Reviews for Elements by Artemisgirl

KagomeFreak 28- Sat 05 Apr 2008
this is awesome ! please up-dsate very soon !!!!!!!!

KagomeFreak 28- Fri 04 Apr 2008
Go Kagome-Sama !!!!!!!!!

she's so freaking kick -ass !
thank you very much , the story is very , very good !

Diana- Mon 17 Mar 2008
I absolutely love your Kagome/Sesshoumaru pairing in 'Elements'. You are a fantastic writer. I was looking to find it in another fan-fic website and I did (it had more chapters there).I really hope you get to finish it.

(~Ahem~ and my e-mail above was made a really long time ago -_-' )

Anyway, keep up the good work, consider me a fan.

sillya- Fri 30 Nov 2007
i like it!!!!!!!!!!!!! tbc

Amanda- Sun 28 Oct 2007
Update?

3 =]

salsteve- Mon 04 Jun 2007
ZOMG I LOVE YOUR STORY. It's wonderful. And with Mujitsu as your beta reader, you really can't go wrong.

j.curl- Sun 01 Apr 2007
Just thought I'd point out your use of Neitzsche in this chapter. Madness in love, reason in madness: one of my fave quotes from him.

Kanazawa- Tue 20 Mar 2007
WOW!! Just wow!! This is a beautiful, wonderful story!! You have such a descriptive way of describing each scene. But, more than that, your sense for plot and a story is second to none!! I can definitely see why this story has received awards. If I had an award, I give it to you too!! Great job. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Shannon- Thu 15 Feb 2007
excellent fanfic i can't wait for the rest so keep writing.

Alandrias- Wed 14 Feb 2007
ohhhhh this is GOOD.... youo need to update >. lol

Ray_hearts_fluffy- Mon 05 Feb 2007
Hey! Why haven't you updated your stouy yet? This is one of my favorite stories and I've been waiting almost half a year for you to update! So, unless your sick, dead, diying, or your computer is broken... please update soon... Thank you sooooo much! - Your #1 fan, Ray_hearts_fluffy

Ray_hearts_fluffy- Mon 05 Feb 2007
Hey! Why haven't you updated your stouy yet? This is one of my favorite stories and I've been waiting almost half a year for you to update! So, unless your sick, dead, diying, or your computer is broken... please update soon... Thank you sooooo much! - You #1 fan, Ray_hearts_fluffy

orchid- Wed 17 Jan 2007
update update update please

felicia- Mon 08 Jan 2007
i love this story sooooooooooo much and i was wondering if you were going to update it. i havent seen a chapter in a while and i would love it if you would continue it please

Jenna- Mon 08 Jan 2007
wowwow i love love love this story and it is so great i really want to see all of the others in the group learn to control their elements to! that would be great. i want to see sango use water that would be awsome, its just so her!

Jenna- Mon 08 Jan 2007
wowwow i love love love this story and it is so great i really want to see all of the others in the group learn to control their elements to! that would be great. i want to see sango use water that would be awsome, its just so her!

Jenna- Mon 08 Jan 2007
wowwow i love love love this story and it is so great i really want to see all of the others in the group learn to control their elements to! that would be great. i want to see sango use water that would be awsome, its just so her!

Nilee1- Wed 29 Nov 2006
I'm late for school, but I couldn't move until I'd read all the chapters. I love this story; please update soon.

Meku- Sat 28 Oct 2006
lol I enjoyed this chapter :D
One funny little thing I knowticed was when rin tells sesshy that jaken cooks her and jaken fish. lol it sounded like jaken cooked rin the first time i look at it XD

Meku- Sat 28 Oct 2006
lol I enjoyed this chapter :D
One funny little thing I knowticed was when rin tells sesshy that jaken cooks her and jaken fish. lol it sounded like jaken cooked rin the first time i look at it XD

Jennifer Maria Mustang- Thu 12 Oct 2006
I love it!! Sesshou finally got it! Please update soon!

nickel- Mon 09 Oct 2006
I loved it!! I just finished reading 'Elements' for the first time, and was shocked that I hadn't read such a wonderful piece of fanfiction until now. The way Kagome and Sesshoumaru interact is pleasing on a level rarely seen- at least when you're looking for it as I am. I'd very much like to read the next chapter, and the next.. which you might already be working on, if I were to think positively. Please update.. if only for the peace of your readers' minds.

orchid- Fri 06 Oct 2006
please update update update

dana jean- Mon 04 Sep 2006
more, please

Silver Drache- Mon 28 Aug 2006
Amazing, absolutly astounding. While there have been times during this story that I believe Kagome and Sesshomaru are out of character, this chapter destroys any care for that. This was amazingly well written, and I am just awestruck at the gift you have for writing. The way you explained earth was fabulous, and the way Sesshomaru finally gasped it was even more amazing. Besides the out of characterness of the story, I must say that this is one of the best I have read in a very long time.

