I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

WHAT?? It was just getting good!! *sobs* Say it ain't so!! WTF? What kind of inspiration do you need? A movie? A video game? What system do you have? *runs into little brother's room to steal game cartriges - begins throwing strategy guides & cases everywhere*

NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I"M SOOOOOO interested! Please! write!
It's really good so far! At least try one more chapter!

I wish you wouldn't quite this story would be a big hit. It sounded so fantastic, that I was on the tip of my toes. But keep up the good work.