rest of this story
Brandie- Thu 14 Dec 2006
| I read the newest chapter and I really liked it and can't wait to read the rest of this story
Brandie- Thu 14 Dec 2006
| I read the newest chapter and I really liked it and can't wait to read the rest of this story
Brandie- Thu 14 Dec 2006
| I read the newest chapter and I really liked it and can't wait to read the rest of this story
| loved it.... great job
swtdrm01- Wed 13 Dec 2006
| I loved the new chapter. Please do not take so long to update again. I reallllllly want to know what happens next, especially with Hiten and Hakkudoshi. Will Kagome become pregnant again? And most importantly, the demise of Naraku.
Brandie- Sat 02 Dec 2006
| I read the newest chapter and can't wait to read the next
ADSV- Fri 17 Nov 2006
| I enjoyed this story the first time I saw it posted. So, when I saw it again, I just had to revisit this story. I like how Kagome isn't afraid to fight, and how she kicks Naraku's tail (and breaks his bones). I was hoping there would be an updated chapter, but I can wait.
babygirl- Fri 17 Nov 2006
| Great chap. I can't wait till the next one. i do hope that it's soon.
Fluffy-kins- Fri 17 Nov 2006
| D: Whoa! Kagome kicked some major ass!! :D can't wait for the next chapter! Hopefully that one will have some explosions and a motor boat!! >:D~~ Update soon!
Indi_t- Tue 14 Nov 2006
| jeez, that was intense.....but the fight scene reminded me of that Jennifer lopez movie "Enough", but nonetheless, that was fantastic! I've been following this fic from the begining, and u have never disappointed me.
nesa- Sun 24 Sep 2006
| IT WAS FREAKIN GOOD! I STARTED TO CRY WHEN THEY WERE ATTACKING KAGOME! PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE THIS STORY I LOVE IT SOOOOOOO MUCH.
Tsuki Doriimaa- Sun 20 Aug 2006
| I love this fic, I really do. It's awesome, sweet and packs a wild punch! ^__^ Only downside I see is you need to edit it better, or have someone beta it for you, that's all. There's some errors in there, but it hasn't deminished the effects of thestory at all it's still a great one. You've done an awesome job of writing on it. I hope you continue to do so! Please write more as soon as your able! heh heh Blessed Be in your writings hun! JA!
ADSV- Thu 03 Aug 2006
I'm not usually into "dancer" fictions, but this one is quite interesting on the other side of the dance floor.
Oh, and can I say, I love Kagome kicking the crap out of Naraku, unaided! Not something authors usually put in stories. Quite refreshing.
And the part about Kikyo being a whore, funny. Poor Inu, glad he's found someone else.
Kagura being a nice person? I like it. I like how it's Kagome's influence that has an effect on her.
Oh, and the afternoon delight that the mansion has to hear. I was rolling over that! Sailor language, hehehe. Praying for a child. funny. And Sesshy telling Rin the added part was wonderful!
Keep up the good work!
Inu_Twins- Thu 03 Aug 2006
| YAY!!! That was a wonderful chapter!!! Sessh should have allowed her to finsh Naraku off!!! Plz Update ASAP!!! This is really good
cherry- Thu 03 Aug 2006
| OH man this chapter was GREAT!!!!!!! Sooo much action. GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
crow- Wed 02 Aug 2006
| BUAHAHA! kagome kicked naraku's ass good!!! im glad she didn't become a sobbing mess. blah! no one likes that... anyway, awesome chapter, post the next one soon!
alissa- Tue 01 Aug 2006
| i love the story! please write more!
swtdrm01- Tue 01 Aug 2006
| I love it! When will the next chapter be up?
Review of ch. 14
WHAT A CHAPTER! I couldn't believe they lost the baby! How tragic! I was so sad for them. I loved the fact the Kagome kicked Naraku's ass! What a fight-I'm only sorry she didn't purified that bastard. I love how strong she is that she fought for herself. I also like the budding romance between Kagura and Inuyasha. What a fight! I can't stop thinking about it. When she was kicking his ass and expressed her sentiments of loss, grief and anger-I was so proud of her! I can't wait until to see what Sesshoumaru going to do. GREAT chapter. Good lord! Please update soon.
| That was a fucking great fighting scene. I can't wait for the next one oh and the ones for Hiten and especially Hakudoushi. Update soon!
bluemoon_175- Tue 01 Aug 2006
| Oh I love this story so PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.
blackrosewitch- Tue 01 Aug 2006
| it was great i never really would have expected kagome to go and kick naraku's ass but it was of the chain good job i look forward to reading more of you fics.
| I love the fact that you made Kagome kick ass. She should have killed him. I just loved this chapter. Update soon
Hanyou Kagome- Tue 01 Aug 2006
| WOOHOO GO KAGOME KICK THE BASTARDS ASS TO HELL AND BACK!!!!!!!!!!!! damn i wish she had finished him but sess is right it is his place to avenge what happened but kagz was doing a damn good job. UPDATE SOON
Kyo-Chan-Lover- Tue 01 Aug 2006
| Wow the last chapter kicked ass!!! Finally, a fic where Kagome physically beats Naraku's ass!!! I Love it!! It has a great plot. Update A.S.A.P
luna- Tue 25 Jul 2006
I think sango's baby should be a girl so cagome could shove the happiness of having a girl into sess fave so she could be like "see how nice a girl would be.
i suck at reviewing but het it would be fun to see sess roll his eyes at that info
Review of chapter 13
I'm so glad you updated:) Very good chapter. I like the whole family involvement. I loved what Sesshoumaru did with the pink teddy-that was an awesome idea.
swtdrm01- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| I can't wait to see more of this great story. Update soon!
| Awesome I just loved, Are Inuyasha and Kagura going to end up together. Please update soon,
| Wow! That was some ride. What stands out for me are the funny comment made by Rin about praying to heaven for a baby, the love makiing between Kagome and Ses...come to think about it-the whole chapter was well told. Great Job!!
linda- Thu 18 May 2006
| Well worth the wait. Excellent update. Hope you update soon.
Jasmine- Fri 12 May 2006
| this is good what is next?
IcePrincess001- Thu 11 May 2006
| I love this story so far but now i wonder why sesshomaru would try to get kagome pregnant, anyways its a great story everyday i check to see if you update, please continue it i love it whenever i sign it it'll go into my favorites.
| Very good plot. A lot of different things you have in here. It is always interesting to see how many interested guys are after Kagome...lol
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