| This is a lovely poem. Athough I think that the metre is slightly jarring in places, I think you've conveyed the dark beauty of his killing perfection in the words themselves. An exceptional piece, Kimi-ga-Warui-Tenshi.
Sahara- Sun 23 Jul 2006
| This is a lovely poem. Athough I think that the metre is slightly jarring in places, I think you've conveyed the dark beauty of his killing perfection in the words themselves. An exceptional piece, Kimi-ga-Warui-Tenshi.
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