Flightoffancy- Sun 27 Aug 2006
I was very amazed at this story and its originality. You are very clever and your set up and research of your characters is stunning. You haven;t made Kagome invincible but made her find her own way and make herself stronger. Ofcourse she will need Sesshomaru's help in control, who else?

It is not so surprising that Rin figured it out first as children are more open to the supposed impossible things in life but Sessh got it just in the nick of time. Yes I really liked the ending of this chapter.

I first read part of this story when there were only a few chapters and I lost track of it (I forgot to write the title down). I am really glad I found it again. Can't wait til the next chapter. Til next time, Deb.

Vulcana- Wed 23 Aug 2006
This was REALLY good. I rather enjoyed how Sesshoumaru learned the earth element and what he did with it.
Please keep up the good work.

Unseen Watcher- Sat 19 Aug 2006
I think you're doing a great job on his personality....have I already told you this on FF.net? Anyway, thanks. He's a dominant male. The urge to protect is something that is built into him for the good of his pack. Too bad he didn't realize that. ^_^

Destiny- Thu 17 Aug 2006
wow this is really,really good!!!!!!!! Please continue!!!!!!!!!

michy- Tue 08 Aug 2006
wow, it's must've been amazing for sesshomaru to feel that & finally understand it! he was amazed himself, which is quite funny on some level. it was cool how all the pieces seemed to fit together & then he just got it.rin was also very funny, & well, herself. i can't wait to see hich element he learns next, or how kagome learns how to control er emotions, actually i'm just lookin forward to whatever the next chapter has in store. this chapter was great!

kagsbigfan- Tue 08 Aug 2006
I really loved it. I actually agree that Kagome is/was an earth element because she can't help who she cares about. Update soon!

WiccanMethuselah- Tue 08 Aug 2006
I am in AWE of your writing ... I have enjoyed watching this fic develop, and you have developed it as it should be, slowly, masterfully, carefully ... with just the right amount of OOC-ness and mix of character interplay. I can HARDLY wait to see where you take this from here - the possibilities are practically endless. This fic is one of the more original ones I've read lately and promises to be QUITE intriguing as it progresses. Thanks so much for sharing this with the rest of us Kag/Sess fans ... and for a wonderful morning of reading!! :) ~~Wiccan~~

Solaira- Tue 08 Aug 2006
This is such a cool story. I really love this. I find it interesting that when Sesshomaru findly understands the Earth, he also learns a little bit more about himself. Oh man, I can just see it, Rin growing giant flowers every where she goes now instead of picking every flower she comes across.

Loving.You.Is.The.Price.I.Pay- Tue 08 Aug 2006
OMG! you have to update soon. This story is one of the BEST i have ever read on a-single-spark!! you managed to keep sesshomaru IC but made him seem more approacable and more likely to fall in love and understand what kagome is trying to teach him. YOU ROCK! pllleeeeeeaaaaase update soon!!!!!!

bluemoon_175- Mon 07 Aug 2006
This story is so fantastic I can't wait to read more UPDATE ASAP PLEASE.

bluemoon_175- Mon 07 Aug 2006
This story is so fantastic I can't wait to you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE.

Sankontesou- Mon 07 Aug 2006
yay!! go Sesshy!!
This story is super great!! update again soon please

Sasori-sama- Mon 07 Aug 2006
Yay! YOu inally updated, i've been waiting for ages! That was a really good chapter, updat sooner this time, ne?

Sasori

felicia- Tue 01 Aug 2006
i love the story. wanted to know if you are goinf to write any more chapters

sesshsmate101- Mon 31 Jul 2006
man! this storyis awesome!

sesshsmate101- Mon 31 Jul 2006
i bet i know sessh's plan!! wellmaybe i dont..ill just have to find out...

michy- Mon 31 Jul 2006
wow, this story is really thought out well. i hope you haven't stopped writing it as it is really quite amazing. how you write human & demon thoughts & emotions is fasinating & amazing. please know i've throughly enjoyed your story and have it in my top 10 (i've read A LOT of stories)

danajean- Sun 30 Jul 2006
fantastic. seriously, good-mo-freaking-story man! update. por favor, i really want to see how this ends up.

