| Looks good!! Ok, Where's the rest? ^_^ please update soon! ^_^
cavina- Mon 22 Jan 2007
| So what's your excuse for them saying Western in original Japanese, and in the manga?
mezau- Wed 12 Jul 2006
| It is the western lands plain and simple. You really need to go through this and EDIT it big time. There are spelling errors, missing punctuation and the story just does not flow. If you did edit and clean things up while organizing your ideas, the rating just MIGHT go up a bit.
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