Scruffy Wolf- Sun 23 Jul 2006
WHY WON'T YOU UPDATE!!!!!!! I LOVE this story, and I don't want to stop reading it, but you aren't updating. If you have writer's block, or are just too busy, you could at least leave an author's note explaining why you haven't updated, and if/when we can expect another chapter. Please, this is too good a story to not finish.

Tea Orbitani- Mon 10 Jul 2006
Just wanted to say I read your story and ohh... this is fun! I love how you write Kagome and how you've had her powers grow looks like it's going to be fascinating! :-)

45cats- Tue 20 Jun 2006
I am enjoying your story. Yes, Sesshoumaru is a little out of character. He does that sometimes. It's not really a big deal.

Anywho, I'm looking forward to your next update. ^_^

Hanoi- Tue 20 Jun 2006
Absolutely wonderful and I can actually relate to Kagome -especially in the later chapters- as I work with elements and energy as well.

Excellently writen and I'm loving the character development!

Keep up the good work and I REALLY hope you put out the next chapter soon...like now soon!

serenitymoon- Tue 20 Jun 2006
love it and cant wait for more!

Leather_Wings- Tue 20 Jun 2006
I love your story, and was SO EXCITED to see that you'd updated! I look forward to the next chapter! *imagines literal sparks flying Sessy and Kags* Heehee... dominant roles are being reversed!

Yay! Best wishes!
-Leather Wings

sasori- Tue 20 Jun 2006
Domo arigato gozaimasu, artemis-chan!

Crimson Queen- Tue 20 Jun 2006
Me and Sesshoumaru have something in commen in this fiction, both our elements is air. YAY!! lol
I have this book that tell you what element you are, and your stone, Color, etc. stuff like that.
and i'm an Air Element.

anyway, Glad to see you update it this fiction, I thought u forgot about it, I almost forgot some things that happen, but i skimmed throught it before i read the update it chapter. I Loved it, Its getting Good, and Ineteresting, I just wanna keep reading. and I loved the last part in the chapter before, where Kagome kissed him to show what it means. I just can't wait to read more of your Fiction, Its really interesting about all the elements.

Keep it up, and hope to see an update Soon

~~InuSusu-Sama~~

liz- Mon 19 Jun 2006
Hey i really enjoyed ur fic so far and hope u keep going. I like how Kags is finally maturing in her power and feelings. Sess seems very in character too. e-mail if u update k? I hope u keep going- you've got a great beginning

Flightoffancy- Sun 18 Jun 2006
I found this to be a very "grab your interest" story right away. I found this on Annual Awards list and I am very impressed with how organized the story is without seeming to be. Its like listening to the old story tellers.

I like the way Sesshomaru is curious and Kagome is maturing in her thoughts and actions. This story is spicy and thoughtful and just a little bit edgy. I mean she doesn't hesitate to throw him across the field and that was cool. By the same token, she also does not hesitate to welcome him back for a little conversation.

If you can't tell, I really liked this story and hope to read more of this one and I am going to look up your others.

Thanks for the great read. Til next time, Deb.

Dixie- Fri 02 Jun 2006
I can just see K and S having interactions like this. I hope you keep writing I would love to see more.

Crescent Dreams- Wed 24 May 2006
Oo---oh. I like it a lot. You've got a magnificent way with words, and Kagome seems to have really matured in the sense that she's not a little school girl any more.

I'm even suprised that you had Sesshoumaru attempt at Kagome's life, most other authors wouldn't have done that, and I congratulate you for being original. Great work.

I've got no idea when you last updated this story, but I found it through the Anual Awards, and they've been up since the end of April, begining of May, I think. So update soon, I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.

Always -
Crescent.

Eternity of Tears- Mon 15 May 2006
Wow. I love your first three chapters. great job. I can't wait until an update! could you e-mail me when you update?
Please and thank you?!?!!?

lol.
_eternityoftears_

angie- Mon 08 May 2006
oh for the love of kami-sama please update you are a wonderful writer and you portray the charecters well sesshoumaru is a hard charecter to write simply due to the fact that we dont see him often enought but you have written him well keep writing and if you ever need a beta hit me up and I see what I can do

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